Twinj- We loved with love, that was more than love! Scene 4 updated!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys, I am Riya and I am new to this forum. This is my first fan fiction and it is on Twinkle and Kunj of 'Tashan-e-Ishq'. Your views on my first 'FF' are most welcomed.
Prologue
Kunj is upset with Twinkle because of her behaviour with Yuvraj whereas Twinkle is very worried and confused about how to make Kunj understand her doubts,anxieties and the evil plans of Yuvraj. Also she is unhappy with Kunj's coldness towards her.

This particular scene is set in the garden. Twinkle is tensed and moving to and fro from one place to another. Just then Yuvraj makes an entry.
Scene 1
Yuvi: Twinkle! Twinkle! mere saath khel na.
Twinkle: Yuvi please abhi pareshaan mat kar, jaa yahan se, please.
Yuvi: Please na Twinkle, please.

Yuvi starts to irritate her and also shows her his original side. He touches her and holds her hand. Twinkle tries to rescue her from him but fails. Yuvi tries to molest her and in this attempt Twinkle gets few scratches on her hand by Yuvi's nails and also gets pricked by a thorn. She pushes Yuvi with full force, he falls on the ground, just then Kunj enters. Yuvi behaves like a child again. Twinkle's hand goes unnoticed by Kunj and he helps Yuvi get up. He shouts at Twinkle for being immature and asks her to come to their room till he leaves Yuvi to his room. Twinkle somehow manages to control her tears and runs to the washroom to wash the blood and apply some medicine on the wound before Kunj sees it. She changed her clothes and wore a full sleeves suit so that her scars and scratches go unnoticed by Kunj.


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Iansomer1 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am first commenter yaar
I like it love ur title it's beautiful
Looking forward to next update please make them longer
Intriguing start continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iansomer1

I am first commenter yaar

I like it love ur title it's beautiful
Looking forward to next update please make them longer
Intriguing start continue soon

Hey, thanks! I will definately make a longer update next time. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello Riya 🤗

welcome to forum forum
nice FF
pps continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Riya..plz post rest of the parts... Galat baat😕..
First part is really awesome...just want to read next parts can't wait..

And welcome to the forum 😊
Edited by Aalina. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey riya,
Welcome to the forum. And really interesting update please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Poor Twinkle! I really hope that Kunj see her injuries in the next part!
Very interesting beginning and am looking forward to reading more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really good story...eagerly looking forward to more.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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a heartiest welcome to the forum dear... and loved to read ur FF plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start 😊😊
continue soon

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