Burden of Marriage TwiNj TS Part 3 PG6

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: MNsTrous
Res.. Will unres on Saturday.. Going out of town.. :)
Unres:

Hmm Anam di / choco aapi... 😃

Hmm I'm speechless! 😲

I mean... It was. In simple words BEAUTIFUL! 😳

Hmm I somewhat felt it strange but don't know why.. It was a deeply touching peice.. 😆

Loved every bit of it. ❤️

First the industry scene.. Then confession.. And beach side.. Then.. Breakup.. And leela twinky scene.. And chinky and leela bet.. Sab bilkul perfect! 👍🏼

Maya maybe blackmailed Kunj I believe and Kunj is under some pressure.. 😕

I'm so excited for the second part especially event and twinj face-off.. 😉

Hmm it was...touching but..

I somewhat got emotional a bit after all. I'm a big emotional kid lol.. 😛

Over all it was awesome and looking forward to see twinj reunite. 😃

10/10 from my side. +1 for exceptional story concept. Loved it! 👏. ⭐️

Thank you MN🤗

Good Prediction

Glad you enjoyed

will post the next part soon

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Sonali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

wow what a twist, Kunj has kidnapped Twinkle! well done!

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3dancelover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

oh shit kidnapped!?

I could feel twinkles angered emotions

loved the update, do continue soon

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Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

amazing update Anam
precap seems interesting

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Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

what kunj kidnapped twinkle 😲

nice update

eagerly waiting for the next update

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hailly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Awesome update. Loved it.
Eagerly waiting to see why Kunj broke up with Twinkle.
Do continue soon plz.

Edited by hailly - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

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Abhi abhi cute lil monster got up.. Will read and reply soon.

Unres

Hmm I liked the update choco aapi..

But but but.. I dont like. Kunj here.. I mean.. He is like forcing her.. Pehle to he must clarify... I dint like him blabbering and chanting twinkle sirf meri hai... See Kunj pehle twinkle ka dil toda not talked for 8 long years not even tried to get to her and now when he coincidently got her at the event when she is choosing her life partner and is happy with the said person.. Kunj is interfering in between without even Twinkle's like.. He I forcing her.. I didn't liked it.

I just hope he romantically clears the MU opens all the secrets and gives an option to choose him.

Oops sorry kuch zaida hi bol diya.. But I didn't liked this obsessive and oppressive kind of Kunj.

Twinkle ki koi galti nai thi and now she is happily moving forward. Kunj must mend his mistake before calling her his.

Over all it was gripping.

Keep it up.. Update jaldi chahiye.. Lol.. 😆

🤗. 👍🏼

Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago