SwaSan FF - Aye Dil Hai Mushkil / Chapter 11 Updated -Pg 24 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Flora...
Awesome update...quite intriguing.swara flashback were nicely written..but im super curious..sansku is faking madness .im sure but why?? Just to trouble swara?? Or any other big motive..or he actually lost his memory..n remember his revenge days..but then who bandage swara's wound...getting confused...willwait for next..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Nafisa :)
Story getting more interesting with each update!
I don't know why Sanskaar is pretending to be mad & what is his plan!
Bt I'm sure Sanskaar is not mad & it's Sanskaar Maheshwari who was talking with someone regarding Karma & Co. and trying to get it back!
And it's Sanskaar who lied Swara in bed & did her bandages!
I got few things but many things are still not clear!
So looking forward to read further!
Please update soon, like real soon!
Loads of love <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Its Sanskaar who bandaged Swara isn't? 🤔
Swara's pain 😭
I am loving this story so much 😭❤️
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update... Very intetesting story... Please update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nafiii!
You brought tears to my eyes...yaara! Aisa koi karta hai, apna secret crush ke saath??😛 KIDDING KIDDING...no offence pleasee!
But seriously! Swara's pain is so profound! I am sure Sanskaar is pretending to be mad. But why? Maybe some blackmail or something...anyways, waiting for it!
The precap is damn intriguing...can't wait for the next update!! :)0
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update & Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So, sanskaar is not mad actually and he is pretending. this is my favorite version of sanky <3
Poor swara.. going through a lot.. and sanskaar did her marahmpaati naa? matlab he cares for her. then why is he hiding truth from swara? I guess swara will get to know about him faking madness.
I am eager now :D

You write beautifully Nafs.. I loved how you integrated flashbacks. Keep writing and update soon:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much guys with such overwhelming response. Keep reading and commenting. Your comments motivate me to write much better🤗
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Chapter -3

Anuparna- Ragini tumne Swara ke kamre mein nashta bej di?
Ragini smiled - Yes maa...woh abhi sayed apne kamre mein nahi he! Par mene nashta rakh di he!
Anuparna shocked- Ese Kese...I mean usko pata bhi hoga ki nahi! Bohot dino se kuch thik se nahi kharahi he Swara! Hume uspe dhyaan dena chahiye!
Sujata annoyed - Kya dhayaan dena chahiye! Sab natak hai chori ka! Mere Sanskar ka haal dekha hai apne...
Ragini inturrepted - Lekin chahchi ji! Isme Swara kya karsakti hai! Uska kya galti hai!
Sujata snapped - Ragini...tu jada bholi na ban! Sab pata hai! Jitna Swara ki galti hai...utni thare ka bhi! Ayi bari bholi banne! Aj kal dekh rahi hu thare ko...woh Step wali pheeling jada derahi hai tu apni behen ko! Ye jante hue bhi ki tum dono iss kand mein barabar shamil thi! Jada bholi na ban ab tu...
Anuparna got angry hearing such rude words against Ragini - Sujataaa! Basss! Kuch bhi...
Sujata angrily - Bas Jiji...iss chori ki galtiya ab app bhi na mitti mein daldo! Mera Sanskar ka haal dekha hai...sab iss dono behno ki kand hai! Specially woh Swara!
Saying this, Sujata left from the kitchen .
Ragini looked at Anuparna nervously.
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Swara was in Sanskar room at the moment. The guest room feels strange to her. But this room makes her feel as she is in home. She looked around and remembered those memories she made with Sanskar in this room.
Swara sighs as she gets up from the bed. She decides to make the room look tidy.
Swara started to arrange the pillows on Sanskar's bed and took a hip of clothes to fold them properly.
All of sudden, she heard something...
It was...ringing tone! Though she was not sure! The sound was low and muffled.
Swara didn't get it for first time. But then when she heard it for second time, she was quite sure...it was a phone ringing in the room.
Swara kept the folded clothes on sofa as she tried to trail the sound.
It was actually shocking to her! How can a phone be present in Sanskar's room on first place! Like at this situation! Sanskar was not at his mind and is behaving like a mad kid! So keeping a mobile for himself is nearly impossible! And he lost his mobile during the accident! Then whose mobile is it and where it is!
Swara was having a wired feeling in her stomach as she heard the phone ringing again. She started to search for the thing but couldn't find it! But it was still ringing!
All of sudden her eyes fell on Sanskar 's cupboard! Maybe the mobile was inside it!
As she began to approach towards the cupboard...someone held her right arm and pushed her forcefully making her loose her balance and let her fall on the bed.
Swara screamed- Ahhh!

