SwaSan SS: Amaranthine - A/N pg. 70 10/12 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

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Dear Nyna,

I know there should be no sorry exchanges between us but I can't help it. I really feel bad for not being able to come here often and comment on stories here they way I prefer to do.

I am sorry too, not because of you being late, but because it is ill health that is keeping you away. Hope you are soon back to your healthy self and we see you more often, fit and fine.

Coming to the update, I guess you are ready to create the magic of sweet deals again with Amarthine. I absolutely have loved sweet deals. Remember I had given a read to 9 chapters in a go and when I read the first update of Amarthine, I was like...No it wasn't just sweet deals but your every work is going to have the same magic and it is going to take me in your land of tales.

You know I took quite a long time in reading the second installment of this story. Because I fall for your every line which tends to take me back to read it again and again 😆👏

I do recall you read the entire update of 9 chapters in one go (I am thrilled, I could hold your interest). And yes Amaranthine is not like Sweet Deals but it is a relief to know you like this too. And when you tell me why it took you so long, I am like, go ahead keep reading, there is no greater compliment than that for me.😳😳

I loved the chapter. So many emotions involved and crafted so beautifully. Loved the way you showed Swara being upset for Kavita and at the same time a joy unknown to her was rising in her.The description with their heights and she would reach directly to his heart if she just lets herself go🤗 Then came Swara's kiss on Sanskar's cheek☺️ I have been always admirer of such gestures than the passionate ones. Even in the show, I adore Sanskar's kiss on Swara's forehead and Swara's on Sanskar's cheek Really liked swara's gift to Sanskar.

I am a great fan of height differences (makes for great writing too - she just tall enough to reach his shoulder )

and simply adore those small gestures which convey so much. And in the beginning of any relationship, those gestures, partly out of hesitation, part of us unsure, part of us hoping that our feelings would be requited, are so important. And yes I love those cheek / forehead kisses -(apart from the fact that they are easy to write😉) they are a sign of a deep hopeful longing or a very respectful love. Those passionate kisses are lovely too (though tough to write, for me). Swara's gift, will have a role too😉. Glad you liked it.

So they started walking together every night and Sanskar used to get in his protective form for Swara...Mr. Sanskar Maheshwari has to be protective about ...umm here would be Mrs. Maheshwari😆 I loved the line Nyna, "Complements are not those that degenerate woman to a mere sex object. I will not tolerate it with anyone, especially those I care for, it does not happen on my watch." The way he shows his authority and feels its his responsibility to look after her is something beyond amazing.

And that is Sanskaar for you - a man of passion who gives his all to the persons he loves

And that line - if only people realise that treating women as a sex object is degenerating her but no more, I can go on and on

Then their realization about falling for each other Most beautiful part of this chapter. The story is moving with such an amazing flow.

And I am😳😳😳

I must admit you can be a great poet Nyna. What you have written regarding that Mathematics was brilliant. I don't know how you did it but its just great. When he accompanied her to a lecture and she lets him sleep and her encounter with the staff members saying that she would not wake him up He matters to her like no one else and so as everything related to him.

Yes, Swara takes her time to realise that what she feels for Sanskaar is actually love, and her actions are driven by that emotion. And regarding that poem, I have already replied, I cannot take full credit, as I only modified what was already written (the original is given in the F&R post)

Once again have fallen for one line, "Education qualifications do not determine anyone's nature. Its the mutual respect and love that makes and breaks the relationships"

And there are very few men who truly believe and can live to that belief. Sanskaar is truly a man in a lifetime, not even one in a million

Then comes the most amazing part where Mr. Maheshwari indirectly wants to know how should he propose would be Mrs. Maheshwari, isnt it?😆😉 But whole scenario was penned down in the best way it could have been. Her slip of tongue, changing the topic, their kiss and finally the confession😳 Everything was so beautiful.

He did it quite well did he not? Swara never even knew when she let slip and finally ends up confessing.

I would love to let you know that I adore your tales, their concepts, the scenes you pen down, the world you create with your fascinating imaginations and their portrayal. I am sorry for taking so much time but just want to let you know that I might take some time but I definitely will be reading.

Hey, as I said, it is quite enough that you adore my tales and that you like reading them so much. Hope you get absolutely fit soon. And do not worry about delays in reading and commenting

Love

-Harshada

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Are we going to get an update of Amaranthine today Nyna?

Waiting, waiting waiting...

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

What can I say...I devotedly stalk yours, Lucky's, Saku's and Shrutu's threads 😆. Don't worry, I don't have psychotic stalker tendencies like Urmila in pyar tune kya kiya . 😆 (Though why Urmila would ever get obsessed with Fardeen khan , of all people, is completely beyond me.) Let's put it down to creative license and willing suspension of disbelief. 😆

Come to think of it, Ragini was so obsessed with Lucky too...which also seemed a definite under-sell by her. 😈😈 😆 You know I find Ragini's character very compelling and fascinating. And though I am quite well disposed to Lucky of late in my fics, the serial version is one I am still VERY ambivalent about. 😉

Not from a favorite couple angle of course (which for me was, is and always will be SwaSan)...but as far as character depth and shades go; I actually find Ragini the second most layered and fascinating portrayal in the serial. After Sunny, of course. 😳 This was despite the train wreck they made, of her so called redemption. 😕😕 I love envisioning Sunny and Ragini as wily antagonists, or as frenemies / prickly allies. 😆

Anyway...I am in a most Amaranthine mood today. I guess my guardian angel visited me to light up my mood. 😉 Just so you know, I have named my guardian angel Solaris, or Apricus 😉. You can guess why, I'm sure. 😆

Love

Viji

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Fill in the blanks Nyna dear ..

_ _ _ ...

I will be waiting

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

This is even better😊😆

Oh the things we do to avoid that word

Still our life, it does make it very hard

We utter it not but our actions talk

As all our resolutions out of the door do walk

And I am absolutely crazy - will focus on updating

Originally posted by: lucky.m

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