TwiNj2S:Tu Hi Mera rab Hai For Jenelle di 16.3.16 Pt1Pg1 - Page 4

Originally posted by: --Jenelle--

omg, Bhai... suberb writing😊 update soon...

Yuvi😡 How much more can this bas***d do?poor poor Twinkle. omg the photographs😲

Originally posted by: Anisha-k.

FANTASTIC BHAI!!! LOVED IT TO THE CORE!❤️

Yeh yuvi ko toh mein nahi chorunga...how i wish he was here i wud have strangled him to death!!!😡

I feel so sorry for Twinkle n kunj...i just want Yuvi to be beatewn BLANK N BLUE!!!😡

BTW thanks a lot for PM!🤗

And plzzz update the nxt part soonish😳

Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva

Plz update soon...

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

I didn't like it bcoz of the plot.

I hate such men. Cheapster. Bc log.

Nyways uh ignited anger in me so obviously uh wrote it in a convincing manner

Show yuvi his aukat.

Originally posted by: princessjoey25

update fast...Eagerly waiting...

Originally posted by: SIDMIN

Next part asap please hridey...!!😊

Originally posted by: ananya925

I'm stunned... Hriddey that was really very intense.
UV has no bloody limits. He stooped so low?
This is one of the best pieces written by you.
Hats off my friend. I really really felt bad for twinkle, being a girl it hurted a lot more.
I hope kunj save her. And dumbo mahi proved her dumbness here also. If only mahi would have told kunj, this scenario would have never taken place.
But I totally love the way twinkle was trying to stay strong in front of UV although she was broken inside.
Hriddey seriously this story touched my heart.
Please update asap.

Originally posted by: princessjoey25

It was just awesome ...👏 i mean ur writing skills...

Pls update...

Originally posted by: Pilu05

Haa ...too dangerous but awesome

Hope all well in next part

Kunj find out Twinkle and Yuvi ko phir se jor ka jhata ka jorr se lage

Originally posted by: teddyyy

Hridey I LOVE tragic stories with happy endings and so I'm strong when I comes to reading angst and they blow me away but damn man you made me cry today lol! Movies and shows move me to the point of tears but it takes a lot for written pieces too I think and so this is big. Yuvraj is so disgusting and I cannot like the way you incorporated the client thing and the money i was shocked. I think spitting on someone is so disrespectful but I have never wanted to more in my life than now. He freaking binds her physically and then takes advantage of her so roughly ugh I hate him. He could restrain her physically but not emotionally- she may be broken and damaged but she won't let him see it! I love Twinkle, she knows that Kunj will come for her, he will save her eventually and I hope we see both Kunj AND twinkle hurting him. The whole client list sending money thing actually broke my heart and I hope Kunj and Mahi help her soon because omg my poor Twinkle.

As always, so beautifully written and compeltely engaging! Loved this piece Yaar, looking forwards to the next!