Swara swiftly turned around to look at the person and got shocked seeing him standing!
"Tum Kya Kar...Kya Kar Rahi Ho Mere Kamre Mein!"
Swara whispers - Sanskar!
Sanskar held her hand and pulled her up to make her stand - Hmmm! Mmm...Mene...Pucha...Kya...Hmmm...Kar rahi ho yeha!
Swara nervously not understanding what to say- Woh woh...mein...tumahri kapde thik karne ayi thi!
Something was not right...Swara felt! But what!
Sanskar hysterically - Nahii...No...mere kapde...tum gandi ho! Mere kapde ko maat touch karo!Ja...Jao! Jao yeha se!
Swara stared at him being all numb. When Sanskar saw Swara didn't move an inch...he held her hand and pulled her out of room forcefully.
Swara stood there shocked as Sanskar said- Tum...Tum...Jao! Gandi Ladki!
Saying this Sanskar shuts the door on Swara's face.
Swara kept standing there for few more minutes staring at closed door. She saw something different today! Due to sudden appearance of Sanskar, she couldn't understand it! But she felt something different when she looked at Sanskar 's eyes today!
It has been two weeks since Sanskar was found and brought home. Every time Swara tried to get close towards him,the family or Sanskar himself either of them made her stay away from him. It was today maybe for 1st time she felt weird vibes from him. But she couldn't understand what it was!
Swara left from there as she felt she needs to talk about it to someone.
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"Maa...mein keh rahi hu na! Kuch toh ajeeb tha! I mean Jis tarah Sanskar ne mujhe se baat ki! Woh koi normal i mean..."
On the other side of call, Sharmista worriedly asked " Shona! Tum kya keh rahi ho! Hua kya hai?"
" Maa! Aj jab Sanskar ne baat ki..."
Swara recalled what Sanskar told her "Tum Kya Kar...Kya Kar Rahi Ho Mere Kamre Mein!"

Something was wrong the way he told her that sentence!
Sharmista asked making Swara snap out of her thoughts - Kya kaha Sanskar ne? Usse kuch yaad aya!
Swara nervously - Nahi maa! Aj usne mujhse jab baat ki...pehle baar esa laga ki kuch gadbad hai! As if woh...I mean pata nahi mein sahi soch rahi hu ye!
Sharmista sighs- Shona point kya hai!
Swara decides to tell what she was thinking to clear her confusion - Maa woh baat yeh he ki Sanskar...
Before she could complete the sentence, suddenly she heard a loud noise from the hall and heard everyone screaming Sanskar 's name.
Swara quickly said- Maaa mein ap se baad mein baat karti hu! Niche sayed koi problem hua hai! Bye maa.
Saying so Swara cut the call and ran out of the room.
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Laksh cries out- Sanskar kya kar raha hai tu? Niche aja!
Everyone was in panic mode seeing Sanskar standing on the dining table creating a racket!
Sanskar shouts as he threatens to throw a plate on floor- Dur...Dur...Gande ho sab tum! Aaa...mmm...
Saying this he throws the plate forcefully on ground crushing it into pieces scaring everyone.
Each and every member was horrified to see such side of Sanskar.
Sujate pleads- Sanskar! Esa na kar chora! Bhaisa se galti hogayi...tu niche aja!
Sanskar shouts - Nahi nahi! Dur raho mujhse! Koi...koi nahi ayega!

