Twinj- We loved with love, that was more than love! Scene 4 updated! - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
and welcome to the forum😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Scene 2
Kunj enters the bedroom. He is very frustated and agitated. He calls out for Twinkle. Twinkle rushes out from the bathroom.
Kunj: Twinkle, tujhe samjh nahi aata na? Kitni baar samjhaya hai haan? Uski tabiyat theek nahi hai lekin nahi!
Twinkle: Kunj, ek baar meri baat to sun lo.
Kunj: Nahi sunna mujhe kuch. Mujhe tujse baat hi nahi krni. Samjha samjha ke thak gya hu.
Twinkle: Kunj tum usse trust kr rhe ho jisne humari life kharab krne ki koshish ki or meri nahi. Mai tumhari wife hu Kunj.
Kunj: Wife? Tum meri wife ho..nahi tum bhi jaanti ho or mai bhi ki ye relationship zabardasti ka hai, sirf humari families ki wajah se hai. Waise bhi tum jab se meri life mei aayi ho kuch theek hua hi kab hai? Ek ke baad ek siyaappe, galti tum karti ho or solutions mujhe dhoondhne padte hai. Hadd krti ho tum, dimaag kharaab kr dia hai.
Kunj said it all in one go. He was so frustrated that he hardly gave it a though about what he was even saying. And Twinkle, she stood still, she did'nt know how to react. She was broken. She did'nt say anything. She just made an exit from the room and rushed towards the terrace. She cried her heart out, blamed herself, cursed herself, she hated herself. As she left the room Kunj realised what he said about her and what he said to her was not what she did'nt deserve to listen. Those words were not for her. He felt guilty, bad. He did'nt have the courage to face her and console her. He wanted her to have her space and time. About an hour later, Twinkle returned to the room. Her face was red, eyes swelled, hair were messy. Kunj was resting on the bed, but got up as he saw her. He got from the bed and laid on the couch indicating Twinkle to sleep on the bed. But Twinkle took out a mat and a blanket and placed it on the floor and slept. Kunj felt bad.


Scene 3
It has been almost a week, situations were still same. Kunj tried to speak to Twinkle but every attempt went in vain. He kept himself busy in the office chores but could'nt divert his mind from Twinkle. Twinkle grew all the more pale. She had hardly eaten anything during this past week. She had lost her charm and glow. She needed love, support, moreover she wanted Kunj. She hardly spoke to anyone. She always sat on the couch with a cushion in her hand. Her condition got worsened with each passing min, hour, day.
It was a Sunday evening, Bebbe and the whole family was going to attend a Jaagran except Kunj who was busy with his chores and Twinkle who was unwell. Yuvi was also going with them but Bebbe refused because of his mental conditions. Bebbe asked Kunj to drive them to the Jaagran as the driver had to urgently visit his village. As they left the house, Yuvi went to Twinkle's room. It was a similar situation that had happened a week ago. First, he behaved like a child and then again starting irritating her. He tried to molest her, again. Kunj's car had crossed a short distance only when Bebbe realised she was'nt carrying her medicine. She needed them as she was a Sugar Patient. She asked Kunj to call Twinkle and ask her to pack her medicines by the time they reach back home. Kunj called Twinkle, she somehow managed to pick the call but could'nt speak anything as Yuvi caught her by her neck. Only thing Kunj could hear was Twinkle's scream which was loud enough to scare him. He drove faster. As they reached home they headed towards their room. And what they saw their was Twinkle shouting and crying in pain and Yuvi trying every bit to molest her, but he failed each time, she was being saved by her Baba Ji. Kunj entered the room and slapped Yuvi hard.

Hey everyone, thanks for appreciating my work. I hope you will enjoy reading my story. Scene 4 will be updated in a couple of days because I have my exams this week. So kindly cooperate with me and do let me know your views. :)



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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
^ again interesting update. pls write the update page no on ur title. continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Welcome to the forum.
This is an excellent FF.
Very interesting.Waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
NYC updates.
Plz continue scene 3 soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
I loved it.. Absolutely amazing update...
Eagerly waiting for more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Poor twinkle felt so bad for her glad yuvi is exposed can't wait for kunj to beat him black and blue
Continue Soon
Nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
amazing update again
cont soon pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Scene 4
Kunj was about to beat him more but was stopped by Bebbe and the other family members. They called the police and they got Yuvi arrested for misbehaving with Twinkle. Anita was also thrown out of the house as their entire plan was exposed. Everyone now left the room one by one except Kunj so that Twinkle could take some rest.
Twinkle stood straight, her eyes constantly staring at one place. She was shocked, she was in pain. Kunj after shutting the door came to Twinkle. He called her not once or twice, many times but there was'nt any response. Her not answering him was making him even more guilty. He had no choice but to stay strong, stay by Twinkle. Finally he held her by her shoulders, shaked her and said, "Twinkle yaar kya ho gaya hai tujhe. Kuch bol Twinkle, please. Jitna gussa krna hai kar, mujhe maar, mujhe thapad maar, bahut maar, lekin kuch bol, mai tujhe nahi bolunga, promise."
He kept on saying words like that for that was important to break Twinkle's silence and bring her out of her shell. So that she would react and anyhow lighten her heart. And that happened, actually more than that happened. When Twinkle reacted it was all togetherly a destruction. It was sort of heavy rain, storm and thundering all together. Twinkle broke, she shouted, she threw things here and there, cried, screamed like anything, blamed herself. For 10 mins all this continued. At last she was holding Kunj's shirt questioning and crying when she fainted. Kunj sprinkled water, rubbed her hands and feet but it was of no use. He placed her on bed and called for the doctor. By the time doctor arrived Bebbe and Kunj kept on sprinkling water and rubbing her hands and feet whereas his mother, Usha set the room. When the doctor arrived she told Kunj that Twinkle was going through a lot of stress and tension from quite sometime which if continued further would lead to 'Depression'. So it can be controlled by taking care of her, her diet and by keeping her happy. Twinkle also had high fever as she had'nt eaten properly in the past days which will result in her weakness and fainting so he has to take care of that. She told him that she had injected an injection so Twinkle will be asleep for a few hours. The doctor left the room followed by the other members except Leela and Raman. Leela was crying but Kunj assured her that he will take proper care of Twinkle and will come to their house for stay once she gets fine. Raman and Leela leave. Kunj is sitting beside Twinkle and moves his hand over her forehead.
Kunj did'nt knew when he fell asleep but was waken up by the loud scream of Twinkle saying his name. She was yet again in a devastated state, crying and sweating. She had a nightmare. Kunj calmed her down and assured that he was all well. Twinkle hugged him tight and cried bitterly. Just a few mins later she came back to her senses and broke the hug. She wiped her tears. Kunj poured her a glass of water. Her hands were shivering. She had almost left the glass for a moment when Kunj held her hand and then made her drink water with his hands.

To be continued. Do tell how it was. :)

Edited by eternal0407 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
nice update
but iam feeling bad for twinkles state

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