SwaSan FF - Aye Dil Hai Mushkil / Chapter 11 Updated -Pg 24 - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res for mahasangum.. I hope I can..

Hey Nafisa.. this was tremendous.. each and every scenes were.. I loved it.. Sooo he is acting.. but why hurting her... Why???? Seriouly!!!!. You stopped at the very crucial time... 😭

Update soon...😃.

With love...

Kam...

thanks. Update is ready
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Vishi-

NO NO NO WHY YOU ENDED IT AT THAT POINT?????? 😡


such an awesome update
I am speechless..

Thank you so much 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Flora,

Fantastic update - Swara's pain and confusion mingled with growing doubts- beautifully written. Sujata - I know she is hurt but she was a little mean, however, understanding one can be, it would hurt.

And the ending - that was a real cliffhanger (Sanskaar would tell the truth, he is shocked because he did not want Swara to find out the way she did, IMO)- please do update soon.

Best,
Nyna

Let's see why Sanskar was shocked 😉 Sujata was always mean in the case of her son
Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Gandi bachi,aise point pe koi rokta ha vala?
So as guessd its our mastermind sanskar who went bk 2revenge days...
Yayy!intense swasan on the way.
Amaizingly written
Nxt part updt soon

yes intense SwaSan on way
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

I really really feeling bad for Swara! Poor girl!

She did mistake though had no intention to hurt anyone or create problems but blunder happened! Bt she is suffering more than she should!
I knew it! I knew Sanskaar is NOT mad, he is just pretending & wants to take his company Karma & Co. back by disassociation from Maheshwaris!
Bt I don't believe that he is the mystery man who wants to destroy Maheshwaris & Swara! Sanskaar CAN NOT harm Swara!
Then who is that? Another mystery man who is maybe Adarsh?
And you finished it on cliffhanger!!? NOT DONE Nafisa, NOT DONE *Pout*
The moment Swara put her hands on Sanskaar's shoulder, he froze! He would be shocked! I think he didn't want Swara to know the truth this way! I still believe it was Sanskaar who bandaged Swara's wounds & lifted her to bed!
The question is why he is doing all this, most importantly behaving this way with Swara!
You latkayoing us on cliffhanger, so please update soon!

I love torturing people with suspense 😈 but no worries next update is ready. Let's see if your assumptions are correct or not 😉😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: soumi93

Best chapter...but why he is behaving rudely with Swara???????😒

Update de jaldi i mean ho sake to kal hi

thanks soumi. You will know it soon why he is behaving like this
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter - 6