Just then Swara arrives and she got shocked seeing the scenario happening here.
Swara stunned - Whats happening here?
Ragini runs to Swara and cries- Swara...Swara! Tum Sanskar ko samhalo! Humne bohot koshish ki par woh humare baat nahi man rahe!
Swara looked at Sanskar who was behaving like maniac and was shocked - Ragini baat kya hai? Sanskar achanak...
Ragini inturrepts- Swara I will explain everything later! Right now ask Sanskar to come down! He is breaking things around.
Swara gulps as she sees Sanskar picking up a glass now.
Swara shouts before he could throw another thing - Sanskar! Get down now !
Sanskar stops in his track and stares at Swara...
Swara suddenly felt uncomfortable at the way he was looking at her.
Swara nervously spoke- Sanskar! Please niche ajao...dekho sab keh rahe he na...

All of sudden, Swara saw a glass is coming flying near her face! She quickly dodged off her face before it could hit her.
Swara screamed loudly as she bent herself down to save herself, scaring everyone at the sudden act.
Swara was horrified. Sanskar threw the glass pointing at her. Why would he do that! Yes he is mentally unstable currently but the Sanskar she knows will never think to hurt her at any cost!
Suddenly Swara could hear laughter! Sanskar was laughing...
Swara slowly raised her head and looked at him.
Sanskar was laughing and rubbing his head like a maniac as if it was a joke!
Every member present there was hell shocked.
Swara stared at Sanskar all numb.
Sujata exclaimed- Sanskar Chore...Tere Dimag Satak Gayi Kya! Kya hogya hai tujhe chore...Bhaisa App kuch keh kiu nahi rahe!
Durga Pasad was in shocked state seeing Sanskar like that...he was not understanding what to do at that moment.
Sanskar laughing- Hmmm..mm...Chudail! Chudail Dar...Dar Gayi! Dekho Dekho...Hmmm...
Swara was in tears.
Ragini shocked- Apne Swara ko hurt karne ki koshish ki Sanskar! App soch bhi kese sakte hai esa...Sanskar app niche utariye! Papaji ne kaha hai na woh apse mafi mangegi! Abhi utariye Sanskar!
Sujata shouts- Ragini tu jada na bol! Aram se baat nahi karsakti...dekh mera chora kitna dara hua hai!
Swara wishpers in tears to Ragini- Ragini bade papa ne kya kiye hai?
Ragini- Swara! Sanskar ne khel khel mein Papaji ki kuch important business ki papers ko Paani mein daal diya! Aur woh sare papers kharab hogya! Toh Papaji ne gusse mein ake Sanskar ke upar chilaya aur thapad mara ! Sanskar darr gya aur ese...
Swara and Ragini, suddenly heard DP saying - Sanskar! Beta niche ajao! Hum mafi mangte hai tumse...Dekho ye thik nahi hai beta!
DP started to approach near dining table when suddenly Sanskar got alarmed.
He quickly got down scared taking a knife with him and ran towards Swara...
Before anyone could react, Sanskar pulled Swara and held the knife near her throat holding her close from behind. Swara was hell shocked with sudden change of situation while everyone gapped loudly.
Swara didn't realise that Sanskar was holding her by a knife in her throat till she felt sharp edge touching her skin slightly. Swara eyes widen.
Sanskar shouts at everyone- Dur raho sab...mere...mere...kareeb maat ao! Hmmm...mmm..
Sujata and Ragini shouts at same time- Sanskar! Kya kar rahe ho...Choro Swara ko!
Swara felt numb...
Sanskar pulled her more close, held her arms and twisted it backwards with force.
Swara winced in pain at sudden action - Ouucchh!
Swara couldn't struggle to get out of his grip as he was holding the knife very close to the skin and he was holding her hand very tightly .
One move it's gonna touch the skin...Swara felt highly suffocated.
Ram exclaimed - Bhaisaa...App chup kiu he! App ese kese...
DP came forward and folded his hands in front of Swara and Sanskar and said sadly - Sanskar beta! Maaf kardo mujhe...mere dimag se nikal gya tha ki tum iss wakt sahi halat mein nahi ho! Par woh bohot important papers the! Par mujhe tumpe iss tarah chilana nahi chahiye tha!
Sanskar pulled Swara more making her gasp and horrified.
Sanskar cries out- No...No...mere...hmm...kareeb maat aoo! Mein mardalungi...issee...hmmm...mujhe kuch...hmm...
