SwaSan OS: I Am Not Perfect (Updated )(19/10/16 ) - Page 9

Originally posted by: krishuuu

My doll...😊

My my my..what should i say...im not sure if swasan are perfect or not but i can guarantee youthat this OS was perfect..im speechless...😃Aww Talia dear..You leave me speechless too😳 😳..How can anyone respond to such a lovely comment.. Just do know i am so so happy to know you liked the OS...

Well i must say conversation comes so easy n natural to you..i told you before i just love this way (conversation) to solve misunderstanding..it felt like two mature person talking their heart out...both left their egos ..n talk what they felt...hurt..disappointed...i reread again to get that feel...two people clearing everthing..coz their relation is important to them..then anything else inthis world...it was magical...👏..Well i must say i am beginning to worry about this aspect of mine.. As the conversation length grows for every update of mine 😆.. It like i cant stop myself from writing conversation..One can read a lengthy conversation between SwaSan i suppose but when i venture into other character in BTM that were i am worried. That i am spending too much time on conversation ..But leaving BTM struggle aside.. Given my love for solving MU through conversation ..I am happy you liked this OS.. 😃..And thanks dear for not finding it boring but magical 😃 😃.. Sometime i really cant believe if your comment is for my works or not as your comment does make me feel like i wrote something good which i was not sure about when i posted it 😆..

Wished cvs have point % of your thinking n writing capabilities😕..swaragini drama would be on top.😊..but alas...i just loved your version of swasan😊..their own reason to be parted.😭.sanky purposely n swara unknowingly..😉.but its good they united finally...im soo glad now...last part made me all laughing..😆.family finally got reason to stop them again from leaving...enjoyed their convo in end🤣..thank you for this masterpiece...👍🏼..In show we have to sing Swaragini swaragini with Cvs ..No other way... So yeah we had to write our own version😆... I am happy you enjoyed it talia dear.. Thank you for this lovely comment dearest..Really happy to know you liked it

Love you to moon n back..🤗

Talia

Love you lots and lots too🤗

Nita

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Res again

Originally posted by: 357159pikachu

Awesome one Nita! Really didn't expect it to go this way. I wish CVs were this intelligent too. But koi nahi! Swasan takkar track is also good. Thanks Pikachu 😃..Really happy to know you liked the OS..Yeah i had to choose this way to resolve the MU between them as i cant think how to change the present track into an happy ending..Cvs are too intelligent to torture us though😆... Well i like SwaSan centric track but my expectations with the track wont be satisified by our cvs and i am fully aware of that as well

And really Sanskar looked so Sanskar. He is perfect for Swara but that doesnt mean he has to perfect for all. Kudos to you! 👏👏👏. I mean I cant really express it nicely.I really feel like i have lost the real sanskar i used to love in the show recently.So i am attempting to bring him back in my OS..Yes he is perfect for Swara but he is still him and he cant just change everything about who he is ..

And Swara was back to being Swara Maheshwari again, sorry Swara Sanskar Maheshwari. The one whom we saw during the Kavita track. She fought for him against him. That was the Swara i have always wished for and you portrayed the same Swara over here. Really loved it.Yeah that is the Swara i loved..As during that time i know how much Sanskar meant to her ..Now sadly i cant connect with her ..So i had to bring back the old Swara i dearly loved..And i am really happy to know you loved it too Pikachu😃

And Swaragini serial obvisously has to roam around after the sister's bonding because it shows the love of sister's but I really wanted something on Sanskar's POV. And this is exactly what i wanted to read. Loved it. Do write some more as well if possible. Yeah Sister bond is over the top in all episodes recently..For two minutes of SwaSan we have to see the enitre episode .Poor us ... I too want sanskar pov so i wrote this one.And i am happy you felt it depicts Sanskar POV.. Well i still have to update my recent ongoing FF..So will try to something new once i find time..

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: aamias

hi Nita 🤗

u r such a sweet heart so well spoken I am quite jealous of u. I am not like u dearie I am really frustated with the track specially that MM hypocrites and Sanskar's behaviour with them. U potray the chars so well / Swasan conversation was so good it really touched my heart . I u showd both are imperfect and the way they settle things is so awww .

i liked this story infact i loved this story will u send to honeymoon and

Originally posted by: Teddy94

Awesome os Nita...

Swasan r imperfect yet perfect with each other...

Loved the way hw u portrayed their characters...

I wish rp would be like this in show too...

Do write moreee...

Originally posted by: raaz19

Dear nita...

Firstly I owe you an apology for the late reply...have been a silent reader of all your work over the last few week's says months...but what can I do when I read the prologue of this lovely os is just made me want to comment..Hi Razia dear🤗..Sorry for such a late reply..I understand you..So please no need for apology..I have been a silent reader too for most of the works i have read 😭..I am just happy to know you read my works 😃..

