TwiNj[Dark]SS:Unrequited Love Ch2 pg3 2/1/16

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Unrequited love is a ridiculous state, and it makes those in it behave ridiculously. ~ Cassandra Clare

Unrequited love or one-sided love is love that is not openly reciprocated or understood as such by the beloved. The beloved may not be aware of the admirer's deep and strong romantic affection or consciously reject it. The Merriam Webster Online Dictionary defines unrequited as "not reciprocated or returned in kind."


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Chapter 2-Pg3

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Chapter 1

His entire life he has lost every damn person he loved,first his parents,then his brother,the only person he had as a family is his sister who is right now in US for higher studies,his heart is only soft for her,for everyone else in this world he was heartless,he was a beast for whom the thing that mattered the most was his business,but today his entire world has changed,he caught a sight which made his heart skip a beat,it felt like he has seen the light in this world,he made the decision he want her in his life,for his life,he needed her for him only her,she would be no one else's but only his,kunj sarna made the decision of his life,he will make this girl his forever.

Kunj ordered his PA to find about this girl and get everydamn detail of her.

-2 days later-

Kunj's PA got him the entire life history of that girl.

Name:Twinkle

Age:20

And the rest of information was enclosed in the file.

He got to her address and other information from the file,he also came to knew that twinkle only had her brother with him who worked in a MNC and her mother.

He though it would be easier to make twinkle his.

Kunj asked his mens to get twinkle to him as soon as possible.

Twinkle was walking to her home from her college when she heard a car stopping behind her,twinkle got scared and started walking a little faster,but the people following her were very fast and strong ,a guy caught hold of her hand and covered her mouth with a cloth which made twinkle unconscious.

-A dark room,11:00PM-

Twinkle slowly gained consciousness her head felt heavy,she opened her eyes to only find darkness surrounding her and nothing else,her hands were tied behind the chair and her legs were tied together.

After some time the door and lights were switched on,twinkle's eyes closed on their own due to sudden brightness,when she opened her eyes she saw a man standing infront of her,he looked as if he was in his late twenties.

The man came near her and kneeled down,he said I know there must be many questions going in your head and I am here to answer those questions.

I am kunj sarna who got you here.

But why did you brought me here asked twinkle.

Because I want you to be mine twinkle,I want you to marry me and be mine forever.

Twinkle was in a shock,she was not able to say anything.

I know you will deny twinkle but I wont let you do this twinkle,You know what I know eberything about your family,If you will say no to me it will just me few minutes and your family will be dead ,their corpses will be lying infront of you twinkle.

Twinkle got afraid,the authoritative voice of the man told her that he is capable to do anything.

Twinkle who loves her family asled what you want me to do?

I will be coming to your house with a proposal to marry you,I know your mom and brother are finding a groom for you and they wouldn't deny this alliance because they are getting such a handsome and rich guy for their daughter,I want you to say yes to this alliance and marry me.

Twinkle agreed to his terms and conditions and kunj allowed her to go home.

-Next day-

Kunj came to twinkle's house with the rishta and twinkle's mom and brother were more than happy to say yes to his proposal,twinkle also said yes and the wedding wax fixed after 15 days although kunj wanted to have the wedding earlier but somehow agreed to wait for 15days.

-End-

Chapter 2- Making upto you


Edited by .MysticalWaters - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start
It's so difficult to imagine kunj as such a guy but intriguing too
Couldn't he just go usual way of courting lol
But the pics u used in the banner totally had me drooling
Loved the banner.
Can't wait to read this story
Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting start.
Eager to know how their relation is going to be, do continue soon plz.
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Nice and very different concept
continue soon want to see how the two work things out
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Very intriguing.
Firstly kunj here is very different and its kinda weird imagining him like this but u did an amazing job with it. Loved it.
I read the begining and i thought maybe kunj will go the conventional way and try and woo her but banda toh totally different nikla. Lol
And the banner is too good. Can't stop looking at it.
Looking forward to reading what happens next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iansomer1

Interesting start

It's so difficult to imagine kunj as such a guy but intriguing too
Couldn't he just go usual way of courting lol
But the pics u used in the banner totally had me drooling
Loved the banner.
Can't wait to read this story
Continue soon

Actually from a long time I have been pre occupied with this thought of a darker and cruel kunj.
Maybe this comes from my obsession of iss pyaar ko kya naam doon or fictions on ArShi.
But I love writing dark stories so this is here.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Very intriguing.

Firstly kunj here is very different and its kinda weird imagining him like this but u did an amazing job with it. Loved it.
I read the begining and i thought maybe kunj will go the conventional way and try and woo her but banda toh totally different nikla. Lol
And the banner is too good. Can't stop looking at it.
Looking forward to reading what happens next.

I know it is difficult to imagine this kunj,but please bear with me kunj will be normal with time.
Actually here he suffers from a psychological disorder due to his past and twinkle will be his cure.
although the storybwill be dark in the start but it will change through the course of this story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .MysticalWaters

Actually from a long time I have been pre occupied with this thought of a darker and cruel kunj.
Maybe this comes from my obsession of iss pyaar ko kya naam doon or fictions on ArShi.
But I love writing dark stories so this is here.


It will be unique and amazing to read this concept and yeah my mind did flash to arnav reading this specially when family threat line came.
I am loving ur dark take in kunjs character.
Do continue soon.
Excited and curious as to what happens. Will twinkle be meek silent girl or fearless sherni??

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unrequited love is most beautiful.
thank you. i am so interested to read more

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