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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: .Ragini.
Hridey i love you
Amazing story
Made my day
Hayye akhir bhai mera hai. Talented toh hoga. Yes i am hogging all the credit
The way u wrote this story gave me goosebumps. Twinkle's helpless and kunj's pain it was all so beautiful

Lol finally mahi and cherry. Dil khush ho gaya
But seriously this is my fav story
Well done
Ab aur story likho
Make me proud

ragini ji shukriya ,sahi kaha itni achi behn hai toh bhai toh acha joga hi.

Thank you ji😆

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Iansomer1
Wow I'm first
I loved it
For a minute I thought it's gonna be sad ending but I'm so happy k it wasn't
Letter was so heartwrenching

Yuvi rascal number 1
Maahi finally gets some sense lol
But loved twinj through out.
Kunj taking care of her was perfect.
Loved the cute ending a perfect family
Amazing oneshot hriddey

It means alot Ian,I know Letter was my fav. Parts!

Yes yuvi is a rascal😆

And Mahi and Cherry bieng a couple were just a wild idea that I got😆

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: 17.sonal
It started with tears and ended with a big smile on my face,,,,
This story had every emotion possible on this vry earth...
Hridey... it's not jus cute... emotional story. .. but a well written, brilliant piece of work ...
Perfect flow... of emotions..
I am in love we with ur work...
And I eagerly look forward to read ...
Ur name change is kinda confusin sometyms... 😆

It means alot,this is the longest story I have written till now,I mean the longest One-Shot.

Your comments means alot.

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: 3dancelover
Hrideyy that was an emotional rollercoaster I tell you
I thought she expired for a minute, thank god you brought her back
Twinkle and Kunj are perfect together
Seriously awesome job!

At the start I made my mind that I will kill her in this story but I just couldnt bseperate twinj even in a story So I made her go into coma😭

Thank you It means alot.

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: hailly
Awesome os beautifully written.
Loved it. 👏

Thank you😊

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SweetSau

@SweetSau

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

What a wonderful story!!

I normally don't comment but had to on this one!!

It was so interesting and full of emotions!

Really loved it.

All the emotions were portrayed beautifully and I could feel each and every emotion which is not possible for all writers to make their readers feel the emotions!

You truely are a wonderful writer!

I have read all of your stories!

I could feel twinkle's helplessness and kunj's pain.

I at first thought that it would be a sad ending and hence I was going to skip reading the story as I'm a very emotional person. But I had to read on! And I'm glad that I read the full OS!

Really a wonderful piece!

Enjoyed it and loved it a lot.

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drishi

@drishi

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Just made me cry
fabulos story ever 😭

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Beautifully written

Loved it 😳

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Priya

@priyanvs

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

nice os dear

rul la diya 😭

loved it hrideyy

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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.

It means alot,this is the longest story I have written till now,I mean the longest One-Shot.
Your comments means alot.

Thanks to u..🤗

U always come up with such sweet treat evryday...

And u knw its means a lot to us...

Ur such an entertainer...u dnt knww...

Whnever i logged in ..i always hope Hridey must hav uploaded a new OS...

And whn i c its der.. First thing i do before reading is Smile...

U r a Rockstar Bro..😎