Word such as awesome rocking and beautifully written are not enough for this wonderful piece that you have written...let me just say this journey was magic in the sense that it has perfectly explored the insecurity that they have in there relationship...I loved the way that you explored the individualinks personalities of swara and sanskaar and I loved they way that they both had a heart to heart about what they really felt...I am really happy to read that actually..I didnt think i could do justice to both characters most of the time as i connect with Sanskar the most..But even when i wrote this OS my feeling for Swara were not so much lovely 😆..But inspite of that i tried to see from both sides hence the OS..Heart to heart talk is my obsession and i am glad you liked it .. 😃

It was nice to see that swara finally came to her husband and for once did what she thought was right for her relationship over everything else. ..Yeah it my deepest wish to see her choose him over everyone else..Hope to see it soon in the show once😊... So if i dont get it in show, i write about it 😆...

The bond reflected between ram and swara was sweet and it always portrayed what I felt when I watched him on the show...like sanskaar he is guy that speaks through his eyes rather then words...loved that he was protective of his son and that on return sanskaar also shared that feeling. ...See RP is the most underutilized character in that show, DP talks and talks but RP never does..And i dont think Sujatha would have been able to give advice like RP can.. I wish in show too we get chances to explore more of it rather than statue RP all the time..

Again you have shown that sanskaar is a man of many shades but one emotion that he hold close to him.is that he doesn't force his loved once to chose between him and his family...He values what they feel as the most important part of there connection...loved the bond shown between the two that they knew some thing is wrong and that they had to fix it. ..The conversation of there own dreams was a nice read...Yep Sanskar is defiantly unique and as you said he doesnt force his loved once to chose and i wish he walked off like the OS..This OS was written when i found Swara breaks her promise.. And i wanted this to be his reaction. Though i hated his condition in the end on the show, i still felt it was his desperate attempt to make her stay back and not like he was forcing her to choose..Just my pov..So i didnt mind it that much when it happened...And how i wish they realized that instead of blaming each other just like in the show..Swara new dream is wedding planner, and sanskar new dream is giving punsihment to swara and my new dream is to stop watching this show 😆

The end once again ended with a cliff hanger and somehow I really wanted to see what would have happened after uttra wedding...Uttara wedding scenario is something i am bit angry about..Like we need one more gayathri and her antics😆..I didnt mean to end it in cliff hanger.It just to show they always will be there for MM people but this time they wont let it cause seperation between them..

The best message of the os was that I'd love is true then any hurdle can be dealt with and any mistakes understanding can be cleared as trust is the most strongest emotions that one needs to keep the relationship alive...Thanks for sharing this message in this lovely piece. ..Yep that was what i was trying to say but from the looks of it makers are coming with another strong message like please dont expect anything from us we will disappoint you like always

Sorry I do not comment enough on your work but let me say I appreciate every pm I receive...As i said ..You read it and liked it that more than enough for me .No need for sorry,and i will continue to torture you with my PM dont worry about it .Thanks dear for this lovely comment that sure did make me an one happy person

Hope to read more of your work soon...Well i did write three OS after this ..I am sure you would be hoping i would stop now😆

Take care...

Razia

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: Eranga

Hi Nita, Hi Eranga dearest 🤗..So sorry for taking so long to reply back...

It's so beautiful dear.. Just perfect.. 👏👏 Thanks dearest..Really happy to know you liked the OS and found it good😃 😃

Read many OSs regarding this track. But this is the only one which portrayed what I feel.. 😊

Especially my eyes stopped in these lines,

"He never expected anything from her, well that what he promised himself when he first decided to help her, then he wanted her friendship, then he wanted her love, and now he wanted her to choose him over her family.." So touched to read that, i am super glad that it portrayed how you feel..And i loved the fact you liked those lines😳..His expectation did increase by time after all he is human too..We always expect for more from our loved ones

Just love the way you pin point each ones mistakes.. And your justification is the perfect answer to those who blabber 'Swara doesn't love Sanskar'.. 👏 ..I am not too much of Swara lover now😆..But i will not question her love for him..She loves him and with that i dont have doubt..Both of them do love each other..And both of them do have mistakes as well..

Then the perfect happy ending, rather it's a new beginning for them.. ❤️❤️

In this whole drama of "Destiny games", Swara is the one who suffered most.. As you said, somewhere behind those responsibilities as a daughter, bahu and wife ,she lost her real identity.. And I would love to see the real serial bring back that carefree girl.. 😉 The only one that had perfect happy ending in my recent OS 😆.. And i dont trust the show to give me back the old swara.... She suffered the most i agree with that but the current track i am not able to sympathies with her at all , i wish Cvs didnt choose seperation like this way😡..Just my pov..

So thanks dear for this lovely OS.. Thoroughly enjoyed it. 🤗 ..I am happy to know you liked it Eranga dear.. And it makes me happy to know you enjoyed it ..Thanks for the lovely comment and once again so sorry for such a late reply back

Eranga

Love

Nita