She slowly put her hand on his shoulder and he froze at his place.
After few seconds, he turns around and looks at her as she whispers in disbelief- SANSKAR...!!???
Everything became blank...her mind became totally blank...cause everything was out of her understanding!
Swara stares at the man standing in front of her with wide eyes! Is he for real? Or is she imagining things!
Her Sanskar...was standing in front of her! He was looking completely normal. What was happening? Should she be happy that her Sanskar is completely alright or be sad that something was actually not right! And here is fact...that her doubt of something wrong with Sanskar turned out to be true! At the moment her mind has stopped working!
Swara slowly diverted her eyes towards Mr. Malothra who was completely horrified due to sudden appearance of Swara.
Swara looked at Sanskar again...
He was looking so cold...feeling less...His Behaviour Was Creating More Suspense in Swara's mind.
A drop of tear rolled down the cheek...of Swara.
Swara whispered...This time more clearly...She was having difficulty to talk...as she stammered - Sa...SansKar? Err...Why! Why...
She couldn't complete her sentence as she tried to calm her whirling mind.
Sanskar gazed at Swara with blank look...his eyes were completely cold...he was completely emotionless.
Swara was not sure if she wanted cry or scream! But she wanted answer...answer to her questions! Specially She wanted to know why did he act...acted with everyone...including her!
But she doesn't know from where to start so she kept on staring at him with broken hopes!
After a long gazing...Sanskar turned to look at Manager Mr.Malothra as he spoke completely normal for first time in front of Swara- Excuse Us! Mr Malothra!
He waved his index finger swiftly towards Malothra indicating him to leave and hinting him about something! Malothra nodded and left from there with the suitcase quickly.
Swara was confused about Sanskar' s behaviour with Mr.Malothra.
Swara looked at Sanskar with Question Mark on face...Before she could open her mouth Sanskar broke the silence between them and then next moment she was shocked to his question.
Sanskaar said drily- So Miss Bose...Finally You Got To Know About Me! My Act ? Hmmm?
Swara left stunned with the way he was speaking, before she could react, he continued as he kept started moving around her with a swag...
Sanskar disinterested- Well...I am not surprised! James Bond se mein kese chup sakti hu! You know what...I am not happy! Happy to see you here ...and definitely not happy that you got to know I was acting!
Swara was completely speechless and specifically clueless.
Sanskar with fake annoyance- Sara plan popat kardiya yaar...But koyi nahi...I have a Plan B!
Sanskar stared at her with evil glimpse in his eyes with a devilish smirk on his face making Swara scared as well as confused at same time. But she was not getting the point what the hell is he talking about and Why!
Swara opened her mouth to speak as she felt nervous- I...Sanskar...What...
Sanskar interrupted her as he said with his husky voice- Ssshhh... (putting finger on her trembling lips) Ek minute...mere baat abhi khatam nahi hui! Isse pehle ki you bombard me with thousands of questions! Let me make everything clear to you!
Sanskar raised his one eyebrow as he continued- Listen Miss. Swara Bose! Pehli baat.. Mein jo kar raha hu...woh sab mere liye kar raha hu! I am doing all these for my revenge! Dusri baat...Tum iss sab mein dakhal dene ki koshish bhi maat karna...warna mujhse bura koi nahi hoga! (gritting teeth)
Swara stares at Sanskar shocked. She felt as her whole world was taken from her.
When Swara didn't say anything, Sanskar glared- You understood?
Eyes began to fill with tears. She was not sure if she was crying or not!
Sanskar narrowed his eyes- These tears are meaningless...abhi kaam nahi ayega...isko samhal ke rako! Future keliye...
Saying this Sanskar started to walk by passing her...
He stopped at his track...when suddenly Swara spoke with clear loud voice- Who Are You?
Sanskar slowly turned around towards while Swara turned around to face him...
Swara with hurtful voice and asked again- Who Are You?
Sanskar started at her for a second then spoke coldly- What does that mean?
