The Apsaras and the Gandharva-A SwaSan slapstick comedy OS-A/N PG 9

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sakura24
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I am here too😛

Btw I am gonna write one which includes yama and chitr gupt as well😈😆

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Hi Friends 🤗🤗🤗

Updated on Page 1 😊

Do read when time permits, and let me know what you felt. Would really love to have your feedback!

Happy Diwali to all of you and yours!

Loads of Love,

-------Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Originally posted by: lucky.m
I am here too😛
Btw I am gonna write one which includes yama and chitr gupt as well😈😆

Lucky...🤗🤗🤗

I updated. Do read and tell me what you felt. 😊

Loads of Love,

------Viji

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve
I will be back (somehow reminds me of a villainous dialogue, unable to place it, will get back on this too)

And I loved, of all the scenes (sadist me - remember I am the Empress of Sadists) the one of Kavita feeding Sanskaar oranges ----oops tangerines. One must get one's facts when talking to or about Swara ji. The truth can die a hundred deaths, the facts never lie. 😃😃

**********sigh*******you had to have him in a dhoti and angavastram,😡 a simple loin cloth, (like those akhada would have have done).

BTW, also loved Ragini's POV on Sanskaar🤣 - maybe she married the wrong brother?????????

I just loved it.Will Get Back. - Anta Maaya, antha Mitya indeed😊

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Lucky...🤗🤗🤗

I updated. Do read and tell me what you felt. 😊

Loads of Love,

------Viji

Waiting for that...😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

🤣 God Viji

I had to rush to wash room to laugh out and I had a tough time covering my giggles ..This is 😆😆..Those Images are like ...I was right there in heaven watching .. and when Cavity made an entry .. I was like .. that was super hit moment for me ..even now i am having hard time trying to hide that grin ..

This is pure love .. A much needed dream for Swara ..😆 I loved it to infinity

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

And I loved, of all the scenes (sadist me - remember I am the Empress of Sadists) the one of Kavita feeding Sanskaar oranges ----oops tangerines. One must get one's facts when talking to or about Swara ji. The truth can die a hundred deaths, the facts never lie. 😃😃

**********sigh*******you had to have him in a dhoti and angavastram,😡 a simple loin cloth, (like those akhada would have have done).

BTW, also loved Ragini's POV on Sanskaar🤣 - maybe she married the wrong brother?????????

I just loved it.Will Get Back. - Anta Maaya, antha Mitya indeed😊

love,
Nyna

Bwahahahaha 🤣😈

I just LOVED making Swara burn and burn----watching Apsaras and then Cavity, drape themselves all over Sunny boy. 😉 😆 Oh yes, he certainly has floored Rambha, Menaka, Urvashi, Ghrutachi, Tilottama and the rest. 😳 😆

Charulatha was always ready to answer exactly what Swara Ji asked, no? 😆 She asked how Cavity dared to try and feed Sanskaar an orange slice from her lips----and Latha promptly told her austerely that after all, it was not an orange, it was a tangerine!! 😆😆 I was actually very happy with that line when I thought of it; I am so thrilled that it met with your seal of approval. 😉

Ahem...Nynu...Dhoti and Angavastra is only later, no? First when he comes out of the river, he is clad in only a damp towel...not a very large one at that. 😛 😳 ☺️ Aow Gawd, what is happening to my imagination!! 😉

As for Ragini---well, she would not be human if she did not wonder that at least a couple of times----whether she had, indeed, married the wrong brother. 😉 And we all know, she is much more of a realist than Swara; who for all her idealism, is rather woolly headed. 😕 But one thing to Ragini's credit, though the thought does strike her; Lucky always remains (to borrow the Idea Cellular jingle) her pumpkin, pumpkin; her honey bunny. 😆 😉

I am so overjoyed to know that you loved this one. Happy Diwali to you and yours, Nynu! And a couple of dozen hugs, kisses, tickles and squeezes, specially for the Cuddle Master. 🤗

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

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Nivedita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Viji 🤗,

This was amazingly hilarious. How did u ever write it? U were controlling ur laugh while writing, weren't u? The first part totally cracked me up. I had to rush to the balcony and laugh. I'm still giggling. The cavity cracked me up totally. But surely one can't resist the hotness of sanskar, can anyone? The apsaras themselves can't, then how can we mere humans who are big fan girls of sanskar can resist him 😉. Oh god! Even ragini ogles her jeth ji. Very bad ragini. Behen ka pati hai aur pati ka bhai, kuch to sharam karo. U spoke like that infront of his wife. Swara's jealousy was at peak. And she was all set to manao her,umm- hot husband. And swara's thought dilwali apne dulhe ko lekar hi jayegi was awesome. Destiny surely has its own plans.

I am not able to control my giggles even now.

Wish u a very happy dhanteras and a safe Diwali.

Love u loads

Nivi

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: lucky.m
🤣 God Viji
I had to rush to wash room to laugh out and I had a tough time covering my giggles ..This is 😆😆..Those Images are like ...I was right there in heaven watching .. and when Cavity made an entry .. I was like .. that was super hit moment for me ..even now i am having hard time trying to hide that grin ..

This is pure love .. A much needed dream for Swara ..😆 I loved it to infinity

Lucky dear 🤗🤗

I am just so thrilled to know that you loved it, yaar. 🤗 Glad I could make you laugh. 😆

I could not resist making Swara go green with envy, first with all those celestial Apsaras, and then Cavity! Aow Gawd, imagine her haalat if Sunny had actually taken that orange----oops----tangerine----from Kavita's lips, using his mouth. 😉 😈 She would have blazed in a green flame, right into a crisp cinder. 🤣

I was having a hard time controlling my laughter while writing this OS as well. 😆 😆 Was biting my lips hard, in fact. 🤣

Loads of Love,

-----Viji

Edited by Cogito_Ergo_Sum - 8 years ago

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