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kojagorimalik

@kojagorimalik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Read both the chappy s loved it loadzzz...

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spatika

@spatika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

part 2,
awesome update..
continue soon.
thanks for pm..

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Read all three parts together.. Swara pain that was heartbreaking to read.. I so hated the fact she went through such tortures.. But I loved swasan part of the story the way she found her happiness again with an guy like Sanskaar who respects her and loves her for who she is and not minding her horrible past.. .. Do write an epilogue.. I am sorry for being not regular with comments as such.. I do appreciate all the PM you send.. Will try to read tthe rest of them ASAP..

Love

Nita

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Nivedita

@Nivedita_SS

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

I'm sorry for my late comment harshita. But was totally busy in writing all my stories. Taking small breaks from writing. Read both the chapters together. I must say, both r really amazing. I loved them. The cuteness in the second chapter. And sanskar's turmoil too. He couldn't risk of falling in love once again. But alas, he had to fall for swara. And the third chapter was quite emotional. I loved sanskar's dialogues. He kept it vey simple but still they were very heart touching. It would be very nice if u could extend the story a bit more. But it's ur wish.

Update soon. 🤗 for the pm.

Love u loads

Nivi

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Hi Harshita,
It was a tale of a journey... from heaven to hell... I absolutely loved Sujju and loathed Sumi here. The description was very simple but the struggles are not . Sadly no Sanskar or Sujata live in real world.. 😭

With love,
Dyuti
P.s. If get time, kindly check out my ff.

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kavita_b_2004

@kavita_b_2004

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

In all a beautiful part... They both deserve to be happy... Plz do give us the epilogue...

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Res res res for part 1-3. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Read all the three part together dear Harshi. 😃
Felt very very very bad for Swara that her best friend Rajat betrayed her. 😭 Yuck how he and Sahil used her body like a garbage thrash!! 🤢 😡 😭 Shomi! What to say about her??!! 🤬 🤢 Good that Swara got in the hands of the Maheshwaris. 😃 SanLak were shocked with Swara's report and Sujata was broken coz her own daughter faced the same fate as Swara and even got killed. 😭 Sanskar and Sujata were shocked to see Shomi's reaction after getting to know about Swara. 😲 Poor Swara lost her memory. 😭 Aww! Sujata wanted Sanskar to marry Swara and move on from Kavita. 😳 She even told Swara that Sanskar was her would - be husband. 😉 Loved it that Swara got all the love and care she deserves from Sanskar's family. 😃 Loved the cute convo between SwaSan about if they loves each other or not. 😳 But finally one day Swara got back her memory and remembered her dreadful past after seeing her reports. 😭 And she decided that she was not perfect for Sanskar. 😭 But thank god Sanskar found her and brought her back. 😃 And finally SwaSan confessed their love for each other and decided to stay together. 😃 Eagerly waiting for the epilogue. 😳 Update soon. 😉 Thanks for the pm. 😃
P.S. - Sorry for being late coz my exam is going on.
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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357159pikachu

@357159pikachu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Before I say anything about the updates, I would like to introduce u to myself mate. I am Pika, the name used by all my friends on IF.

Now abt the updates. All the updates were phenomenal. the topic u took up was the best thing. even I have heard such things, its just that some girls do not get such loving people. the betrayal Swara faced by her loved ones and the ones she trusted was penned down beautifully. I felt the pain she was going through, this was the power of ur writing. Sujata and Sanskar's relation was really flawless type. they shared the perfect mother son duo. Really loved the story of Uttara. I got remembered of the Delhi Rape Case for a second.

Sanskar and Swara really shared an unbreakable bond. the lines u said in the last secind part were worth it. u were right that more than love trust is needed in a relationship.

I really lack words to describe this beautiful piece portraying the live and care of a person and the overcoming of the bad past by the other bcoz of the support of her loved one. Really cute and realistic. Beautifully jotted it down.

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Finally back after being Mia from the forum and sorry for late reply...

Wow the story is so intense and emotional...Please don't end it...let us see some of sanskaar past too...

Please do write the epilogue..would love to read it...

Glad to see that there story is based upon love and most importantly trust...

Wicked start...

Raz

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Hey harshu...

Read all in one go...sorry for being late...personal commitments give me less time..going to be wuick now..i just loved this story...was immensely painful as a gitl i connect with swara pain n suffering...just hate those type of people who use others for their satisfaction...after suffering so much swara got much needed love from sunny n his family...it was worth reading...soo serene...loved it...now waiting for epi..

Talia

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