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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
u r the best
great update
plz continue
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Amazing update!
Loved this!
Back 2 back updates like this is just amazing!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haaye lovely update .. do continue soon 😳
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Chapter 20
Haldi was a quick ritual on both sides. With Kunj and Twinkle stealing glances. The neighbourhood aunties teased Kunj and kept touching him on pretext of blessing him and applying haldi. Twinkle laughed in her head seeing the expressions on his face but she also complained herself 'Itni bhi kya haldi lagana'
. She saw chinkki and her other friends take selfies with him and eyeing her showing a thumbs down sticking their tounge out. Kunj was all embaressed with all her saalis around.

Her yellow saree and the rest of her body covered with haldi made her look eternal. He remembred how she got surprised on his remark while leaving the room he had no intensions but still he liked teasing her and also in his heart he knew that she was indeed beautiful .. after all one cannot become Miss Amritsar if they dont have the charm. He could not believe that he was getting married to one of the celebrities of the city. Of course he was no less he too was a famous businessman... of course she dint know about his achievements and his fame around. Of course she was never interested in knowing what he did and all and that made his heart satisfied that She was never interested in his money... first it was bcoz of avoiding this marriage and Yuvi and but now also agreeing to this marriage she never inquired him about how would her life be after marriage... or any material demands ...there was a time when he was ready to marry Alisha over her and considred her not worthy. But now the dynamics have changed Alisha was the gold digger and... she was not even comparable to Twinkle. Her conditions reflected what she expected from him...and if some1 expects something they are bound to return it themselves which assured him that she too was on the same page as him.
"Acha toa hum chalte hai Leelaji... kal sham k sangeet k liye Sarna house me hum aapka intezaar karenge" manohar spoke as the rasams comleted.
"Janti hu Jeeju ki mushkil hai aapke liye humari Twinkle se dur rehna mushkil hai par dont worry bas ek raat ki baat hai, kall vapas jitna dekhna ho dekh lena jee bhar k",chinki said teasing Kunj and Twinkle... In reaction twinkle applied haldi on her face and dress
"Bhot has rhi thi na Chinki ab has".twinkle spoke
.."vaaah bhai vaah chingari mene yaha bhadkayi aur aag kahi aur lagi,,"nd every1 burst into laughter.

The next day went by in a hurry inspite of constant nudging by his badima Kunj went to office for some quick meetings he promised he'd be there by 2PM. Here he was about to get married in one day and why does he feel so normal as it was bound to happen' he thought. Just then Akash enetered his cabin
"Sir ek problem ho gyi hai"
"Kya?, m in a hurry akash its got to be something imp"
Akash without wasting any time showed him the reports, Kunj was a bit surprised but he knew that this was going to happen.
"Sarna empire k shares pichle ek mahine se niche girte jaa rahe hai...Sir aapko Mr Sarna se baat karni hogi, agar baki board k members ne support le liya toa kuch bhi ho sakta hai"
"Yeah Akash dont worry ill handle it..."Kunj sighed as he got another matter to look into..
He reached by 3PM the tanejas had arrived already as they were going to get ready at his place... he dint understand why but he let it go... Manohar opened two guest rooms that were on the ground floor... Kunj dint understand what ws the hurry ,,the function dint started before 7 and all were running like they'd miss the train.
There were people around just the way they were at tanejas during the haldi preparations. he freshened up and headed downstairs and he saw her in the living area playing carrom with the kids. His eyes were only on the smile on the kids faces they were enjoying with her.
He headed for kitchen to have some milk as he was feeling hungry and there was no one around to make him something to eat.
She felt thirsty and found the jug in the living area table empty she already knew where the kitchen was.
Just as she was about to enter she saw him... 'ye kab aya... ye toa office me tha na.. ghar me ate hur toa dikha hi nahi...' she thought that she would enter after he left just to avoid the conversation ,,after all ...they dint converse after their talk on the conditions and the way he whispered in her ears... even remembering it made her feel a tug...
she saw him remove a packet of milk and cut it with a scissor nearby. He poured it in a vessel and started heating it he added ginger and masala and some tea and sugar.. yes he was making some tea.. she was impressed as he did it all like a professional as the tea was heating she saw him take out brown bread and placed them in a toaster. As the breads popped out he turned off the gas and the toaster switch... he applied some butter and poured in the tea...
"Twinkle tu yaha khadi khadi kya kar rahi hai " usha spoke from behind of her...



