TWINJ SS- A RACE FOR SURVIVAL

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys.
Honestly yesterday's epi made me feel it was too short. They had an awesome chance to drag it and show twinj scenes but no they had to bring anand fiasco early on.
So here is my take on what else could have happened while twinj amade their escape. It will be a short story and contain missing scenes I wanted in the epi.hipe you all like it



Twinkle opened her eyes as the door slammed shut.
Observing her surrounding she realized they were locked in a cold storage.that meant they were on a deadline. She had to escape with kunj before they were frozen ice lollies.
She looked around and found him lying unconcious fee feet away.
What had those bas***d done to him that he was not waking up.
She prayed he wasn't hurt and crawled herself as elegantly as she could given that her hand and feet were tied.
She could feel the rope burns,every time she moved it digged painfully into her skin but she soldiered on ignoring the pain.

She called to him,pleading shouting but his lifeless body didn't budge. Looking around she found a water bottle.
She grabbed it and turned herself so her hands were near his face. She couldn't see where the water fell but she prayed it would work.the rope digged further due to the angle she had twisted her hand.
The freezing temperature wasn't helping either,she turned and nudged his chest with her head. The water seemed to be taking affect.
He coughed once and slowly opened his eyes.

Still feeling groggy due to the drugs his head felt dizzy.slowly opening his eyes kunj vowed that kidnapper won't see the light of day if he ever came in front of him again.
He felt something pushing against his chest.
''Thank god kunj. Are you ok?''

No do I look ok??I have sore ribs and was just drugged by some goons. He wanted to say but the voice stopped him.
No it couldn't be please god don't let it be her. Why did she land in trouble as well.

Then he finally looked at her. Cold,shivering and fear etched on her beautiful face. She was breath taking was all he thought despite bejng in danger they were in.must be the drugs talking he thought
''What are you doing?How did you get here??

''I came to trace the kidnappers they caught me.then they threw us here.''

Ofcourse she had to trace the kidnappers she won't wait for the ransom demand. After all his amritsari sherni did not sit idle waiting for something to happen she made things happen even if it was getting herself kidnapped instead of rescuing him.he thought impressed by her.
A failed plan was better than no plan at all.
''Hurry up we need to find a way out before they come back.also I don't want to die in the freezer.''

''Even I am not dying to die here.''

''Idiot we need to untie our ropes first.''

Kunj studied the ropes for a minute

He asked her to turn around and he will try opening the knot with his teeth.
She did and kunj knelt on floor to untie.
He tried to untie but due to no support he mistakenly bit her hand instead.
Twinkle who was already shivering due to the cold yelped in pain.
''Are you blind??''She turned in anger and collided in his face.
''No I am cold and dizzy'' Kunj said.''Don't be a drama queen turn around.''
She did and after few minutes of hardwork she was free. She quickly untied him as well.

They checked the whole storage and found no escape. The cold was over powering them. Tired and shivering they slid down the wall.sitting together side by side.till now they were faring well due to moving around now cold was seeping into them rapidly.

''Kunj I am scared.''She whispered rubbing her hands.''What if this is how it ends?''

''Stop.this is not the end twinkle''he said fiercely.''We will make it out of here.and for that I don't need you to be scared.be the fearless twinkle sarna I know you to be.''

''I know you are right but I can't exactly be fearless when I know I am going to die of hypothermia.''She said shivering. ''We need to have some plan if we have any chances of surviving this.''
'You know for a big movie buff you sure are not smart. It's simple we need to preserve body heat.''kunj said
Despite the cold twinkle felt her cheeks redden at his suggestion.
Baba ji why did she had to be kidnapped.she was definitely giving an extra punch to that moustached goon for making this situation awkward.
She scooted closer to him wordlessly and kunj knew better than to tease her.he gathered her in his arms tightly.while she settled her head in crook of his neck.
He winced when her cold lips touched his neck. She was worse than him he realized.
If someone came through that door they had Very less chances of survival.
''Twinkle get up we need to set some things first.atleast be a little bit prepared for when they come.'' At that twinkle was alert. They looked around and took whatever things they thought would be a good weapon.
A metal lid from the jars,a rod from the shelves. Twinkle took a water bottle too.
''How is that going to help us?''He asked
''You never know what water can do on our sangeet i escaped from yuvi by throwing a water bottle at his goons face.''

''I would pay to see that. ''He smiled

''You might just see it tonight.''

They heard footsteps coming.

They shared a look,team twinj was back in business and they both smirked knowing they finally had a chance to escape and the odds were definitely leaning towards their favor.
Taking their positions behind the door with their makeshift weapons in hand they waited with bated breath.

The door was unlocked and it swung open.he recognised the man as main goons lackey.
When he saw laila majnu not tied and unconcious he screamed for his friend but before he could get the warning out he felt a blow to his head.

Twinkle swung the rod and landed a perfect hard blow to his head.
He fell down.
''One hit and he is down.what did you eat twinkle??''kunj asked who was ready to beat the goon if need arises.
Twinkle smirked.''let's just say in my college days I had a lot of practice wielding bats.''

''Were you in the cricket team?'
''No I hated cricket. Let's just say any girl who was targeted for eve teasing or misbehaviour she came to me and I planned her revenge and helped her execute it '' twinkle said proudly.

''Ofcourse you did.''kunj laughed.
They headed outside into a coridoor walking side by side. Kunj had snatched the knife from that goon and now had it ready to strike.
They were still weak and cold but slowly their bodies were returning to normal temperature.
They heard a creak and kunj instinctively grabbed twinkles hand and stood in front of her.
Twinkle ducked behind him making herself invisible. Whoever came would be overconfident seeing him alone.
She was the mini surprise package who would make sure they regretted kidnapping kunj and twinkle sarna.
Both readied themselves for the inevitable fight.


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_Ridz_ thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome one Ian.. Loved it.. Thier convo was so cute.. This is what i love about twinj the most.. They are not like those lovey dovey couple still they just up the cuteness quotient..of course thiers is tashan wala ishq😳
Edited by _Ridz_ - 9 years ago
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Ian! Omg omg this was too good...👏👏 How i wish for the story to have gone ahead like this... Totally worth the wait...
The twinj scenes were spot on
Loved it
Continue soon..😳
Edited by .Ragini. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was soon cute. I loved their convoy and their makeshift weapons. It was all so realistic.
Looking forward to more.
Thanks for this😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute and a very different version of what we saw yesterday...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ian u just rocked
loved this update very much
love this twinj partners in crime
plzzz update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is too good Ian.
Loving it .Wish they had it in the show.
TwiNJ are so cute.Awesome convoy between them.
Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing start Ian. loved it <3
pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing ss , loved Twinj scenes.
Continue soon plz.
Edited by hailly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love team Kunj with his little surprise. Lovely yar👏👏. .update soon

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