TWINJ FF! OOPS!!! I SLAPPED...MR BILLIONAIRE!??(ch 6 uptd pg 9)

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WRITJTA

@WRITJTA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac
Hey Adrija! Well I just read all parts in one go... Honestly once I started reading I couldn't stop myself... This story is extra good.. This different Kunj and Twinkle you brought! I love them as much as I love the originals (Ok haha, I go for a little sweeter Kunj 😉)
The way you described each and every thing.. Twinkle's frustration was amazing... She slapped him! The way Kunj is up for revenge! Oh I am enjoying this so much... The latest part left me in question though... Secret person eh? How does he even know though? Continue soon cause I can't wait in suspense for long... Anyways, all the best for your exam, though I think only a few boards exams are left

Thank you very much for commenting. I hope you keep reading and sharing. Just between you and me, my character Kunj definitely has a sweet side but there is a catch too. And our twinkle really does have skeletons in her closet. Stay tuned for what happens next.

I love your feedback. Hoping to look from you more in the future

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Priya

@priyanvs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: WRITJTA

Thank you very much. Please keep commenting. I love your feedback.
Btw Happiest birthday and holi to you

i will do for sure

happy holi

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Inkheart

@ChrissyA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: WRITJTA

I will try to update asap.
Meanwhile tell me what was your favourite part and dialogue uptill now

I love Twinkle's thoughts they are very humorous. Also the part where she said I'll chop off your balls, mince them up and feed it to your dogs🤣🤣🤣

Lol, she needs to wash her mouth out with lots of detergent. I wonder how Kunj will put up with her now. Btw, please don't Twinkle receive all the torture, I wanna see her torture Kunj too.

P.S. good luck on your exams. Mine start on April 4 then another set starts in May.

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Duumps

@Duumps

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hi Adrija , awesome Updates.

Just completed reading the last 2 parts they are superb.

Can't wait for what happens next.

Please update soon.

Edited by Duumps - 9 years ago

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adinats07

@adinats07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Nice story.. waiting for the next part please...

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lavanya

@amlavs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Read it In one go...

My god how I missed it earlier..

Luved it...

Kunj's revenge... Omg...Lved this twinkle..

Plz update soon...

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Komal1298

@Komal1298

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Hey m waiting fr the update soon plzzz..

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Auritrika Ashraf

@Bobsysprincess

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Its awesomeee dude ...
I lovd all the parts ...
Bt u always delay to updaye next part ...
Waited me long
Bt i totally loved the ff ...
Pls update the next part bit longer nd sooonnnyyy...