SS: Unspoken Words (Mature Content) *Updated Part Two (PG1)

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Ok so I'm back with another short story..sorry I know it's been long, I was honoured with the amazing feedback I got for the last story I wrote..you guys are too sweet..let me tell you in advance, I'm still rubbish at writing so overlook the shoddy piece if it sounds dumb!

I was skimming through the forum and was roaming around the 'request for writers' topic and saw a comment by Sherni_Jerry, she had requested me to write a hot OS..so here goes...


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It had been a long week, and I was missing him so much. I hadn't seen him for over two weeks, this business trip he was on had been longer than the others. It was also the first time he left without telling me about it, I was shocked and deeply hurt when Bebe mentioned he had left for Italy on a business trip and was unsure about his return

"Why Kunj?"screamed her inner thoughts

3 weeks ago you told me you love me, trust me and want to give me all the happiness in the world, then why was the moment short lived

Did I do something wrong to Kunj? Say something to hurt him?..her mind raked through every possibility but to no avail she was left clueless..she cried silent tears everyday in thought of him and wished he would call her or talk to her..what sin had she committed for him to give her such a great punishment

She replayed back the incident that took place before he left her, the memory she will cherish for the rest of her life..the exchanged words she wants to hear from him again and again, the moment she wished never ended..as her thoughts drifted to what took place she felt goosebumps springing onto her skin

*3 weeks ago*

"I..Love..You..Twinkle" resounded the words in Twinkles ears, she felt weak in her knees and hugged onto Kunj with all her might, "I love you too Kunj came her silent whisper from against his chest", that night Twinkle received everything she had wished to hear since becoming aware of her feelings for Kunj the past couple of weeks, her mind was in turmoil of whether it was love, duty or care for her husband..but these three words from him confirmed her doubts and accepted it was indeed love she felt for her husband Kunj

She couldn't have wished for a better place to accept their love..Goa the place where their committed mutual married life started..back then it was living by force for family sentiments, today it was because they ached and craved to be together..the place where both faced a lot of problems from her ex lover Yuvi but today they were in this serene place without evil dawning upon them..the beach and horizon witnessing their oath of togetherness..promises and happiness

*Present*

A phone ring made Twinkle snap out of her thoughts..she exhaled as she saw the caller ID, to her disappointment it was Chinki her best friend, not that she didn't want to talk to her, but her heart wished it was a call from who she was hoping for the past couple of weeks..she had tried to contact him on so many occasions but the only reciprocation she got back was from the phone company claiming that the number was no longer in use

She did not want to ask Bebe, daddy-Ji, mummy-Ji or anyone else because she was on the pretence of everything being fine between her and Kunj..she did not want to become the centre of assumptions..especially from her mother-in-law who despised her since her and Kunj got married..she kept silent and awaited Kunj's return..she wanted to ask him so many unanswered questions, she craved to see him, longed to touch him, dreamed about him day and night and would wake up sweating knowing he wasn't there beside her and the reason behind that was unknown to her

"Why weren't you answering your phone" chirped Chinki "is everything okay, Twinkle?"
She was the only person Twinkle had shared everything with, Chinki would reassure and enlighten her hope everyday since Kunj went, she knew twinkle was broken but the only thing that was keeping her alive was her love for Kunj, she would hear Twinkle cry over the phone each time she spoke to her and like always Chinki would repeat the same thing to her

"Trust me Twinkle, he would never leave you like that, there must be a really big reason, he may be doing this for you..he wants to give you the happiness you yearn for and to fulfil that he has gone to expand his business so that he can return and surprise you"

"How could he leave without saying a goodbye?, does he not care about my feelings?, as a wife I have a right to an explanation and if he loves me he would never hurt me this way" came a muffled reply from Twinkle

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*Somewhere in Italy*

I hate her, how could she do this to me?, she played with my love and for that I will never forgive her..why Twinkle why?..he slammed his fist against the wall of his hotel room..he had to be away from her, if he stayed even after knowing she played with his emotions her eyes would melt him with love and overpower the hatred he felt for her