"Bhot khusiya manai jaa rahi hai na,, koi baat nahi bhot jald ye haste hue chehro pe gum ka badal chaye hue honge...,, mera maksat toa badla lena tha Twinkle... ab tumne thaan hi li hai ki us Kunj se shadi karogi toa yahi sahi..."Yuvi said it out eyeing the decorated Sarna house from the street...just then he got a call
"Hello"
"Mr Yuvraj aapne jaisa kaha tha vaisa ho gya hai... Parso tak papers aapke hath me honge"
Yuvi cut the call with a smirk on his face...and rode away on his bike.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
nice update
😃
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Was an amzing n beautiful update dear 😃
Pm continue soon 😳😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 21

She was startled by Ushas sudden question before she could reply Usha saw in her direction and taunted "abhi ghar me kadam rakha nahi ki pati se kaam karvana shuru, shadi hogi uske bad kya hoga 'huhhh"
Such a remark was least expected by her but twinkle thought of not back answering her as it would just heat up the moment and spoil her day after all just two days and she was going to live in this house.
"Vahi toa badima ab tak shadi hui nhi ki aap typical saas ki tarah twinkle se behav karne lagi...kamse kam officially shadi toa ho jane dijiye" He threw back at Usha... his attention was grabbed only when Usha taunted Twinkle and he just realised how did it looked like to her and Twinkle was totally unaware of her badimas ways... so he jumped in...
"Rahi baat Twinkle ke mujse kaam karvane ki me yaha khud aya tha Twinkle se pehle chai banane aur vo kab ayi muje pata bhi nahi... ab muje bhukh lagi thi toa khud hi banani padi kyuki apko kehta toa aap kisi naukar ko kuch banane keh deti"
Usha left with a disappointed look.
Did he just took her side for once she would have accepted that Usha was taunting her as she had sensed the disagreeing look on her face from the very begining of this marriage but Kunj took her side that too infront of his family... yeah she knew they all were not very close but still it felt good she dint know why...
"Vo me bas pani lene ayi thi..."she reasoned out why she was here...
She saw Kunj taking out one more cup and pouring half of his tea in it... he gestured her to sit on a chair near the dining table.
"Nhi kunj iski koi zarurat nahi hai... me bas Pani"
"Itna formal hone ki zarurat nahi hai Twinkle mene cup me dal di hai chaii ab peene toa padegi... aur dont worry me itni buri bhi nahi banata"
There were bells ringing in her head 'yeh kya ho raha hai... they were supposed to fight always that was so much easier.. and him being all sweet was making it so much harder,' she hesitantly sat on the chair and he made himself comfortable on the kitchen platform just in front of her. They two were getting married and here they were sitting casually and having tea... thinking about it Twinkle chuckled a bit.
"Kya hua...?"
"Kuch nahi"...and she sipped the tea... oh godd... she was never a fan of this beverage for her it was always chocolate milkshakes and juices... but This tea... she never thought that a tea could be so delicious it felt as it went down her neck its aroma spreading in her body and waking up the sleeping muscles and enlightening the brain... damn this tea was good she thought staring at the brownish liquid in her cup that was when she realised what all those ads about '''taaza ho le''' and all meant...
"Kya hua achi nahi hai kya"
"Achi hai... bhot..."itni tarif karungi toa asman pe chadh jayega...she thought..
"I mean thik thi"...when he was about to give her bread she refused "tumhi ne abhi kaha badima se ki tumko bhukh lagi hai... kha lo tum...muje nahi khana"
He smiled at her gesture...
He took the empty cup from her hand and placed it near the sink..""".would he be like this only after marriage,,,a gentleman""" or this was just the calmnes before the storm... as she was pouring water in the jug she could not control to ask
"Kunj tumne chai banana kaha se sikha?"
"Mein chaii banana maa k pet se hi sikh k aya tha" he added mocking her..
"Tumhare jokes kab sudhrenge Kunj... or plz tum mujpe toa try mat karo aise jokes me koi Maya vaya nahi ki impress ho jaungi"
Just then she realised what she blurted out even she dint know from where Maya came... yes she forgot yesterday to ask him why was she answering his phone but she thought of talking about it some other time...
"Mene thik se suna nahi tumne shayad Maya kaha"
"Mene nahi kaha kuch ... tumhare kaan baj rahe hai... "
"Nahi sach mein twinkle Maya kyu sunaii diya mujko"
"Tum khud ko pucho ... kyu sunaii diya ... aksar insaaan pure din jiske bare me sochta hai usko usi ka naam sunaii deta hai...me kisi maya ko nahi janti... tum jante ho toa muje kya pata..."she added the last sentence slightly not looking him into eye..
"Kya batau twinkle tumhe maya k bare mein... Maya toa maya hai... uske jaisa koi nahi...itni beautiful itni smart itni intelligent maya jaisi ladki mene aaj tak nahi dekhi"
She thought she would not be affected but she was wrong..
"Haaan Maya bata rahi thi ki uski tumse baat hui thi jab tumne call kiya tha, matlab tumko toa maya pata hai kon hai"
"Muje koi itna detail me yad nahi rehta...nyways jab tumne yad dila diya toa batao ki vo tmhara phone kyu answer kar rhi thi jab tum office me the..first of all vo tmhari office me kya kr rahi thi."
"Ab vo jiske under job karegi usi k office me hogi na... aur kya hua usne phone answer kar diya toa... vo answer kare me answer karu sab ek hi baat hai" kunj added with a naughty tone...
"Kaise ek baat hai agar kisi ko tumse baat krni ho toa" she dint like the tone of maya working under him that just added to her imaginations of jealousy...
"Jaise tum right"Kunj asked swiftly
"Haan.. nhi ...mera matlab me hi nahi koi imp client ho tmhara usko baat karni ho toa tumse..."
"Vo bhi maya handle kar leti hai..usko sare projects ki briefing rehti hai toa koi bhi cal kare she handles it kaafi intelligent hai na.."
"Vaise aaj sham ko vo aa rahi hai sangeet mein.. kitni request ki tab jaake aa rhi hai.. agar vo nhi ati toa me enjoy kaise karta... actually she is a superb dancer...vo special performance dene vali hai..."
'Itni taarif toa ye sarna khud ki nahi karta jitni us maya ki kar raha hai... Maya this Maya that Maya my foot...' she thought looking away
"Twinkle.." he patted her shoulder... she dint responded avoiding him
"Twinkle.."he again patted a little stronger this time...
"KYA HAI?".she asked turning and looking at him angrily
"Vo jug kab ka bhar gaya hai... paani waste ho rha hai"...he added playfully...
Twinkle quickly stopped the tap and thought 'Kunj sarna tumko chodungi nahi,, babaji aap mere sath hi humesha aisa kyu karte ho'
she looked back at him..
He was walking backwards looking at her ,,whistling he headed to his room...

