Memories - TWINJ FF new part Page 52! - Page 33

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Ress

I'm second!

Now rushing to read!

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Di this was wonderful!

I know I have very very rarely commented on your stories but I was always almost one of the first people to read the updates once you posted them! I am very very sorry for not commenting then.

The way you write all the feelings if both Twinkle and kunj! The anguish, the pain, the heartbreak experienced by Twinkle were bang on in all the updates! The feeling of regret, guilt felt by Kunj of not trusting his best friend and not reaching out to Twinkle was expressed so perfectly. Him keeping all the memories of Twinkle soo carefully and Twinkle writing out and expressing herself to her dairy treasuring all the memories in her heart I loved it.

In today's update god what to say!!

The words said by Twinkle in red

"Ever felt so broken that you thought you can't be fixed ...ever felt like this was your end but you kept breathing..ever felt so hurt that no one... and no thing could give you peace...ever felt so broken that no matter how many times you tried...you couldn't put yourself back together? "

" ever felt like you gave your everything to someone and yet somehow you were not enough ?..ever felt so stuck that no matter how many days... passed by...you felt same every morning...ever felt like you were crawling through life...?"

These words just made me cry!! They expressed soo many feelings. I could relate to them completely. I felt as if it was me saying all that!!

The hurt and pain and regret that you showed in Kunj's was also something that I felt!!

Girl whatever you write you just make the words come alive and they express the feelings you want to portray soo perfectly that a person feels like they are watching it experiencing everything.

This update was wonderful! And I seriously really loved it!

Hope you start new stories after ending your current ones and I won't force you to continue as I'm sure that the ending you will give would be just and perfect!

Update soon

Lots of love

Sayli

Originally posted by: kusharberry

hey griffy awesome update

i loved it very much

poor twinj i felt sad fro them that sarika ki bachi i will kill her

iam glad twinjs relation is gonna move forward

plzzz do continue soon

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Babe it's so good to see you again! Believe it or not, I had been thinking about this story recently when I was discussing storied with deep meanings with my friends.

The chapter was different because instead of walking away, Twinkle sat down and instead of pleading Kunj realised how he was on the verge of loosing this relationship forever all due to his own mistakes.

The highlight of the chapter was Twinkle's words. So amazing, so beautifully written. I have no words to describe how deep they are. I can just say that it struck the right chords.

Twinke's instant decision to sit down, to give this a chance for she knew she was nothing without his support in her life made it a lot more emotional... Even if I read this after so long, it does not fail to connect to me. You just write it that way :)

And bruh! I am not dropping this story anytime 😉

Originally posted by: griffy.fz

OMG omg

I was waiting for your comment man! I hoped u had not given up on the story

thank u soo soo much for staying on.. I know I kinda disappeared just to hectic times man.. but I am gonna make sure i complete this story.. its too close to my heart man

I had to show .. how far can we rant on hate .. cry..how long can u continue that ?.. there comes a breaking point where u decide do u wanna continue or want to let go.. i wanted to potray that

thanks soo much dear means a lot

love u

griffy

P.S. your siggys are ❤️ ... my next fanfic will be on shivika😉