RagLak FF -Silsila Ye Chaahat Ka (part 4 updtd on pg 6)

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Thnx 4 such encouraging cmmnts guyz... lots of luv to all those who liked and commented on my last part and charactersketch... hope u enjoy this part too...

Part 2

Lots of preparations wer going on at the Maheshwari mansion for makarsankrati... Gadodias wer also present thr... ragini ws wearing a royal blue colour lehenga with simple silver work on it... she had put on vry light makeup...

Annapoorna - ragu... ye phool zara vaha rakh do beta... aur kitchen se mithaai ka dabba bhi le aana...

Ragini - ji badi maa...

She goes and brings the sweets... laksh had still not cm down...

Annapoorna - aree ye laksh abhi tak nahi utha... parineeta...

Parineeta - ji maa...

Annapoorna - beta jaao laksh ko uthaao...

Parineeta goes upstairs to wake up laksh... she enters lakshs room... laksh ws sleeping peacefully...

Parineeta - laksh... utho... (she screams) LAKSH...

Laksh (sits up in a jerk) - kya hua? Kya hua?

Parineeta (laughs) - kuch nahin... Tum jaldi se tayyar ho jaao.. aur neeche aao... aaj makarsankrati hai... saari tayyari poori hogayi hai...

Laksh - wow... matlab aaj kite flying ka competition hoga na...

Parineeta - haa devar ji... agar tum jaldi nahi aaye na toh tumhe apne pasand ka kite nahin milega...

Laksh - ok bhabhi... mai abhi aaya...

Parineeta leaves.. laksh gets ready... he wears a dark brown sherwani and cream pants...

he then goes to the terrace... all wer busy choosing their kites... he too goes thr... ragini was also thr choosing kites... laksh sees ragini... for a moment he was lost... he couldn't take his eyes off her...

Laksh (thinking) - omg... kitni beautiful lag rahi hai... agar ithni akkad na hoti na toh mai sach mai isse zaroor pataatha..

He goes thr and strts choosing kites.. both of them see a colourful kite and grabs it... they stare at each other...

Ragini - isse maine pehele liya...

Laksh - nahin maine..

Ragini - aree...ithni saari patang hai... kuch aur lo na...

Laksh - toh tum lo na... mujhe toh yahi chahiye...

Ragini😡 - dekho laksh... bekaar mai mujse ladna bandh karo...

Laksh 😡- mai nahin.. tum lad rahi ho mujse..

They both argue and janki comes thr..

Janki - ragu.. tu ye le na.. kyu laksh se lad rahi ho.. kal hi toh aaya hai.. har saal tum apne pasand ki kite choose karti ho na... iss baar ye le lo... chalo...

Ragini - fine... (she stomps off in anger)

Hows it guyz???

Edited by VinithaDhawan - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

good start...
nice story...
nice title ..
thanks for the pm

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Linsie

good start...
nice story...
nice title ..
thanks for the pm

Thnx dude... pls do keep reading!!

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@jasminerahul

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

laksh lost in ragini's beauty.so romantic.raglak fight over the kite was funny

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Nice one dear

Continue soon

Thanks 4 d pm

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
laksh lost in ragini's beauty.so romantic.raglak fight over the kite was funny

Thnx!! 😳😳

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Srivalli.t
Awesome story!!
Loved it.

Thnk u!!😊😃

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: .Wissam.
Awesome !!!

Thnk u...❤️😊

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Thnk u 4 all ur warm and encouraging cmmnts... hugs to all u lovelies 🤗 do enjoy this part too...

Part 3

Ragini ws vry angry and left frm there and went home... janki handled the situation and said she ws hvng headache... only laksh ws not convinced by her answer...

Laksh(thinking) - hmm... sar dard toh hai nahin usse... gusse mai chali gayi hai shayad... attitude bohot hai...

At night

Ragini ws sitting on her bed and talking in mob with swara...

Ragini - ab batao.. mai kya karoon...

Swara - whatevr the matter is ragu... tujhe ese ghar waapas nahin aana chahiye tha... isiliye aunty ne gussa kiya na.. aur ithna gussa karne ki zaroorat bhi nahin thi... aunty ne thik hi toh kaha voh ithne saal baad jo aaya hai... tu toh har saal apne pasand ki kite choose karti thi na... iss baar usse karne deti toh kya jaata...

Ragini - ab mai kya karti... voh.. mai.. mujhe bohot gussa agaya tha.. shayad tum thik keh rahi ho... mujhe ese hi gussa nahin karni chahiye thi...

Swara - haan...

Ragini - well.. ab jo hua so hua... aage se mai kabhi ese react nahin karungi... vese tu kab waapas aarahi hai apni trip se? Bohot miss kar rahi tujhe...

Swara - bas 2 din mai... aur fikar not... hum bohot masti karenge..

Ragini - hmm... ofcourse... acha chal bye... and gud night...

Ragini ws lieing on her bed and thinking abt wat hppnd tht day...

Ragini (thinking) - uhhh... mai baar baar uss incident ke baare mai kyu soch rahi hoon... aur neendh bhi nahin aarahi... ek kaam karti hoon.. terrace pe jaake thodi hawa khaaleti hoon..

Ragini ws walking around at the terrace wen she saw laksh ws standing at his terrace... {guys don't 4get their houses r close...}

Laksh ws busy talking to someone... aftr smtime he cut the call and saw ragini... he smiled...

Laksh (thinking) - ye yahan iss waqt kya kar rahi hai?

Ragini ws abt to leave wen he called her...

Laksh - RAGINI...

Ragini turned...

Ragini - kyaa hai?

Laksh - iss samay akele terrace par kya kar rahi ho?

Ragini - dikhaai nahin de raha kya? Thehel rahi hoon...

Laksh - ohh... iss samay?

Ragini - kyu? Tumhe koi taqleef hai?

Laksh - nahin toh... bass pooch raha tha...