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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Count me in ..She is still in bubble of i am right 😡 😡..And I am watching too.. This is really so not done Swara😡..

@harshada- Sorry dear.. Cant help it😆

Woah! Here Nita also joins us😆

Its okay...you don't have to help it either😉

Everyone is getting frustrated with this track. I am hating every track from ML track.

I just love one epi...and thats...Natkhat Bansi wale gokul ke raja I am obsessed with that song Don't know how many times I was re watched it😆

Edited by Alvapriya - 8 years ago

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Nivedita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Unressed on page 1 harshu. Took a longer time, I guess. Sorry for the delayed reply. But would like to say once again, I loved it totally.

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Res😳
Unres
Bad!!😲 Are u kidding me harshu. This is marvelous. In fact I was so lost in the story that I didn't knew when I reached the end of the story. I loved it totally harshu. U have penned out everything I so wanted to say. His agony on separating from his love made me speechless. I'm little partial toward sanskar. Not that I don't like swara but I can relate more to sanskar than to swara. Sindoor had a pivotal role to play in swasan's relationship. With sindoor started the most pious relationship which we adore like earth and heaven. Want from swara's pov too. What she felt when she herself broke their relationship which they built with so much of trust and love. Of course, only if you are free.
Take care
Love u loads
Nivi

Hey dear Nivi,

Thats so really sweet of you...

Thank you ...Thank you so very much...

Glad you enjoyed reading this shot so much and could connect with the flow of story...

I didnt plan this long one...just efforts of some 1/2 an hour😆

I dont think I will be writing swara's pov yar...

Just watched repeat of yesterday's episode and I was like ...Errm What Swara🤔

She trusts Nikhil so much but where her trust had vanished when it came to Sanskar?

No...Swara is wrong ...very very wrong and thats it! No second thoughts over it.

I rather write something again for Sanskar😊

But let's see...what I can do...

Love

-Harshada

Edited by Alvapriya - 8 years ago

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Unressed on page 1 harshu. Took a longer time, I guess. Sorry for the delayed reply. But would like to say once again, I loved it totally.

Replied above😳

Thank you so much😊

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Hey dear,
Thank you so very much...
Its a pleasure to know that you liked this short OS...
I was writing something else but it came out to be something else rather I guess😆
I just wanted to pen down something on that song as whenever I listen to it, I just think its the most suitable one for Swasan.

Thanks a lot dear...
Do let me know your name if you don't mind.

Love
-Harshada

Hi Harshada,

I am Sharon. I have accepted your friend request. I am currently writing an SS. Since I pm everyone on my list you will receive the updates as well. If you dont wish to receive pm for that stpry, you can remove me from your friends list . No offence taken.

Cheers

Sharon

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Hi Harshada,

I am Sharon. I have accepted your friend request. I am currently writing an SS. Since I pm everyone on my list you will receive the updates as well. If you dont wish to receive pm for that stpry, you can remove me from your friends list . No offence taken.

Cheers
Sharon

Hey Sharon,
Your name reminded me of d3
Will surely give a read dear...
I might get little late in commenting as I am dealing with lots of health issues and some other things as well...

Love
- Harshada

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: anu012
Superb os
beautifully written sanskar pov
loved it

thnks for pm

Thank you so much Anu...
Glad you liked the os...

Happy diwali in advance dear...

Love
- Harshada

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Sharon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Hey Sharon,
Your name reminded me of d3
Will surely give a read dear...
I might get little late in commenting as I am dealing with lots of health issues and some other things as well...

Love
- Harshada

No worries. . Take care of your health.

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Manisha Bhardwaj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

I loved it
His pov is to the point..
Poor swasan..

Thanks

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Dear Harshada,
Lovely OS - Sanskaar journey, and his remembering the same, each incident which once caused him sorrow and untold joy, now only causes him agony.

I hate this track, but as I told Lucky, it seems to be very inspiring, though I seem to be seeing a slow settling down of opinions, well I seem to be doing so too. However hard I think, however hard I try, I cannot help think that it is Swara who is more at fault, so much so that Sanskaar's flaws fade into relative insignificance.

And I hate the feeling that most of us have, and which is a fact, Swara is so sure of Sanskaar's love for her that she is confident that he will simply take her back once she says sorry. Honestly, as far as the episodes have been telecast (I am not watching them so I hope I am wrong) not once has she appeared sorry or contrite for the way she walked out. And the LU/ WU for Sanskaar / Nikhil confrontation show that she once again trusts her childhood friend, whom she has not seen for more than 10 years over her husband. I am giving up on her, again.🤢

I am sorry for the rambling reply.

love,
Nyna