HEARTBEAT -TWINJ- FF -Page 44- What is Love? Note page - 49 - Page 21

Originally posted by: fangirl1012

So good:) The way you express their emotions in a simple yet a beautiful way👏

Amazing part Loved it

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing part Loved it

Awww it was so cute the birthday scene I can imagine it

Both there feelings for each other were described wonderfully

Hope they confess soon

Cont soon

O..m..g... M falling for the story.. I read all the update in one shot and within a blink I completed the story so far.. I felt like reading a well depicted novel.. I was so engrossed in the story that couldn't notice no of parts and which part has what..

Since m a medical student I can actually relate to the story.. Its like usual things that happens in CLG..this story is actually close to my heart.. Something like my story except for the past n all.. I can viaualise the scenes going on in particular premises of my clg.. The library the corridor n everything..
Gosh I so loved it.. Really splendid work.. Even my heartbeat paced up..

Very well written buddy.. Plz update soon..if possible do pm me abt the updat..
U always leave it at cliffhanger..
Amazing

Amazing update

Originally posted by: docritu99

O..m..g... M falling for the story.. I read all the update in one shot and within a blink I completed the story so far.. I felt like reading a well depicted novel.. I was so engrossed in the story that couldn't notice no of parts and which part has what..

Since m a medical student I can actually relate to the story.. Its like usual things that happens in CLG..this story is actually close to my heart.. Something like my story except for the past n all.. I can viaualise the scenes going on in particular premises of my clg.. The library the corridor n everything..
Gosh I so loved it.. Really splendid work.. Even my heartbeat paced up..

Very well written buddy.. Plz update soon..if possible do pm me abt the updat..
U always leave it at cliffhanger..
Amazing

Originally posted by: 3dancelover

Amazing update

loving the progression between Twinj

thank you for the PM and continue soon

Originally posted by: 17.sonal

Hello Der...

I am.Srsly Short Of Words,..

And I am Apologizing from the Bottom of my Heart tht I din comment earlier... sorry for Walking In late... But i read all the Updates in one Go... Please dnt mind i am Having Issues with My Tashan E Ishq Forum Page.. I do not get Recent Updates...

All said.. Coming to Ur FF...

Wat a Beautiful Piece of Work U been writing my dear..

Being A Medico..i Cud Truly connect to Twinkle... Nerds R Exactly the same... They Take A Straight Face Every wer but Keep doing Happy Dance Inside... 😆😆 Atleast I Did..

The Way U r Portraying the Sweet Love Of Both Of Thmm..with each and evry Inch of Feeling Tht they R feeling coz of each other Is Commendable...

And Again Ur color coding.. Awesome...

Dhruv as A Best Friend... Yes Ppl do Mix up Friendship for Love.. And It happens with Many of us... Its Totally Relatable... But U knw God always Hav a Plan B ... And Its Always Said.." Plan B Always Works.. "...😉

Twinke and Kunj r Destined... Thts the Fact.. past B it anything..

Love can Happen Many Tyms.. If u hav A Pure Heart With Pinch of Forgiveness in it..

Thank You for this Wonderful World If HeartBeat.. !!!

Looking forward for the next part..

Please Continue sooner..

Hugss.. 🤗

Hi, lovely story! Really enjoying reading it. You write so well, it's so interesting I'm hooked! :)