kunj twinkle OS #1 part 1 page 1 aug 30

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Posted: 9 years ago
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<div align="center">hii... well i am watching the show from the first day and wanted to write on yuvraj and twinkle initially but this concept is better with kunj and twinkle..


this will a OS

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intro : page 1
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Posted: 9 years ago
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character sketch :

yuvraj luthra : he is the love of twinkle but circumstances were not in their favor.. so he is now ou of her life..

twinkle tanega : she is bubbly girl with down to earth nature ..her one and only one dream is to be with her love but recently it has been shattered ..

kunj sarna : the younger son of sarna's , he is kind of rebellious nature but didn't show that much..a guy with not much attitude but has a temper that could make anyone shiver.. his heart only beats for his love alisha but he is going to get engaged with twinkle..
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Sajna ve ..

Part 1

Tension , the way things were shaping up for twinkle she had no choice how to say NO to her mother , her mother leela had done each and everything that will be in her favor and now after all her attempts or precisely the failed attempts she knew that this time she is going to get married that too that sarna.. The groom her dear mother had finally found..

twinkle was looking at her favorite babaji and was looking at the dinner plate again she was not in the mood to eat.. She took a morsel and dipped it in the curry her hands were working mechanically but her mind and her heart was at one place only.. Her love who she loves like crazy.. The only son of luthra's .. yuvraj but things were really differEnt..
yuvraj luthra never acknowledged her presence and when things were shaping up she has got a problem in her life again and the problem was none other than kunj sarna..

He was the youngest son of sarna's and was her soon to be partner with whom she will share her entire life... Things were really differnt and twinkle was confused.. Her eyes filled with tears and the morsel that was in her hand was dropped in the plate she wiped her hands and wiped her tears.. She knew that things can not change until she will convince yuvraj and this is the high time they have to take a decision..

On the other hand in the lavish mansion of the sarna's , a guy was working out and was kicking the boxing bag with so much force that was showing his hatred towards himself ..
kunj kicked the boxing bag again and he fell on the floor all sweaty.. His eyes were closed and he was just seeing the image of the only person whom he loves.. His love alisha but now he knew that his life will be hooked to twinkle..the only daughter of the taneja's ..
kunj knew that he will loose it tomorrow but his determination didn't let him fall back and he got up from the ground and grabbed a towel wiping his body.. He took his bottle freshened his mind by pouring the water on his head... He cannot say anything to his father , his words his choices everything just ends when his father steps in his life.. Kunj was not the one who would show his inner self to everyone except his mom but then his venting out his frustration like this was not known by anyone .. He went to his room and wiped his face with a clean towel and took out a photograph from the diary.. He looked at the picture and just kept looking at her.. His eyes were red with the anger and his pain to loose his love without even telling her.. The photograph he was about to keep away when he thought..
How can you accept this kunj.. At least fight for your love.. Is your love so shallow for Alisha.. Or she doesn't matter to you now..
How can you just let any girl enter your life.. What about you , your life , your feelings , your emotions...
Just don't insult your love..
His inner voice pricked his heart and kunj just kept the picture away without indulging himself in the fight of his heart and mind at that moment...

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Next : first meet

OK that was the first part.. And please bear with these short updates .. M not used to write long ones..
Edited by suhaaana - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plsss dear update part 1 soon im eager to read and pls dont give a short update im sorry i may sound very demanding but what to do i am obsessed☺️ with these 2 now a days pls try to make it long😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow
Twinj story..
Lovely

Cs is nice
Would love to read more..

Update soon..
Nd do pm me plz..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh yess yess please update im soo excited!! Thank youuu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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W8ing eagerly dear 😊😃 4 twinj😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow KunLe ❤️Os ..waiting plz update soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great job! A really interesting start! Plz update the next part soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb 😊 w8ng 4 d next update 😃

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