Originally posted by: Alvapriya
And now I res dear Nyna.
Finally managed to read 2 nd chapter and I have a lot to say.
Now off to sleep. Will unres tomorrow early morning.
love
- Harshada
UNRES
Dear Nyna,
I know there should be no sorry exchanges between us but I can't help it. I really feel bad for not being able to come here often and comment on stories here they way I prefer to do.
Coming to the update, I guess you are ready to create the magic of sweet deals again with Amarthine. I absolutely have loved sweet deals. Remember I had given a read to 9 chapters in a go and when I read the first update of Amarthine, I was like...No it wasn't just sweet deals but your every work is going to have the same magic and it is going to take me in your land of tales.
You know I took quite a long time in reading the second installment of this story. Because I fall for your every line which tends to take me back to read it again and again 😆👏
I loved the chapter. So many emotions involved and crafted so beautifully. Loved the way you showed Swara being upset for Kavita and at the same time a joy unknown to her was rising in her.The description with their heights and she would reach directly to his heart if she just lets herself go🤗 Then came Swara's kiss on Sanskar's cheek☺️ I have been always admirer of such gestures than the passionate ones. Even in the show, I adore Sanskar's kiss on Swara's forehead and Swara's on Sanskar's cheek Really liked swara's gift to Sanskar.
So they started walking together every night and Sanskar used to get in his protective form for Swara...Mr. Sanskar Maheshwari has to be protective about ...umm here would be Mrs. Maheshwari😆 I loved the line Nyna, "Complements are not those that degenerate woman to a mere sex object. I will not tolerate it with anyone, especially those I care for, it does not happen on my watch." The way he shows his authority and feels its his responsibility to look after her is something beyond amazing.
Then their realization about falling for each other Most beautiful part of this chapter. The story is moving with such an amazing flow.
I must admit you can be a great poet Nyna. What you have written regarding that Mathematics was brilliant. I don't know how you did it but its just great. When he accompanied her to a lecture and she lets him sleep and her encounter with the staff members saying that she would not wake him up He matters to her like no one else and so as everything related to him.
Once again have fallen for one line, "Education qualifications do not determine anyone's nature. Its the mutual respect and love that makes and breaks the relationships"
Then comes the most amazing part where Mr. Maheshwari indirectly wants to know how should he propose would be Mrs. Maheshwari, isnt it?😆😉 But whole scenario was penned down in the best way it could have been. Her slip of tongue, changing the topic, their kiss and finally the confession😳 Everything was so beautiful.
I would love to let you know that I adore your tales, their concepts, the scenes you pen down, the world you create with your fascinating imaginations and their portrayal. I am sorry for taking so much time but just want to let you know that I might take some time but I definitely will be reading.
Love
-Harshada
