The Match Fixers - A SwaRagini Minishot - Page 3

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Well it doable Nyna but I have to rewrite it all.. That seems tough.. As there was a sequence and I have to redo it.. I really wanted to end with swasan..

But I decided to redo ragya next part and swasan too.. Gonna end with miss X.. I so wanted to end on swasan.. But nope it will be too much of an boring update..

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Kada😉

Seriously, that is the precise expression I had (only difference I have two eyes😆😆) when I got the news of the track.I mean what🤬

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Tani,

I am so glad you liked it, I always feel that resorting to humour is the best way to deal with the inane, stupid illogical tracks that are dished out to us.

That song is an echo of me losing my patience. I have never ever minded the sisterly bond, even when everyone hated it, but this time I would have preferred a little more focus on their relations with their husbands. But no, instead, we have them planning weddings and dancing at the receptions. 😡😡😡

love,

Nyna

Originally posted by: elsanna

Hmmm...nyna di couples track to milne rahenge na.😳...bt the USP of the show our swaragini hi nai hogi to kya fayada...😭

CVS fab song...swaragini...swaragini...poore jod shor se bajega ab to...🤣

Originally posted by: StarySKY

Nynu .. 🤗

I was ROFL once I read it .. 🤣🤣

I am still laughing ..

Oh , I loved it ..

Dear Khushi, see what fun the track is, and we get upset at the CVs😉 - I had to get it out of my system, as I replied to Lucky above, that minion was exactly how I looked and felt

I am currently upset from the whole track .. and last night my sister kept on her rambling about how she is angery on Swara for leaving Sanskar .. and how Sanskar should never forgive her ever ..

Though I was angery too .. this scene she made was cute as she was standing on the bed and talking .. 😆

You do seem to share a loving bond with your sister, which is how sister are supposed to be and I never minded the sister track in the serial too, but they now seemed to be going on the overkill. And I do agree partly with you, Sanskaar should not forgive Swara so easily, she has to learn that forgiveness has to be earned. But then, I do not think it will happen.🤢

This minishot made me feel light and I am all laughing ..

Thank you for that ..

The sister conversation and their thinking .. and the best part is the ending .. 🤣

I love the fact that you could laugh while reading it, I was hoping that their conversation (when they did some serious introspection) would actually help them realise where exactly they had gone wrong. They did but then as usual they went about it in a real stupid fashion, as they are prone to do - behana is first and foremost The

Actually I am surprised .. 😲

Me and my sister were having this discussion ( well she didn't let me sleep ) .. so I end up saying that maybe they ( Swaragini ) are doing wedding planning because they each one got married for 3 times .. to the same person .. 😆

And you wrote it here .. 😲

There is a quote, "great men think alike" though I am worried, now the CVs would be convinced that my attempt at sarcasm is actually praise for their idiotic track - A marriage bureau😡 are they serious, I mean🤬 they had no other idea.???

I loved loved it .. 👏

*a bow down*

And as I said, I am happy that you loved it.😳😳

Love

Khushi

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

As the serial is Swaragini .. it will be focusing on them I know .. that what different in it from other serials .. it was about sisters bond .. and I like the un usual ideas showing different bonds ( Frozen is one of my favourite moives as it was mainly about the 2 sisters )

Me too never minded the sister track in the serial .. but sometimes they would be going to far especially when it come to Sanskar and Laksh .. I am angery on both sisters as they have that habit of hiding things from their husbands and always end up in troubles due to that ..

And now I don't know what to say about the two when they for real give up on their realtion and doing wedding planning ..

And Cvs I don't know how they are thinking ..

Every time I will put some theories about how the track will go .. I would put the most illogical thought I have but every time .. I will be in shock as the Cvs will give something more illogical ..

I hope they give good track this time ..

Originally posted by: StarySKY

As the serial is Swaragini .. it will be focusing on them I know .. that what different in it from other serials .. it was about sisters bond .. and I like the un usual ideas showing different bonds ( Frozen is one of my favourite moives as it was mainly about the 2 sisters )

Me too never minded the sister track in the serial .. but sometimes they would be going to far especially when it come to Sanskar and Laksh .. I am angery on both sisters as they have that habit of hiding things from their husbands and always end up in troubles due to that ..

And now I don't know what to say about the two when they for real give up on their realtion and doing wedding planning ..

And Cvs I don't know how they are thinking ..

Every time I will put some theories about how the track will go .. I would put the most illogical thought I have but every time .. I will be in shock as the Cvs will give something more illogical ..

I hope they give good track this time ..

Originally posted by: priya_86

Reading a story in IF after a long time. You are amazing storyteller Nyna. The words are beautifully chosen, and the story flows in an effortless manner. Flawless language and emotions beautifully expressed. I love your style of writing.😊