Vajra An Elven Tale Updated chapter 23 B pg 4 (18/12/17)

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Nynu love you for this! I was rereading the same chapter ahh the elven lands and their mystic feels...I'm on my way back to you!

Will reply later in the course of this week, your tremendously insightful comment needs a thoughtfully arranged revert.

Lots of love,

Saku

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#252

Originally posted by: Sakura24

You can do both Nynu dear, because I'm not sure when part two would make it through the editing machine.
Take your time, but I do hope for three detailed accounts on the three parts.
Well, he is not the master of the blade yet. Waiting to hear from you.
Love,
Saku

Dear Saku,

And I finally managed for all the four of them, before you updated Chapter 21. Not sure how detailed or coherent they were, but re reading did work me up into a state of bliss. And now a little bird tells me we will soon have Chapter 21. Yayyy... and for a change a different dance

I think I missed your reply - hence ETA

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Nynu love you for this! I was rereading the same chapter ahh the elven lands and their mystic feels...I'm on my way back to you!
Will reply later in the course of this week, your tremendously insightful comment needs a thoughtfully arranged revert.
Lots of love,
Saku

take your time, sweetheart, I took almost three months😳Maybe we could have chapter 21 first😊

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#253

And yes - RES for Chapter 21😃

Unres - yes within three hours of your pm - quite an achievement for me

Vajra Chapter 21A

And indeed the clouds gather, with the ending a pale reflection of Swara's dream, surprising no longer, she dreams of Sanskaar but feels everything he does. No wonder, he feels at peach knowing she is near but hates himself for doing so and yes, when did she ever listen to him? On the other hand, that is precisely what would save them, right, her stubbornness of
not listening to him, of not paying attention to reason , of not listening to anybody but the cryptic messages of her heart.

The nethra mandapam, another brilliant piece of writing, the description of the architecture and that of the king, Pratula. So he is aware of Swara's ancestry, I doubt, Mohan would never let Pratula know that Swara is Arya's daughter, from what I could understand, since Arya had the first right to the throne her daughter would gain precedence over Pratula.

So Aithne was forged in the blood of dragons, which is why it is considered divine as no mortal flame gave birth to it. But then, it is not exactly divine, considering the evil it could unleash, rather the evil the hand which wielded it. After all a lifeless blade with a capability of speaking to its wielder, needs great strength to be subdued and as you once let me know, Laksh cannot be the master of such a blade.

I wonder what role Keshav would have to play, he suspects Sanskaar of not being who he says he is, but is not able to place him correctly. Maybe he would be an ally, after all, death seems to be the only way he would be free, and it would be better to die saving someone else, he could live on. Sanskaar does give a hint, "it would change this time," certainly the rules or the game, and maybe even the game itself would change.

It was so wonderful reading about the elven lands, a lovely way to end my day. Keep writing and we will be waiting for each update.

lots of love
Nyna

PS: Swara saying, we are not married or something and Megha retorting that her mother in law was a lovely lady whose company she would enjoy - lovely subtle humor

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#254

Me! Me! I'm here too! Greedy and nagging me! 😳 😃 😆

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

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I feel like a celebrity being chased by fan girls😎

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Mini_samavedam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#256

To respected author,
This is my first post at this forum.I am glad that it is in appreciation of your work of fiction.I have till now silently read all your works. But this elven tale broke last of my constraint to not participate in any activity of this forum. I have always been a great admirer of your works. But this has struck a chord with me like none other.I confess to have read all the chapters in one go- at a stretch of eleven hours.I aluade your imagination and the details which you give to the audience- be it background or emmotions.

Plz, plz, plz do update soon if there are no hinderances to do so.Consider this as a fan request.

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

#257

whose here for an a happy dance with me and yes I am gonna go lost in land of vajra ..😳 be right back ..😉🤗❤️ for a super quick update darling

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Anahita_Leve

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Posted: 8 years ago

#258

I'll read it ! But first let me tell! YAAAYYY!!!! 😃

Dear Saku,
You can't imagine, how much happy you've made us today.

Chapter 21A:
I'm admiring the bonding of Megha and Swara. This man has turned from a hostile persona to caring friend, guide and protector. He has taken the responsibility to make oblivious pawn to teach the complex history of elven lands. He's keen observer too and observed the overwhelming attraction between Vajra prince and Swara... Vajra prince has an eye on THE EYE! How much these two deny... their actions speak otherwise. She sets her feet in the land of foes in spite of aware of the imminent danger... and he can sense her in the air... feel calm and agonised... such a trouble this love is... you can't live in peace yet can't live without it!

Sanskar has entered as competitor in a game of death to protect his brother... that brother who's after his every posessions even his life. Pratula is dangerous. Swara is getting more and more tangled in these Web of power games, sometimes as a pawn, sometimes as a shield, sometimes as a object of revenge... One manipulated and manipulator did wanted her far away from this, but ... "When have she ever listened to him?"

Hope you'll awe us again soon.

Love,
Dyuti

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lucky.m

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: lucky.m
I am here too😉

And its over already.before I could soak in my happiness . I wish this was a book where I could flip pages wishing they would never end .. but small and short to start with .. I am all in to happy dance ..and read it twice already ..may be thrice😉

Ahh Cosmic connection .. I absolutely loved and loved the start with Swara ,feeling his pain and how you ended with Sanskaar ..my yuvraaj ..absolutely splendid Saku👏👏⭐️

Megha .. I am liking this fellow .. the conversation between them was so breezy and easy flowing .. and Swara might have just expressed her deep down desire .."We are not getting married or something." ahh .. where did that come from 😳😆

Aithne ..steel heated in fire of dragon and so pure but tainted beyond repair .. what a lovely way letting readers know what Aithne is capable of 👏👏⭐️

Pratula has a scheme ..pitting Swara against Suvanna/Ragini . Sister war, gonna be damn interesting I bet between witch and eye .Now If Swara is in Padmapeetha .. that means she gonna meet Laksh? and how would the equation be ? Is Laksh still under spell of Suvanna or he was just acting .. Just wanted to recollect.😲

Keshav and Sanskaar .. Well, He couldn't figure out and reached to conclusion that Sanskaar is not an Vajra bcos Sanskaar also shares roots of Naga's ? I enjoyed that littlle teaching session between them and last paragraph just had me grinning ..😳 Yuvraaj and his musing

Last but not least Loved how you described Netra Mandapa ⭐️..

Reading Vajra after long ..feeling nostalgic and I am glad it is back as well you are ❤️

Love

Lucky

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: lucky.m
whose here for an a happy dance with me and yes I am gonna go lost in land of vajra ..😳 be right back ..😉🤗❤️ for a super quick update darling

Lucky 🤗

My dear lady pray take care these lands are very very dangerous for a young woman to roam alone!🤔

Glad you're here sweetie, enjoy!😃