It had been 3 weeks since Kunj decided to move out of her life..for him these 3 weeks felt like a life time, he craved to see her..hold her..make love to her, but he was adamant on punishing her for the hurt she had given him

He lied to his family for her..something she didn't deserve, he wanted her to be exposed in front of everyone..but something was holding him back and he was unsure of what that was

He told everyone he had to urgently attend a business associated concern in Italy..he lied that his branch in Italy was facing problems and he had to fly out of India to handle the branch and will return once everything was sorted out..he changed his phone number just so that he didn't have to hear her voice crying fake tears yearning for him, his fathom of hatred was on edge and she no longer was held as an importance for him

His sole reason of being in Italy was Twinkle and not the suffering of his business, he had to go far way from her, his trust was crushed..his love was disgustingly played with and his emotions were tampered with her unwavering sentiments..he once lived for her and now he was ready to give pain to her..his anger outshone his love for her but something was still irking Kunj, his mind said one thing and his heart another

Why couldn't he forget her?
Why did she matter so much to him?
Why couldn't he get through the day without her on his mind every second?

The sound of shattering glass was heard across the room, blood dripping from his finger cut by the glass..the pain from it was nothing compared to the pain he felt in his heart for giving Twinkle

As night dawned in Italy..Kunj slept a sleepless sleep like every night, his thoughts would run wild with Twinkle clouding his mind, each night he would fantasise about his desire for Twinkle, he tried his hardest to rid of such thoughts but it was all vain

He would spasm when thinking about her, he wanted her so badly, he remembered the night of their love confession and how he and Twinkle were going to become one that night..his thoughts turned bitter again when his mind flashed with her betrayal on that night

He clenched his teeth so hard that his nerves hurt..he enclosed his fists ready to punch what comes his way, his anger knew no bounds and the only person to be blamed for his this condition was Twinkle


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That's it for part one guys..leaving it as a cliffhanger..what do you all think Twinkle has done to bring this side of Kunj forth?..apologies if this story is unappealing, I promise to make part two and three marginally better to the best of my abilities

Sherni_Jerry I promise I will do justice to your expectations..the coming parts are going to be hot hot hot..so be ready :))


Ciao


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Apologies for the wait, here goes part two of this short story...

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A cunning laughter and the sound of evilness was taking place in a room of the Sarna family home, two people stood with pride after having caused havoc in Twinkle and Kunj's life, they destroyed the peace of two beautiful lovers and we're now rejoicing their triumph

"We did it".."My Kunj is now rid of that characterless girl, did she think she could snatch my son away from me and live a happy life".." Our plan worked, that girl now knows her true place, my son will never return to her now..especially after what he thinks she has done" laughed the lady

"Aunty your plan was fantastic, when you told me Kunj had gone for a run that evening and Twinkle was asleep, I knew exactly what to to, I picked her up and bought her to my room, placed her on my bed and put ourselves in a compromising position..I knew exactly that as soon as Kunj would come back from his run he would find Twinkle missing and search the house for her until he found her"

The lady spoke "Yes son, because Kunj knows Yuvi is also in this house and with him here she is not safe, Kunj is so protective of her so using you as a bait was easier than Yuvi"

They reminisced how Kunj that day had returned from his evening run and went up to his room, they remembered how his heart skipped a beat to find her missing even after having searched everywhere in the house, how Kunj had hit Yuvi until there was nothing left of him, thinking he had done something to his Twinkle..Yuvi himself was confused and had the slightest idea of where Twinkle was

Kunj re-searched the entire house again and froze at the site he saw in front of him after entering his cousins room..there he saw Twinkle lying on top of him with her skin exposed only covered with a bed sheet hinting towards the happenings between Twinkle and her cousin..he broke into pieces, he felt betrayed, he left the room in silence, he felt his life had been snatched away from him..he walked like a lifeless body out of the house clearly emoting of no return

"Yes..aunty".."I knew it would work, Kunj will never come back for her".." In his eyes she is no longer pure" came a sniggering reply "but one thing I don't understand, how was Twinkle unaware of all that happened?"