Swara slowly walks towards him as she says softly - It means nothing...cause it doesn't make sense itself!
Sanskar frowns as Swara continues all broken- Because You Cant Be My Sanskar! Tum mere Sanskar kabhi nahi hosakti ! Mere Sanskar kabhi ese battein nahi karte...Woh mere saat sab kuch share karti hai...
Swara was crying by now as she couldn't control her tears anymore - Kiu Kar Rahe Ho Esa? Tum toh mera Sanskar ho na...toh kiu chupa rahe ho...mein janti hu ki tum natak kar rahe ho!
Swara touches Sanskar cheeks as she cups his face- Sanskar Please Ab Aur Nahi! Tum jante ho...mein tumhare liye kitni bechen thi...kitna intezar kiya! Pura mahina...par ab jab tum agyai toh itna ajeeb behave kiu kar rahi ho?
Sanskar shoves off her hands with anger.
Swara cries - Why Sanskar? I know ki tum mujhe se gussa ho...par Sanskar mene tumse mafi manga tha na toh phir kiu...kiu ye sab kar rahe ho! Dekho ab sach sach sach batao...baat kya hai! Ye pagalpan ka drama kiu kiya tumne?
Sanskar glares at Swara as he shouts on her- Shut Up Ok! Just Shut This Nonsense! Ye Jo Tumhara Emotional Blackmailing Hai Na...Woh Mujhepe Nahi Chalne wala...Aur ye kya laga rakha hai " Tum Meri Ho...Meri Sanskar" Bhad Mein Jaye Tumhara Sanskar! Mere baat kaan kholke suno mein tumhari nahi hu...na kabhi tha! Tum mujhe apni maan gharan kahani banake tumhare jaal mein nahi phasa sakti!
Swara stunned - Sanskar Kya Keh Rahe Ho! Hosh mein toh ho tum?
Sanskar annoyed - Of course Bohot Achi Tarah Hosh Mein Hu! Ab tum bhi hosh mein ajao kiu ki tumhare khel khatam...
Swara screams in agony- Stop it Sanskar! Just Stop It! Kya bakwas kar rahe ho? Aur ye sab kya...Revenge...Khel? Dekho Natak Band Karo Aur Mujhe Batao Kya Kar Rahe Ho Tum Aur Kiu?
Sanskar gritting teeth - Tumhe Ek Baar Mein Baat Samaj Nahi Ati! Mein koi natak nahi kar raha...Jo kuch bhi kaha sab sach hai! Last time warn kar raha hu apne haad mein raho...mere personal mamle mein dakhal maat do!
Swara shouts - Kiu Na Du Mein? Biwi hu tumhari...haq hai mera!
Sanskar dangerously - Haq? Tumhara? Kabhi nahi...you know what ye parivaar toh mera kabhi apna tha hi nahi...par tumhari wajase ab aur bhi paraya hogya...in short sab problems ki jaar tum ho! Tumhe toh mein baad mein dekhlungi!
Swara was completely shocked as she was not understanding what the hell is happening! Sanskar behaviour was scaring her now.
Sanskar continues - Iss wakt mujhe niche hona bohot jaruri hai...tumhare bakwas sunneka time nahi hai!
Saying this he swiftly started to leave when Swara called him making him stop.
Swara strictly as she rubs off her tears- Sanskar kya karne wale ho tum? Tum Bade Papa ki business se kya karne wale ho!
Sanskar smirks - Wait and watch! Bas itna samaj lo jo mere tha woh mera phirse hone wala he...
He started to leave again when Swara held his hands and said - Toh woh tum the jo kuch wakt pehle mere kamre mein aya tha! Tumne jaan puchke usdin natak karte wakt knife mere gale pe rakha tha! Haina? Tum mujhe marna chahti thi Sanskar?
Sanskar with devil smile- Jee Toh Chahta Hai Ki Tumhe Issi wakt jaan se mardu!
Swara immediately left his hand as she gasped being totally shocked.
Swara as tears flow - Sanskar Tum Janti Ho Tum Kya Keh Rahe Ho?
Sanskar drily- Tumhe Kya Lagta Hai?
Within a blink of second Sanskar left the place leaving behind a devastated Swara .
Swara kept on staring from where he left...
Her mind has completely stopped working as if everything came to an end. She was damn hurt...hurt from Sanskar words! It pierced her heart like a knife.
But as always Swara was determined to know the depth of Sanskar 's weird behaviour! She can't believe Her Sanskar was talking about killing her!
What was happening?
Suddenly Swara remembered the conversation of Sanskar and Malothra.
They were talking about Karma Co. And Sanskar told her he was going to get back what belonged to him.
Swara in her mind- I have to talk to bade papa and everyone about Sanskar! Mein Sanskar ko kuch galat nahi karne de sakti...jo bhi ho! Mein Sanskar se sach pata karke rahungi...
With this determination she left from there.
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Everyone was present there and looking happy. The time has come...Durga Prasad finally going to announce about their new project which was going to bring success to kolkata city.
