TwiNj2S:Tu Hi Mera rab Hai For Jenelle di 16.3.16 Pt1Pg1 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Hridey I LOVE tragic stories with happy endings and so I'm strong when I comes to reading angst and they blow me away but damn man you made me cry today lol! Movies and shows move me to the point of tears but it takes a lot for written pieces too I think and so this is big. Yuvraj is so disgusting and I cannot like the way you incorporated the client thing and the money i was shocked. I think spitting on someone is so disrespectful but I have never wanted to more in my life than now. He freaking binds her physically and then takes advantage of her so roughly ugh I hate him. He could restrain her physically but not emotionally- she may be broken and damaged but she won't let him see it! I love Twinkle, she knows that Kunj will come for her, he will save her eventually and I hope we see both Kunj AND twinkle hurting him. The whole client list sending money thing actually broke my heart and I hope Kunj and Mahi help her soon because omg my poor Twinkle.

As always, so beautifully written and compeltely engaging! Loved this piece Yaar, looking forwards to the next!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: hailly

Ah poor Twinkle 😭 Hope Kunj saves her soon. I want Yuvi to suffer a lot for what he did to Twinkle. 😡 😡

I kne yuvi will suffer for his deeds😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: SweetSau

I hate yuvi!!

How could he do such a thing!!!
But nice story.
Poor twinkle!
Kunj jaldi jaakar usse bacha lo aur phir make hell rain down on that uvi!!!
Update soon

Kunj will save her soon,And yuvi will rot in helll🤣

WIll try to update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

awesome part Hridey. brilliantly written and very exciting. cant wait to read more

Thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: amlavs

Omg...poor twinkle...how can uv do likes this???

Very brilliantly written..
Hope kunj ll save her on time...

Thank you soo much!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy

Awesome one Hrideyy!!! 👍🏼

Waiting for the next part!!!

Thank you shirisha!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

Hridey I feel like I say this each time but you really outdid yourself with this one! It was written so well! It was hard to read this without wincing in pain for twinkle, poor twinkle and you honestly wrote this so well!!

Thank you sooo much Shakti🤗
Even I didnt wanted to go this much extremem but ho gya😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Poor Twinkle
Brilliant update 👍🏼
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM

Thank you soo much😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Tranquility123

This was so disturbing. As much as these kind of ideas have entered my mind, I've never been able to put it down on paper so great job for taking such a bold step 👏

Coming to the story, my heart goes out to Twinkle. It's traumatising enough that she had to go through that but it's even more disgusting that the family had to view photographs of her. Yuvraj Luthra is one sick bast*ard.

looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Yuvraj is a F**kinh bas***d😡
You know I ddint wanted to write it but I had too,this idea was bot going oit of my mind

Thank you soo much@

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