"My son, that's because I offered her a glass of Milk that evening, which she happily drank, but little did she know that I mixed something into it..just so that she will wake up not remembering anything, and after Kunj saw her and left we put her back into her room, Twinkle has no idea why Kunj has left her" laughed both

"Now we have to get rid of her from this house, and I know exactly what to do" spoke the lady

As the two people were discussing their next plan of action to harm Twinkle, an unknown person to them was witnessing all this taking place, she was horrified at the fact that her sister-in-law could be this evil, she destroyed the lives of two young lovers who had yet not even explored their love

"How can Usha and Cherry do this to my dear Twinkle, the girl who never did any wrong, the girl who always sacrificed for family and put their needs first, the girl who loves my Kunj with all her heart, I am ashamed" said a disgusted Bebe

Bebe knew that Twinkle would cry herself to sleep at night, but she was on the pretence that maybe Twinkle was missing Kunj, she had the slightest idea that Usha and Cherry were tampering with her life, they succeeded in driving Kunj away from Twinkles life, Bebe cursed herself for not being there when all this took place, her daughter was suffering and she could no longer see Twinkle kill herself bit by bit

Kunj had to be bought back for her daughter who was dying a slow and painful death not knowing why Kunj had left her, Bebe decided that she would go to Italy and find Kunj, she had to do this for Twinkle, Kunj had gone never to be heard from again but she was determined to not leave Italy until she found him

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Sat in his hotel room in Italy occupying himself in a live chat conference with his business colleagues in India, as hard as he tried to concentrate on the chat, one person who was dearest to him once upon a time would just not leave his thoughts..he threw the laptop across the room, he hated himself for thinking about her, why would Twinkle not leave him alone, his mind was being haunted with her thoughts, the memories he wanted to cloud was being thrown back at him

"I WILL stop thinking about you, I WILL forget you..just leave me alone why don't you" seethed Kunj through his teeth

The ringing of the hotel room phone bought him out of his trance "Hello, Mr.Sarna" it was a member of the hotel staff calling from reception informing him of a visitor waiting for him in the lobby

"It can't be her can it?" His heart secretly lightened up at the thought of it being Twinkle..in that moment Kunj forgot about her betrayal and imagined of hugging her, kissing her tears away and holding her to never let go again

Without giving it a second thought he ran out of his hotel room and leaped down the stairs dashing towards the hotel lobby, his eyes searched everywhere for her..he felt a tap on his shoulder, Kunj turned around with the widest smile adorning his face only to be welcomed with a slap from the person standing opposite him

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That's it for part two guys, I think this story is going to be longer than three parts, may be 4-5, my mind is running wild with thoughts, let's see how it pans out..hope you all like this update


Ciao



Edited by -WalkThatWay- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Can't wait to find out what happened. Update soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg this is really good , seriously don't doubt yourself , you're a really talented writer 🤗 I'm intrigued , what could Twinkle have possibly have done that Kunj would move all the way to Italy just to avoid her 😲 Is a certain Yuvi involved ? 😆 I'm looking forward to the next update ! x
Edited by countingstarz - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmgomg

Can't wait to find out what happened. Update soon :)


Will do..hopefully during weekend :)
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Originally posted by: countingstarz

Omg this is really good , seriously don't doubt yourself , you're a really talented writer 🤗 I'm intrigued , what could Twinkle have possibly have done that Kunj would move all the way to Italy just to avoid her 😲 Is a certain Yuvi involved ? 😆 I'm looking forward to the next update ! x


Aww thanks boo..aha could be, let's say it's partially him and someone else..next update coming very soon, early into the weekend :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was good👍🏼 superb actually. Please allow them to make up because I don't like the hatred Kunj has for Twinks.
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Originally posted by: Inkheart

That was good👍🏼 superb actually. Please allow them to make up because I don't like the hatred Kunj has for Twinks.


Never..don't worry, I'm not that harsh..my Kunj loves his Twinkle, he will always travel back to her come what may
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start. Loved it.
Continue soon plz.
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Oops poor kunj😕
Hope this MU bw twinj clears off soon😳
Update soon plz😆😳

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