Sanskar arrived there without any one knowing where was he...he started his mad act as usual when he saw Laksh approaching towards him.
Laksh confused - Arrree Bhai Kaha tha tu? Sab dhund rahe the tujhe? Aja...Bade Papa kuch announce karne wale he!
Sanskar acting abnormal - Hmmm...Mein..Mujhe...washroom...
Laksh smiles - Ha Ha Samj gya...washroom mein tha tu!
Saying this Laksh started to take Sanskar to terrence where the announcement was going to happen.
Sanskar in his mind - Mr Maheswari Tumhara Khel Khatam Aur Mera Shuru!
On the other hand Swara watches Sanskar and Laksh going to terrence and she decides to follow them.
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Durga Prasad- Aj Sabke Samne Mein Ye Kehna Chahta Hu...Hum Ek Bohot Important Project sign karne ja rahe hai jiska Coordinating company London Ki Popular Well Known Royal Blue Company ke saat humara deal hoga!
Hearing this everyone clapped happily. The British Company head shaked hands with DP as he handled a file to him.
While on other side Mr. Malothra handed two files to DP.
Swara from the back stage hiding behind some decoratives started to notice every move of Malothra and DP.
Swara to herself - Sanskar ne Malothra ko itne pese kiu diya the? Aur woh files mein kya hai!
After signing The Royal Blue Company Papers DP took the two files which Malothra gave him to sign.
The first file was the deal file which DP signed without even reading but Swara got shocked when she saw the second file belonged to Karma Co. It was the Ownership file in which DP has to sign so that company gets handover to someone else.
Swara whispers in shock state - Iska matlab...Sanskar Karma Co. Ko Apne Naam Pe Wapas Le Raha Hai! Par Kiu? Nahi mein esa nahi hone desakti...woh bhi Bade Papa ki anjane mein...nahi mujhe unhe batana hoga!
Swara started to go from there when someone placed hand on her shoulder making her stunned. Swara turned around and found Sanskar evily smirking.
Sanskar huskily- Sochna bhi maat!
Swara glared at Sanskar as she asked angrily - Why are you doing this? Tumhara Irada Kya Hai?
Sanskar smirks - Barbadi...iss puri khandan ki Barbadi!
Swara shocked - Kya ? Tum pagal hogyai ho? Mein ese nahi hone dungi...Mein Abhi Bade Papa ko sabkuch bata dungi!
Swara was about to go when Sanskar pulled her forcefully making her bump into his chest as he held her from waist and said softly- Relax! Udhar dekho? (Pointing towards a corner)
Swara was hell shocked by looking at the direction he asked her to watch...a gun man was hiding behind a decorative piece.
Sanskar continues - Aur Udhar Dekho!
He points at other four different places making Swara terrified.
Sanskar calmly - Ye Sab Mere Log Hai! Agar Zara Si Bhi Bhanak Mr. Durga Prasad Maheswari Ko Laga Mere Sachayi Ke Bare Mein...Toh Tum Janti Ho Kya Honewala hai! Right Miss Bose?
Swara froze on her place...she was completely horrified.
She looked at Sanskar terrified as he continues - Barbadi toh hogi hi...aur mera sabse pehla target ho TUM! TUM SE HI SAB SHURU HUA THA...TUMPE HI KHATAM HOGA!

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Edited by flora212 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
oh my mataji!!! Finally I am commenting!!
First and foremost, mujhe maaf kardo. I know I have been delaying to comment!! And once again so sorry! But finally I am
From chap 2 to chap 6, fantastic updates and you are making sure to leave us with cliff hanger all the times..

Swara's helplessness, hurt very well shown! Sujju, I hate her in this but I do understand her. Nothing matters for her than her Sanskaar and anyone who she thinks can harm Sanskaar will keep them away from him. SO I get it. Sanskaar, man, he is planning something really big and he is gonna start from attacking Swara. Man, I am nervous. Whatever happens, I know fir sure when Sanskaar will realize what he did and be back to normal, he will be guilt ridden like hell and I would love to see Swara getting him out of that.
Perfect updates with the mixture of drama, romance, separation, hurt, evil!! Good going Nafu!!

Love,
Shona
Edited by .IamShonali. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh god..
What is he gonna do??
Poor swara
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Posted: 8 years ago
Phir se latka dis na😭 awesome update di
Tani

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