Edited by joe10 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow nice update
loved it
kunj being naughty 😆was cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a supeb update 😳
Naughty kunj 😆😆
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Chapter 22
It was evening and guests had started to arrive Kunj dressed in all the peacful blue Indo western looked nothing less than a King and of course Twinkle totally complemented him by blue lehnga she did look like a princess..
They both stared taking in each others dresses. Twinkle knew bubbly had specifically selected this outfit of Kunj matching to hers as the grooms clothes were chosen by the brides side...
"Nazar na lage mere dono bacho ko..."leela said with happy tears in her eyes. Twinkle hugged her and Kunj looked at them with a smile.
There were two decoratd chairs in between the hall where they were supposed to sit a stage was set with lights and flowers glittering
"Sath baithna zaruri hai kya" she said to herself only to be heard by him
"Baith jao siyappa queen... Amritsar ki ladkiya marti hai aise mere sath baithne k liye..."
She gave an expression like 'Really'..
Sangeet was a full party function chinki , bubly, Ishaan , Juhi , every1 performed and all enjoyed thorougly...
Just then a lights went off and focussed to a girl in center... she was dressed beautifully
The song Radha teri chunri started to play and as she revealed her face...
"Maya" kunj said with a smile looking at her...
Twinkle looked at him hearing what he spoke and looked at Maya... she hated to admit that she was beautiful indeed... but itni bhi nahi jitni ye Kunj tarif kar raha tha... as her performance ended every1 clapped and cheered her.
Even her mother standing beside her spoke audible to twinkle
'Kitni pyari bachi hai na... kitna mast dance kiya'
Ab ye hi baki tha babaji meri maa bhi...
As the claps stopped maya walked upto Kunj and hugged him...
Twinkle held the corner of her dress tightly only to consider it as Mayas neck...
Maya then came to twinkle...
" you are looking gorgeous... finally tum se mil payi... kitni bar kaha kunj ko ki muje milvaye tumse... but milvata hi nahi tha...apni khobsoorat biwi ko sabse chupa k rakha tha... haina Kunj"
And she hugged twinkle... Twinkle was taken aback but slightly hugged her back.
"Kya performance tha maya srsly... aaj tak mene kisi ladki ko aise perform karte hue nahi dekha.."
Kunj said eyeing twinkle...Twinkle looking away..
"Vaise Rishabh kaha hai maya?"
"Yahi tha pata nahi kaha chala gaya... me use bulake lati hu.." as she left
"Me usse better dance karti hu..."twinkle spoke audible to Kunj...
"Yeah... whatever... Kunj replied"
He was least bit interested in her talent.. she wanted him to challenge her and then she would show him.
"Ye hai Rishabh, Rishabh ye Kunj hai.. mere bachpan ka friend"maya again arrived with a man...
"Hi Rishabh nice to meet you man.. finally"kunj spoke as he shook hands with him
"Rishabh ye hai twinkle ... kunj ki hone vali biwi and.. Twinkle this is Rishabh, My Husband" and he greeted her formally with a shocked twinkle..
Maya was married aur ye Kunj isko bhi pata tha.. and she looked at Kunj who was looking everywhere but her and supressing a laughter...