Ragini tries to explain - Nahi Sanskar! Papaji kuch nahi karenge apko! App please shant hojaye! Hum apke dost hein na...humare baat toh sunlejiye! Dekhiye Swara ko chod dejiye...usse chot lag jayegi! I know that you will never tolerate if your Swara gets hurt! Chod dejiye...
Sanskar slowly looses his grip on Swara's hand but as Ragini starts to come close to them, Sanskar tightens his grip and shouts - Ye...Ye... (pointing at DP by knife) hatao...hmm..
Ragini indicates DP to leave from there as for now. DP being upset leaves from there.
After DP leaves Sanskar slowly looses his grip from Swara's hand while at the same time removing the knife from her throat. As quickly as he does that he runs to Sujata and hugs her while Swara sighs in relief.
Sujata at first gets scared when Sanskar hugs her suddenly but her heart pains as she hears Sanskar weeping. She slowly removes the knife from Sanskar's hand.
On the other hand Swara looks at her forearm which has turned red by fingerprints of Sanskar due to his tight holds. Something was not right! Swara stares at Sanskar who was in hugging posture with Sujata!
Swara wonders - Why am i feeling as if whatever Sanskar did was intentional!
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Swara pulls her blanket more close to her as she tries to warm herself.
Swara mutters under her sleep - Damn! Its so cold...
Swara blinks her eyes sleepily - Wait! Who turned on the AC ?
Suddenly she feels a manly arm around her waist. Swara widen her eyes. The person squeezes her stomach making her gasp in pleasure. Swara quickly turns around feeling the touch of him...it feels so known. As she turns around she gets shocked of her life...Sanskar was laying beside her and so close , partially hugging her, smirking at her.
Before Swara could open her mouth, Sanskar puts his index finger on her lips as he said huskily - Ssshhh...Don't speak a word!
Pulling her more closer, hugging her completely.
Swara gulps.
He swiftly rolls over her as Swara was beneath him now. Their bodies were touching sensually with each other. Swara could feel current passing down her spine.
Swara whispers - Sanskar!
Sanskar doesn't say anything...kneels down his face towards her slowly nibbles her lips making her gasp in pleasure. She missed his touch so much!
Sanskar bites her lower lip making her moan. He slowly takes her lips in him as he kisses her slowly and passionately, teasing the hell out of her!
Swara kisses him back with full passion. Sanskar hands travels to the knot of the strings around her waist of her night robe.
He slowly unites it as he kept on kissing her. His hand goes inside as he rubs his hand sensually on her bare stomach. He leaves her lips as he felt the need of oxygen. Swara was feeling breathless after kissing after such long time.Swara arches back as she feels Sanskar giving wet kisses on her tummy sucking the skin passionately. Swara could feel his hands roaming around her thighs. Her nippels were erected under her bra feeling his touch all over her body. But the touch was different. It was more like urgent need from Sanskar's side.
Sanskar comes back up and nuzzles near her neck making her moan in pleasure and turning her on. His hands goes to her inner wear as he rubs his hardness on her making her clutch his shirt tightly.
Swara whispers - Sanskar!
Sanskar massages her thighs making her groan.
Swara whispers near Sanskar's ears- I missed you so much! Where were you? I knew you would come back!
Sanskar bites her ear lobe as he says intensely , in low dangerous voice - I came to kill you!
Swara shoots her eyes open wide.
Sanskar gets his face up from her neck as he smirks at her...a dangerous smirk. Suddenly Swara feels a sharp knife touching her skin. Swara looks downwards and her eyes gets wide in horror as Sanskar puts the knife on her throat still laying so close on top of her...

P.S How was the chapter? 😉 Please do comment and ignore the mistakes.
Edited by flora212 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was very shocking...As usual very nice with cliffhanger...Cant wait to know what happens next...please update soon dear...

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