Honeymoon Redo- Twinj os part2pg2

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might do a part 2 but give me your feedback to what I have written so far

Yuvi started to swing her around after she confronted him.

Kunj's words rang in her mind.

" Uska beecha chor de. Ek din tum bari musibat mein phas jagoi."

Twinkle wanted to hit herself for coming out here after Yuvraj while the others were still sleeping or getting ready for the day.

He finally let her go after her pleading. Twinkle hit the ground hard. Her whole body shook with pain. She felt some liquid coming from the corner of her forehead. She stammered for Bebe.

Bebe rushed towards her.

" Twinkle yeh kya hogaya. Tum yahaan kaise kirgi?," she asked concerned.

" Yuvraj ne muhje giradya!," Twinkle rasped. ( Yuvraj dropped me!)

" Woh to yahaan hai nahin. Chale mere saath paat kar denge tumari," she urged.

Twinkle slowly made her way to the couch.

Bebe dabbed at her wound and then applied a bandage on the site.

" Aur kahin lagi toh nahin?," she asked.

" Sub kuch dukha hai," Twinkle saying as she winced.

" Main tumare liye haldi wala dhood manati hoon," Bebe said softly.

" Lekin Bebe mujhe woh nahin peena," she cried.

" Chup! Haldi wala dhood sayaat ke liye accha hai," she insisted.

Kunj arrived downstairs.

"Hey Siyappa queen yeh kaise hogaya?," he asked with concern.

" Woh Yuvi ne mujhe giryada. Sab kuch dhuka hai Kunj!," she cried.

"Ahh! We should have left for our trip last night. See you have gotten yourself in trouble already. I was going to tell Bebe we were going to the farmhouse. Now since we have to delay our trip, I will have to come up with another plan so no one follows us there," Kunj stated with remorse.

"Main itni weak nahin hoon Kunj. Hum jayenge," Twinkle insisted.

Her husband softened.

" I just want you to get some rest and recover from all the stress you have been through the past few months," he declared.

"Yeh lo haldi wala dhood. Tum dono ko bahar jaana haina?," Bebe asked.

" Jee Bebe," both said in unison.

" Phir yeh dhood Twinkle poora peena hai," she urged.

She left Kunj in charge to make sure Twinkle would drink it.

Twinkle grimaced.

" Come on Twinkle, mere liye. Otherwise you know na Ma na Bebe humhe jaane degeni," he declared. ( Come on Twinkle do it for me. Otherwise you know your Mom and Bebe will not let us go anywhere.)

Twinkle took the milk from his hands and started to drink it.

" Twinkle Kunj Sarna tum bahut cute ho!," Kunj thought to himself.

Bebe kept Yuvraj with Surjit so the couple could leave peacefully.

Once in the car, Twinkle turned to Kunj.

" Hum kahan jaare hain?," she asked softly.

"Ek surprise hai. After all it is a our redo honeymoon," he said with a bright smile.

She nudged him.

Then she winced.

"See this is what happens when you don't listen to your smart and handsome pati dev!," Kunj exclaimed.

She glared at him.

He gently caressed her arm at the traffic light.

" Just relax. Safe your energy for exploring wherever we end up," he said surreptitiously.

Hours later..

She felt a familiar hand on her shoulder.

"Hum kahan hain?," she asked.

"Dharmsala," Kunj replied.

She opened her eyes to realize they weren't in the car. She must have been sleepy when they arrived probably late last night or earlier this morning.

She realized she was in yesterday's clothes. She tried to get up but felt stiff all over.

" Tu rook. I will run the hot water for you," he said with concern.

She got up a few moments later searching for toiletries. He shook his head at her. She smiled as she began to brush her teeth.

He leaned over and brushed her hair aside so he could remove her band aid. She winced slightly.

He blew on it as he held her arm to steady her.

She had a habit of tilting over at the slight disposition of her balancing.

Kunj was startled with a foamy kiss on his cheek.

She winked at him before going off to wash her face and rinse her mouth.

Kunj waited patiently for her to finish then washed his own face.

A few minutes later, Twinkle had the bathroom to herself. She closed the door behind her and got washed up quickly. She was eager to go exploring soon. They were finally free to start anew. She would not take this opportunity for granted.

Some time had passed and she heard Kunj knocking on the door.

" Tu theek toh hai na?," he called.

She smiled.

" Haan main theek hoon. Main baas abhi aayi!," she called out.

