RagLak FF -Silsila Ye Chaahat Ka (part 4 updtd on pg 6)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guyz... this is vini.. hope u rmmbr me... this is my new ff on RagLak ofc... i knw i hvnt updated my other FF on RagLak, Nafrat hi hai pyaar... but it has been locked... t r8 nw my mind is occupied by this FF... so pls do share your views.. +ve or -ve... no prob.. thnk u... enjoy!!


RagLak FF - Silsila Ye Chaahat Ka

Characters :
Ragini Gadodia(20yrs) - she is a pretty girl... she is bold and confident...she is vry filmy and luvs her family a lot and can do anythng 4 them... she is vry close with her childhood bff swara and they always share evrythng.. she is scared to speak in front public and fails to deliver speech etc in front of a crowd...
Laksh Maheshwari (23 yrs) - he is vry lively and cheerful... a bundle of positive energy... he is smart and intelligent... loves his mom and dad.. he finished his studies in USA and returns to India to his parents aftr 12yrs...
Swara Bose - raginis best frnd and her constant support system... she is in luv with sanskaar verma since childhood..

Others:
Maheshwaris live in the same neighbourhood of Gadodias
Durgaprasad Maheshwari - lakshs dad.. a successful business man... loves ragini as his own daughter.. she fondly calls him bade papa...he is frnds with shekhar (raginis dad)
Annapoorna Maheshwari - Lakshs mom... she is best frnds with Janki (raginis mom) considers ragini as her own daughter.. she is her badi maa...
Shekhar Gadodia - raginis dad... always supports her...
Janki Gadodia - raginis mom... loves her daughter vry much...
Dadi maa - raginis grandma... shekhars mom...

Hws it guys?? Pls do.cmmnt your views...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Index:

Part 1 - pg 1
Part 2 - pg 2
Part 3 - pg 4
Part 4 - pg 6
Edited by VinithaDhawan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thnx dude...😊 nd pls do pm other raglak fans my FF... so it wud get more reviews... as i dont knw any1 frm this forum... pls do tell other raglak fans!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guyz... pls do send the link of this FF to all raglak fans u knw... thnk u...

Part 1

Gadodia house
A girl is shown running down the stairs in a pink sleeveless top and printed pants...face not shown... her sneakers r shown...

Shekhar - aree ragini... dheere... ithni jaldi mai kahan jaa rahi ho?
Ragini - papa.. mai badi maa se milne jaa rahi hoon... bohot late hogayi... mujhe 10 30 mai jaana tha... abhi dekho na 11 bajh gaye hai... aap logo ne mujhe uthaya kyu nahin?
Janki - acha ji... toh ab galti hamari haaan?? Utthaathi toh tum uth thi kya? Kumbhkaran ki tarah soti ho...
Ragini - maaa... aap bhi na... papa dekho na...
Shekhar (smiling) - janki... usee kyu chida rahi ho?
Janki - chida nahin rahi... jo fact hai bass keh rahi thi...
Ragini - acha mai chalti hoon... mujhe ye designs badi maa ko dena hai... maine promise kiya tha ki mai unhe aaj hi dungi...
Janki - haa baba... jaa... apni badi maa se kiya vaada toh kabhi todegi nahin...

Shekhar laughs... ragini runs out...
Janki ws abt to go to the kitchen...
Shekhar - aree janki... aaj toh durgaprasad ji ka beta aa raha hai na USA se...
Janki - kya? Laksh aaraha hai aaj?? Mujhe toh annapoorna ne kuch nahin bataya... acha toh isiliye ussne voh designs ragu se banwaaye the...

Maheshwari mansion
A guy is shown in a grey hoodie...
Annapoorna - aree laksh... tu fresh hogaya... acha mai abhi tera khaana mangwati hoon...
Yep the guy is none other than our hero... laksh😉
Laksh - ok maa...
Annapoorna leaves to kitchen...laksh strts chcking his phone... just then ragini cms running inside and bumps into him... his phone falls down...

Laksh - aree... andhe...(he sees ragini) i mean andhi ho kya? Kaunse race ki tayyari kar rahi ho??
Ragini - oh Mr... tum phone mai ithne doobe hue the ki kuch dikhaai bhi nahin de rahe the... toh galti sirf meri nahin... tumhari bhi hai... aur vese tum ho kaun??
Laksh - wow... mere hi ghar aake mujse hi poochti ho ki mai kaun hoon?
Ragini - tumhara ghar?? Matlab.. tum laksh ho??
Laksh - yes... i am Laksh Maheshwari...
He bends to take his mobile and sees her sneakers... and chuckles...

Laksh - tum sneakers pehenke ghoomti ho?
Ragini - haan... kyun? Koi problem hai tumhe?
Laksh - nahin toh.. mujhe kya problem hogi...

Annapoorna arrives...
Annapoorna - aree ragu... tu aagayi... tu designs laayi hai na...
Ragini - ji badi maa... ye lo...
Annapoorna - thnx beta... laksh tere room ka design isme se choose karlena...
Laksh - ok ma.. ye ragini hai?
Annapoorna - haa... tumhara khaana laga diya hai... chalo khaalo... ragu tu bhi aa khaana khaale...
Ragini - nahin badi maa... mai chalti hoon...

She leaves... laksh looks on and smirks... annapoorna goes to kitchen...
Just then parineeta bhabhi cms (adarshs wife, adarsh is lakshs big bro)
Parineeta - kya hua lucky? Ragini kaisi lagi?
Laksh - kya matlab?
Parineeta - acchi ladki hai na voh... aur sundar bhi hai...😉
Laksh - haan sundar toh hai... par meri type ki nahin hai bhabhi... sneakers pehenke ghoomti hai voh...
Parineeta - aree idiot... voh bas kabhi kabhi pehenti hai... aur kya hua agar sneakers pehenti hai toh...
Laksh - hmm... sochenge...
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Hows it guyz???
Edited by VinithaDhawan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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beautiful title.very romantic. nice cs.raglak nok jhok was cute.why did parineeti ask laksh about ragini?are they planning for raglak alliance?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

beautiful title.very romantic. nice cs.raglak nok jhok was cute.why did parineeti ask laksh about ragini?are they planning for raglak alliance?


Thnx... and parineeta ws just teasing laksh...😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved the character sketch
amazing start
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thnk u!!😊😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

Loved the character sketch

amazing start
thanks for the pm
continue soon


Thnk u so much!!😳 Pls keep reading...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😊😳 thnk u...

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