RagLak FF ~ Nafrat hi hai Pyaar (Part 3 updated

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hello I'm vini...new to swaragini forum...though I've read almost most of the ff's and OSs...I was a secret reader...I used to watch swaragini...was very sad it got finished so soon... I had written this ff long b4 and used to post in Google plus community of swasan and raglak ff... So thought I wud post it here...hope you will like it...

RagLak FF ~ Nafrat hi hai

Pyaar!

Intro:

*Ragini* - pretty, bubbly, smart girl! She loves her family especially her sister swara!

*Laksh* - Handsome, hot, dashing business tycoon..he hates ragini as he thinks dat it is bcuz of her his brother,sanskaar, committed suicide! He's one angry young man!

*Other characters:*

Swara, durga prasad, shekhar, sharmishta, dadi,annapoorna, just like in serial!!

Swara was wife of sanskaar...now she is living life of a widow!

*New characters:*

Divya - raginis friend

Rohan - laksh's friend

If u want PM's pls do tell..Nd send buddy request...hope u liked the intro...

INDEX:

part 1 - pg 1(down)

Part 2 - pg 2

Part 3 - pg 2

Edited by VinithaDhawan - 8 years ago

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: neilofar
nicectrack yaar plzz post soon

Thnk u... Wil update one if evry1 wants me to... Guess many of them didn't like...😭

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Posted: 8 years ago

nice cs continue soon
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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik
nice cs continue soon
waiting for the updare

Thank u soo much...😃

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi guys...here is the first part...do cmmnt Nd like...

RagLak FF ~ Nafrat hi hai Pyaar

Part 1

In a lane near Ragini's house..

Ragini was with her friend divya busy buying items for decorating Swara's B'day gift!

Ragini - bhaiyya mujhe Zara voh glitter packet dena pls...

Shopkeeper - ye lo beta...

Ragini had 2 bags full of decorations...she was very excited..

Divya - yaar ragini aur kitna saamaan logi?

Ragini - aree sirf 2 hi toh bags hai!! In fact mai toh aur lene ki soch rahi thi..par ghar se itni subah nikli thi na mai...maa zaroor pareshaan hogi...

Just then her phone rang...she picked up!

Ragini - hello...haan maa boliye...

Sharmishta - aree ragini beta kitni der hogayi hai...jaldi ghar aajao...subah se bahar ho...kuch khaaya bhi nahi hai tumne

Ragini - maa maa...relax...main bass ghar hi aarahi hoon...kal swara ka janam din hai...isiliye uss keliye kuch khareedne aayi thi mai...

Sharmishta - acha thik hai...ab jaldi aajao.

Ragini was putting her phone in the bag wen smone bumped into her...and her bags fell down..

Divya - aree araam se...

Ragini - aree...kahan dekh kar chal rahe ho ..mera saara saamaan gira diya...

The person turns...and it is none other than our laksh!

Ragini - laksh tum?

Laksh - haan mai! Kyun?

Ragini - mujhe pehele hi pata hona chahiye tha ki esi harqat tumhare alawa koi aur kar hi nahin sakta!

Laksh - tum jesi dhoke baaz ladki ke saath yahi karna chahiye!

Ragini - LAKSH...!!!

Laksh - chillao Mat ragini...chillana mujhe bhi aata hai!!!

Ragini - mai tumse baath hi kyun kar rahi hoon! Chalo divya...ese logon ke muh lagne se hamara hi time barbaad hoga...

She leaves...

Laksh - (talking to himself) bohot akkad hai na tumhe Ragini Gadodia!!! I swear mai tumhe nahin chodunga!!

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Posted: 8 years ago

it was just awesome..
plz haa post soon

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: neilofar
it was just awesome..
plz haa post soon

Thnk u...pls sent the link of this ff to your friends also who like RagLak...Thnk u soo much if u do so...😊

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@VinithaDhawan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Heyy thnk u to all those who liked my ff and cmmntd...here u go the nxt update...

RagLak FF ~ Nafrat hi hai Pyaar

Part 2

Ragini reached baadi...and rushes into her room..!! She puts all the bags in the chair...

After sm time she goes down...

Sharmishta - aree ragini beta...tum kab aayi? Chalo kuch khaalo..

Ragini - jee maa...

Time fwd - next day

Ragini was busy decorating the whole house... She had already invited the maheshwaris including swara for her B'day!!!

It was evening...everyone got ready for the party...

Maheshwaris entered the house...ragini her mom, dad and dadi...welcomed them!!

Ragini - (hugging swara)Happy B'day swara!!

Swara - Thnk u ragini...

They go inside...

Ragini goes to serve juice for everyone...

Durga prasad - Thnk u beta..

She serves everyone juice...wen she reaches laksh to serve him juice...he purposely put the juice on ragini's dress..

Laksh - ohh srry...(he smirks)

Sharmishta - koi baath nahin laksh beta..ragini tum jaakar kapde badal kar aao...

Ragini - (staring at laksh angrily) jee maa!!

She goes upstairs...

Laksh makes up an excuse and goes upstairs!!

Ragini just changed her dress and wore a pink salwaar...just then she heard a noise outside her room...

Ragini - kaun hai??

She goes to check as there is no response...

She's shocked to see laksh outside..

Ragini - Laksh...tum??? Tumhara problem kya hai??? Chup chupke esi harqat karne mai sharam nahin aata kya????

Laksh - oh shut up ragini...mai esi koi harqat nahin kar raha...

Ragini - acha...! Toh phir mere kamre ke baahar choro ki tarah kya karne aaye the??

Laksh - kuch bhi toh nahin...mai toh bass washroom use karne aaya tha...aur kuch awaaz aayi yahan se...mai sirf dekhne aaya tha...

Ragini - yea...jese ke mai tumhari baath par abhi vishwaas karlungi...

She leaves...laksh also comes down!!

The party goes well...and evry1 goes home!!

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Hw was it guyzz? I knw it's not dat long...but next update is a very long one...and a bit more interesting...!!!!! I promise u dat!!! Pls do cmmmt ur views!!!!

Edited by VinithaDhawan - 8 years ago