The Match Fixers - A SwaRagini Minishot - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum



Will be back for a detailed take, Nynu...I liked it a lot!! 😆 Several extremely witty shots there, I was grinning away to myself, though the setting obviously carried a fair bit of angst. Trust you to be able to see humor even in those dark times. 😆

Well, laughter is the best medicine, and I think all of us need it. I mean, how in the whole world did the separation track land up in the Behana track, the love of their lives are missing and the sisters are not concerned in the least.

The ending scene, the song selection, the sisters walking hand in hand...😆 🤣 I didn't know whether to laugh hysterically or cry in sheer pique! 😆 And all the rationale given as to why and how they had the best qualifications to open a marriage bureau...the reason why they had switched musical instruments of choice. 🤣
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The ending scene, I am actually patting my self, I am not against the sisterly bond, but given the circumstances, it is definitely not the time for the behana bond. And I had to rack my brains, why swap the instruments. (I am sure that just because one can play the guitar gives them immediate mastery over the sitar - the frets are positioned differently, the instrument is held differently, the sitting posture are different and here we have them, playing each other's instruments as though they were simply exchanging their personal guitars / sitars (even in this case, it takes a little time to get used to)😡😡😡.And where is the necessity to switch the instruments

Sigh...well, lets hope that the serial either handles this leap and the SwaSan equation in a thrilling, intense manner...or has this wry, deft touch with situational humor. 😆 I fear, though, that they just might do neither... Let's see (and hope!) 😉 😊 I must admit, I am kind of looking forward to it.

Correct, I mean the track actually has a potential for both, an angst ridden, pining for each other scenes (both couples) and a little humour to provide relief (imagine the possibilities for humour with the Marriage Bureau theme). But I am more inclined to believe that this track will be also ruined 🤢🤢

Love,

----Viji



Dear Viji,

Replied in blue above, will wait for the detailed take😳

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: BookWormV

Okaaay! Nyna I have to commend you for very logically putting the utter stupidity happening on SwaRagini. *bows down*


I had grand plans of using my day off, to clear off my pending res, fine tune chapter 5 and work on my 'permanent-in-the-draft-stage' FF. But then reading the upcoming track spoilers really got my goat. Each time I think that this is the limit, there is no way they can be more stupid, the CVs take it as a challenge and say, "Oh ya, just wait and watch" And this is my way of getting back at them.

The explanations and thoughts swirling in Swara and Ragini's heads in the first two parts was so well thought out. I liked your take here. That EHMMBH song in the end had me cringing.
Very well written.

The thoughts were my idea of what girls should actually be doing. It would have been nice if their actions followed the logical course of altering their outlook just a little bit, so that they could truly mend their relations.

But no, such expectations are so predictable, so it is like suddenly, they decide, okay, if we have to learn from each other, might as well exchange the instruments. I am like -" eh, where did it come from????????" Of course, once their grip on logic was lost, it had to end in enactment of the EHMMBH song. (pity, I never hated the song earlier, now I am like🤢 or 😡)
-V
P.S.: Is it me or is this mini shot mocking the CVs?? Or maybe it is my wishful thinking.? Yikes!

We dare not mock the CVs - they are the creative Gods😆😆. All we mere mortals can do is to indulge in wishful thinking and strive to wrap our peanut sized brains around their profound and awesome logic.😉


Dear Vrinda,

Replied in blue above,

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: NitaReid

Nyna dear.. I love you for this OS... It made me laugh.. You were spot on what an marriage Bureau indeed .. Thanks love.. How can you and Viji right such different yet amazing pov.. That I am nodding my head all along.. I wish I had time to reply back.. Will do it soon though


Dear Nita,

I am so glad you could laugh, that is what I wanted the readers to. I could tolerate everything they dished out, but the two of them decide to open a marriage bureau. So I wanted to see I could understand the creative thinking behind such an apparently ridiculous decision. And here we are, see such a logical and rational decision.🤣

Take your time

love,
Nyna

PS - any chance of an update today???
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Dear Nita,

I am so glad you could laugh, that is what I wanted the readers to. I could tolerate everything they dished out, but the two of them decide to open a marriage bureau. So I wanted to see I could understand the creative thinking behind such an apparently ridiculous decision. And here we are, see such a logical and rational decision.🤣

Take your time

love,
Nyna

PS - any chance of an update today???