All were having food and they were alone for a while
Twinkle wanted to give it back to him and as impulsive she is she dint realise what she was about to speak would hurt him
"Kunj tumhe sharam nahi ati ek shadi shuda ladki k bare me aise sochte ho,,tumhari shadi hone vali hai for gods sake" kunj tried to calm her down and tell her that there was nothing such in his mind...
"Kya twinkle... aisa kya keh diya mene... Twinkle maya meri bachpan ki dost hai.. hum saalo se ek dusre ko jante hai.,,and tum ye kya bol rhi ho... me kyu aisa karne laga"
"Kyuki tum is shadi se khush nahi ho... kyuki tumko vo bhot achi lagti hai... uske jaisi intelligent beautiful talented smart ladki tumne aaj tak nahi dekhi... tumhi ne toa bataya tha"
"Woh toa bas me tmhari tang khinch rha tha... ye tum bhi janti ho... aur kal hi toa humare bich baat hui thi tumne sharte rakhi thi aur mene kaha tha ki... me affair nahi rakhunga... tumhe meri baat par bharosa nahi hai kya"
"Jis tarah se tum behave kar rhe the... uski tarife kar rahe the ... ab nahi hai.., aur vaise bhi tumne toa kal clear kar hi diya tha ki tum shadi k bad rukne nahi vale...meri aakhri shart kaha mani thi tumne...tumne keh hi diya tha ki meri marzi ho ya na ho tum toa mujpar pati hone ka hak jata hi doge... jab tumhara man bhar jayega tab koi..."
"Twinkle ENOUGH" he stopped her from going furthr and say something she would regret..., "muje dukh hota hai ki tumko itna bhi bharosa nahi hai mujpe aur tumko dosti ka toa matlab nhi pata...,, shayad isliye ki koi ladka tumhara dost raha hi nahi hoga kabhi thanks to your BF yuvi...,,varna tumhe samj ata ki ek dost dost hota hai...muje laga ki ye jankar ki Maya married hai tum samj jaogi ki me mazak kar raha tha tumhare sath... aur bat vahi khatam hogi but tum toa... ek aur naye level pe muje gira rahi ho...
Baar baar mujpar advantage lene ka inzaam toa lagaya hi tha... ab ye tak soch liya ki me apni hi married dost par nazar dalunga..."
Twinkle was angry and dint realise what she was speaking as his words poured in she knew that she had crossed the limit.. she wanted to apologize again but..
He got up from his chair...started to leave he took a step and stopped
"Twinkle agar me kisi bhi cheez se sabse zyda hurt hota hu toa vo ye hai ki koi muje apne papa jaisa hone ka inzaam lagaye ya vaisa soche mere bare mein...
Aur tumne ek nhi do bar... aisa kiya hai...
Tumko mujpe bharosa nahi..toa tum ye kaise expect karti ho ki me tumpe bharosa karu...
Infact me bhi aise inzaam tumpe laga sakta hu... tumhara toa BF tha jiske sath brk up hue ek hafta bhi nahi hua... aur tum toa 7 saal se usse pyar karti thi... tum agar mujse kaho ki Yuvi se tmhara brk up ho gya hai... and ask me to trust you... toa tumko bhi us bharose ko return karna hoga... you cant play it both ways...
Agar me tumse kahu ki muje lagta hai ki tum Yuvi se ab bhi pyar karti ho aur.. kal shadi k mandap me muje chhod k usse bhag k shadi kar logi toa"..
He stopped twinkle as she was about to speak by raising his hand in the air gesturing her that he was still not finished ... still not looking at her..
"Shock lagta na tumko ki me ab bhi aisa sochta hu... aur tumhara yakin nahi kar raha... yahi soch rhi ho na ki me tumhare bare me aise kaise soch sakta hu...
Jab tumhare dimag ne ye sab khayal ayenge youll be exactly where I am...

"Twinkle bharosa karne ki jab tak koi vajah dhundogi kisi pe bhi bharosa nahi kar paogi..."
with that he left her standing near her chair with regretting eyes and apologies unspoken...

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