She emerged in a peach, lace colored salwar suit. She could feel his eyes admiring her but he broke the spell by covering her with a shawl.

" Bahar thodi se thand hai," he muttered.

"Lekin yahan toh garmi thori zyaada hai," she retorted back.

He blushed slightly.

They linked arms and headed out to explore the local monasteries and other tourist sites.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww cute OS
i am waiting for part 2
thank u so much dear
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Cute! Waiting for the next part eagerly...
Thank u so much for writing...
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It is cute...
Do update a part 2...
Waiting
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thanks everyone when I get a chance will write some more, thanks for the comments and encouragment!
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Really cute os... please continue soon
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thanks will try to do second part when i get a chance
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Amazing OS
Loved Twinj scenes
Do write part 2
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here is part 2 hope it is ok, rated pg-13

Part 2 Honeymoon Redo

She felt firm yet gentle hands wrap a shawl around her shoulders. The touch lingered on her arms and down to the small of her back.

Since she immediately that it was him, she wasn't scared.

In fact she leaned back into his muscular chest. He took this as a sign an wrapped his arms around her petite frame. He brushed her hair back so he could examine her now healing wound. She sighed as he pressed his lips on her forehead.

" Kya sochri ho?," he asked softly.

"Kuch nahin baas chill maari thi," she quipped.

" Hum aaye yahan chill marne," he joked.

She nudged him.

Twinkle turned back to face him. He held her by the small of her back.

"Bol kya sochri hai ," he urged.

She caressed his cheek down to his chin and neck.

"Kya hum phirse se woh saat vaade le sakte hain?," she asked.

His eyes locked with hers.

She really wanted this. Their actual wedding was filled with so much drama and chaos. Sometimes she was kidnapped or harmed in some way or he was buried alive or beaten.

Kunj wanted this to be special for them to make it symbolic for their fresh start together.

"Theek hai. Pehli baar humari sooch ek jasi nikli," he quipped.

He squeezed her hand with assurance.

" Main abhi aata hoon. Tu yahan rok room mein. I will come back for you," he declared.

She merely nodded.

While Twinkle waited she took out the sindoor container. She would have him adorn her maang with it.

Kunj arrived soon enough and they walked over to a newly lit bonfire.

"Thoda informal hai lekin.."

She grasped his hand.

" Chale gaya," she assured him.

They made their sacred seven rounds on the fire. Twinkle made her vows first and they both spoke aloud of their interpretation of each vow for each round.

After they completed the rounds, Kunj held her hands.

" I am sorry I doubted you about Anita Auntie and Yuvraj. I should have known based on the past," he stated.

She shushed him with her lips.

Kunj was taken aback.

" Tune job hi kiya mere aur humare zindagi ke liye kiya tha. There is no need for you to be guilty about what happened in Goa," she insisted.

He caressed the back of her head and pulled her in for a bone crushing hug.

They soon returned to their room. Kunj locked the door. Twinkle hugged him from behind. He pulled her to his chest. He tipped her chin up, and he kissed her deeply with all the passion and love he felt for her.

When they broke for air, he declared," I love you Mrs. Kunj Sarna!"

She nearly cried happy tears. She leaned in to peck his lips and then replied," I love you Kunj Sarna, I am so lucky ki mujhe tumara saath mila."

He picked her up. She blushed in shyness knowing what would come next.

"Thori garmi bhari hain na Twinkle?," he teased.

She smacked his chest as her back hit the firm mattress.

They finally shared a blissful night together after months of facing troubles and nearly losing each other.

The sunrise hit their eyes in the early morning night. They were all cozy in the sheets. Twinkle shifted slightly in her sleep like state. Kunj ran a soothing touch on her shoulder to her backside.

She sighed with content. She felt so safe in his arms.

She brushed her lips on his chest. He held her closer to himself if that was possible.

"Kaise lagara hai meri siyappa queen?," he asked teasingly.

She opened her eyes slowly and traced circles on his arm.

" I never felt so much at peace Kunj. Mujhe lagata jaise mera har sapna poora hogaya," she declared.

They shared a passionate kiss.

When they pulled back, he said," There are more dreams we have to create Twinkle. This is just the beginning!"

She smiled brightly. She wrapped the blanket up to her chin as she sat up in bed.

" I am ready to start dreaming with you," she replied with glee.

Edited by adventure_gurl - 9 years ago
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cute update.
pls continue soon

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