Update.. Hmm.. I was gonna make an note in that thread regarding that let me ask you here itself.. Your's is an mini shot and mine is becoming an mega shot..It keeps going on and on.. Miss X part i have been typing forever.. Two hours later i am left with an question of how on earth will i post it all as an single update.. I even reduced the SS of the suspects to a bare minimum ..Yet there is the this parallel ragya track i have started and it taking up lot of SS .. What should i do Nyna dear.. .. If i divide it into two again then miss x wont appear..And i am in dilemma..


I still got just few moment left and i am done..Yet i will this might be an boring long update..Suggest me something






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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

🤣 God Nynu ..This makes more sense than the crappy logic , In fact no logic and nonsense mode both behna's are in . Look at them dancing like nothing happened...

So witty and that question of how many times did they get married😆 What could be perfect than marriage bureau for Gadodia family business👏👍🏼 ..the ones who couldn't save there's will get others married ..😡..

I totally get your sentiments and I am with you but this OS 😳 esp Swara's part thinking of Sunny😳.bangaram kevvu keka kada😉


Love
Lucky


Kada, Lucky, absolutely devoid of logic and reason. Both of them are separated from the men they love and yet are in their own Lala land, dancing away to glory. And why could they simply not continue with the music theme and open a music school, I think that Sargam Foundation is still there, right (unless the trust papers were signed in magic ink and faded over the months😆😆😆)

Seriously, I wanted to ask the CV what they were thinking till I remembered:



Swara, she is so confident of Sanskaar's love for her, she does take him for granted. Even after logically reasoning out where she was wrong and understanding what she has to do, both of them end up with the EHMMBH😡😡😡 (I have nothing against the sisterly bond, but there is a limit and a time and place for everything)

I dread this track too😭 though Sunny boy is (you will get a lot of pics for your banners

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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@nynu
That banner is just🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: NitaReid



Update.. Hmm.. I was gonna make an note in that thread regarding that let me ask you here itself.. Your's is an mini shot and mine is becoming an mega shot..It keeps going on and on.. Miss X part i have been typing forever.. Two hours later i am left with an question of how on earth will i post it all as an single update.. I even reduced the SS of the suspects to a bare minimum ..Yet there is the this parallel ragya track i have started and it taking up lot of SS .. What should i do Nyna dear.. .. If i divide it into two again then miss x wont appear..And i am in dilemma..


I still got just few moment left and i am done..Yet i will this might be an boring long update..Suggest me something


Hmmm... first separate the tracks and halve each of them and mix it up - so you would have half of each track in one update and the other parts in the next update. You could give us hints as to Ms. X, maybe a glimpse into her past etc. which could allow us to make a reasonable guess but keeps the suspense to the maximum.

It is a trifle difficult but doable😊

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: elsanna

Beautifully penned down nyna di👏

Loved it

Most hilarious was last song🤣

Tani


Dear Tani,

I am so glad you liked it, I always feel that resorting to humour is the best way to deal with the inane, stupid illogical tracks that are dished out to us.

That song is an echo of me losing my patience. I have never ever minded the sisterly bond, even when everyone hated it, but this time I would have preferred a little more focus on their relations with their husbands. But no, instead, we have them planning weddings and dancing at the receptions. 😡😡😡

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

@nynu

That banner is just🤣🤣


Kada😉

Seriously, that is the precise expression I had (only difference I have two eyes😆😆) when I got the news of the track.I mean what🤬🤬🤬🤬
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Well it doable Nyna but I have to rewrite it all.. That seems tough.. As there was a sequence and I have to redo it.. I really wanted to end with swasan..


But I decided to redo ragya next part and swasan too.. Gonna end with miss X.. I so wanted to end on swasan.. But nope it will be too much of an boring update..

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