Zindagi na milegi dobara-Fan Fiction_ - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Hey Maisarah di...loved it!
Amazing...Awww the fight 😆(burgers are my fav)😉
Di...ummm actually i was wondering if u cud PM me!😳(only if possible)
Continue soon di!😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow dear it's amazing lovely concept 😳
The update was lovely and hillarious for the canteen part 😆😆
Plz continue soon 😳.. p.m. me whenever done plz 😳
And why will you stop just like this 😲 it's awesome story 😳
As Jerry mentioned earlier , you.just edit your 1st main post and name it as twinj ff : ZNMD ..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnks fr liking it ... I ll be there with a longer part tonight
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnks fr ur comments 😃
Here i go with the second part ... Hope you will like it ...

Part 2:-
As the principal entered dhruv , amu, pia,kunj ,yuvi, twinky all of thm were orderd to wash all the plates and glasses of canteen and sweep it cleanly so tht the principal doesnt need any mirror to look his tiger type face ...

Amaya: Aggghhh...
You idiot , yeh sab tmhare waja se hua ...
Dhruv started making face on her...
As twinkle got a reflection of another severe fight ... She spoke
Twinkle : okay guys look i m vry sorry on behalf of my sis and frnds ... Lets just stop it over here ...
Amu say sorry to him ... She pointed to dhruv
Amu: Sorrryy ... Galti ho gayi
Dhruv: I m sry too ... Maine bhi kuch jyada kar di ...
Kunj who was scilenly watching twinkle finally said
Kunj : Yeh hui na bath ... By the way lets seat and hve a formal intro
Everyone sat ordering cold drinks and chips...
Meanwhile misha also joined ...
Amu gave her a terrifying look ...
Dhruv: well i m dhruv ... Dhruv Sarna ... We shifted in amritsar closely to one week..
Twinkle: thts gd.. Bty i m twinkle taneja ...
Pointing misha shes said its my younger sis misha ...
Misha nodded her head ...
Amaya: I m Amaya Mathur ... Twinkle's cos...
Yuvraj: myself yuvraj luthra... U all can call me by yuvi ...
Pia: Hi its Piyashri ... Piyashri Dobriyal ...
Nw there was only one person left ...
Twinkle: Aur tum???
Kunj: Well I m kunj ... Kunj Sarna ...
Dhruvs younger bro ...
They all had funny chitchats and after tht all went to obey their profs order ...

Kunj:Hey twinkle...
Twinkle:Ha kunj bolo
Kunj :Actually aaj humari ghar mein ek party hai... Just to be familiar with peple in amritsar ...
So i ...
Dhruv interrupted
Dhruv:We ll be glad if u all come ...
Twinkle and amu: grt ...
Amaya:We ll love to come ...
Everyone said goodbye to each other and went their home ...
Amu, pia,misha,twinkle went to taneja mansion ... Reaching there they get to knw their full F*Ly was officially invited to sarnas party as sarnas are their fam frnds ...
All were excited ... Chinky also came ...
All the girls were decidng wht to wear ...
Amaya: I was wondering , woh dhruv aur kunj dono brthrs kitna cute hai na??
Pia:Ha ... I wanted to squeeze their cheeks ...
Twinkle: kunj ki ankhen notice ki tune??? Tht was blue.. it suited him ... Aur dhrhv ka hairstyle use bht suit krta hai ... Nahi ?
Evryone nodded their head ...
Misha: Woh yuvi ka chehra na dekhne me thora villain jaisa ha... Lyk hoppp ... She pouted
Chinky: mish tune to meri mu ke bat chinli ...
Everyone started laughing ...

Kunj and Dhruv were thinking wht to wear ... Yuvi also joined thm ...
Kunj choose blue and dhruv black
Yuvi was in white ...
All the boys looked crazily handsome ...
Kunj abd dhruv were thinkng abt the grls ...

Twinkle was in a black anarkali ... Her hair was free and straighted ... She wore a ball round top earring ...
She was lkng marvelous...
Amaya was in a salwar suit which was combinated with pink and golden ... She was lkng gorgeous as always ...
Leela was running after misha to make her wear a girly dress bt misha she just doesnt care ... She would wear wht she always wears ...
Misha:papa dkho na , mamma mjge barbie doll banana chahti hai ...
Rt:Leela kuyn use force krrhi ho ... Let my cham be wht she is ...
Leela:Apki lad pyaar ne bigar ke rakha hai tino behnoko ...
Misha: Aab un dono ko bhi kuyn ghasitrahi ho mom...
Leela:Chp kar ... Badtameez ...
Chinky was wearing red ... She was simply beautifull as always...
Pia was in a brown dress ... Curled hair made her look ravishing ...
All the girls came down ...
Leela:Hayeee, mere 6 betiyaan kitni pyaari lag rhi hai ... Kisi ki nzr na lage ...

They started fr sarna mansion ... Not so far as they are next door neighbours ...

Precape: all the boys's mouth was o shaped ... Kunj and dhruv kept staring at twinky and amu ...
Misha was busy in drinking ... Chinky and pia was exploring the mansion ...
So there is the sec prt ... Let me knw hw it was ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Was a very fantastic update 😃
aWesome story 😳
Plz continue soon 😛😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
It was FAB api!!!👏😃😳
Loved it to the core!❤️
Update the part soon di...n put some romance too!!! heheh...greedy me!☺️😆
Btw thanks a lot for PM!😊
And sorry for commenting late api!😳

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