TS : KAHANI TASHAN KA,DASTAAN PYAAR KI part 4B updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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HEY GUYS ,

After reading the wonderful os,ts n ss by many creative writers, even I feel like writing one...been mulling over it for a few days and finally decided to write one. do bear with me as this is my 2nd attempt at an Ts ,1st one being on manan of ky2 ( couldn't complete it due to my immense workload as m a b.arch student... also the show got over as well ) but nw twinj have inspired me to write another.

please please please do comment and like on it as it will be on this basis I will decide whether to continue or not.

this ss is a continuation of yesterday's episode based on twinkle s re-entry

in sarna house. I'll be starting from the scene where the lawyer reads the will and leaves the house.

HERE IT GOES...

KAHAANI TASHAN KA , DASTAAN PYAAR KI

After lawyer leaves the house , Twinkle too follow suit.

In sarna house.

Usha : Main yeh baat bilkul nehi manti...twinkle iss ghar me nehi rahegi

bebe : Usha rani ! nu hai woh tera aur yeh faisal monu ka hai tum aise taal nehi sakte

Usha : Bebe.. maine aap ke har baat maani hai par yeh main nehi manugi... aaj mere pati iss haal main hai toh woh sirf aur sirf iss manhoos ladki ki wajah se hai aur aise ladki ko main apne pati ke business sambhalne nehi denge...

Meanwhile in sarna house

Leela : ( shocked ) Kya keh rahi ho tum ? manohar ji ne tumhe unke business saup di ?? aur woh bhi nayi nayi wali?? par kyu ??

Twinkle : (tensed ) pata nehi maa... mujeh toh business ki abc tak nehi maloom.. papaji ne kya soch ke yeh faisla li hai ... bilkul bhi andaaza nehi hai

Leela : (smiling ) wahe guru bhi naa... unke khel humesha nirale hote hain...jab sab saare darwaaze band ho jaate to woh koi aur darvaaza khol hi deta hai..mainu lagta hai manohar ji ka yeh faisla woh darvaza hai jo tumhe aur kunj se mila sakta hai..

Twinkle : par maa... mujeh toh business ke bare me kuch nehi pata

Leela : (smiling ) areh tu tension kyun le rahi ho ? main hoon na tere vaaste ... sab sikha dungi main

Twinkle : (smiles) thxx maa... (hugs her)
3 days later...
The entire sarna family with the exception of manohar was at the dining for breakfast when suddenly they hear the sound of dhols.all look at each other in confusion and get up to find the source of commotion only to find twinkle walking in full attitude wearing her usual anarkali and shades.kunj couldn't help the smile which cropped up on his face seeing her alag andaaz of dressing but the smile vanished at the same speed with which it came on remembering his dad.
cherry was the first to come out the shock.
cherry : oye good for nothing...yeh poore band baaja baraat hai yahaan pe...kisi ke shaadi hone wali hai kya ??
Anita and Bebe in unison : chup kar cherry !! ( who looks at the duo in shock )
usha ( in anger ) : tumhaari himmat kaise hui yahaan aane ki ... mere mana karne ke baavajoot tum wapas aayi ?? sharam naam ki cheez hi nehi hai kya ??
(Goes to slap her )
Before kunj could intervene, Twinkle holds her hand and brings it down.
Twinkle : ( sarcastically ) haww Mummy ji !!yeh toh bahot galat baat hai ... koi itni pyaari nu ko aise thappad marti hai kya ?? tsh tsh...very bad very bad... Aisa koi karta hai kya aur khas kar tab jab ki unki nu 70% stakeholder hai business me ??
The entire family stares in shock at her attitude.
howzz it guys ?? plz plz do comment...


Part 1 - pg1
Part 2 - pg2
Part 3 - pg3
Part 4A - pg4
Part 4B - pg5
Edited by kusiya - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow dear nice
interesting
continue soon dear
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nice one. interesting. pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's just lovely and fabulous 😳
Plz do continue soon 😳and p.m. me whenever done 😃😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesome start dear
interesting concept
plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very interesting
love the sherni inside of her

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow loved this new plot!!!
Twinkle's new attitude...mmm interesting
Continue soon di...plzz PM me,only if possible for u!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its amazing!
Very interesting do continue soonish!
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Loved it
RrLly interesting
Looking forward to read more

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