Twinj Three Shot: Rain on Our Parade

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Aalina.

@Aalina.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Superb.. Love it..u superbly penned down their emotions 👏👏

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floral

@floral

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

amazing os

loved it very much😊

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I loved this. I was happy to read about Twinkle standing upto Yuvi and have I mentioned how much I hate Anita?

Your Usha is a million times better than the one in the show. I have no hopes on her changing at all!

Felt sorry for Kunj when everything seemed to overwhelm him and his only escape was to run away! It was very TwiNj for Twinkle to call Kunj an idiot while confessing to him. In the show when they confess, I hope that they show something that is as amazing as this confession is.

Please continue this to show Kunj actually getting the credit or his project!

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EmeraldTigress

@EmeraldTigress

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

This is one of the most phenomenal stories I have read! (And Bedroom Dynamics too.😊) I love the way you portrayed the characters and feelings in both of the stories, I really would love to see something like this in the show. I hope to see more of your extraordinary writing on this couple! Possibly a continuation of this Three-Shot?😉 Anyways, lovely job, and please do write more!