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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
continue soon.
thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Luv the update. It's funny, intense, romantic n full of drama. It's deserve a 👏👏👏n a hug frm me🤗🤗to u. Like suju. She is the best, always supporter of our bawre n kabab mein haddi in bawre romance. 🤣🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Terrific update

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Keep updating tfs
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Posted: 8 years ago
Harshu...dear..
Just plain brilliant update...sanky supported her...nsujju both..it was great...loved it

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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update harshu... 🤗

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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsome update
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
Bawre Part-14

~New Twist ~
"Ups and downs are must in life, because straight line in an ECG also means that u r dead.- Ratan Tata"

A/N- appollogies for delay. Pls do leave replies.
Sanskaar POV-
Mom took us to our room. We stayed silent perhaps as per habbit. She along with Maa n Baba closed the door and we 5 were in the room.
Su- sanskaar, swara what ever happened should not happen again. Okay.
Mom said and we nodded.
Sharmishta- Swara beta how can u o that? U never thought of us, Ur baba?
Her eyes welled up with tears as Maa shooted questions.
Sa- Maa pls don't scold her it's my fault. I took her there.
Shekhar- whatever Sanskaar. U won't understand this our respect is linked to what our daughter does. People will taunt us.
Sa- I am sorry Baba I won't ever take Swara to that club again.
Shekhar- u both better be careful. Challo mishti. We need to go home.
He warned us and begin to leave.
Sw- Baba ...
She wisphered and held his hand.
Sw- Papa I.. I am sorry...
She said but Baba jerked her hand.
Shekhar- Show that u r sorry..
He left with maa. She was almost numb. I held her hand and made her sit.
She was sad. I was glaring at her face. I couldn't help her in anyway.
Maa sat by her side and wiped her tears. She embraced her.
Su- Swara bache don't be sad they will be okay.
Sw- are u sure maa?
Su- offcourse. Aur wese bhi na if u both want to drink and smoke do it occationally. I had a hint of this thing but didn't knew u both are extensively into it.
Sa- sorry mom.
Su- it's okay.
She wincked at us. We gasped.
Su- so what shall I give to both thappad, change and galiyan I think u had enough of them. So come let's have dinner.

Mom took us downstairs. She took control of everything. She made us eat, laugh and rest.

Swara POV-
I am greatful to God for Sanskaar and mom. They are one of the best. Today my heart began to respect sanskaar more. I somewhere loved all his gestures. He is so sweet. She after the dinner we walked upstairs. All bwere gazing us with haterate. Only mom n jiju n di were with us.
We reached our room. Sanskaar closed the door and pecked my forehead.
Sa- listen swara we have done no sin. So just chill.
Sw- I am trying sanskaar but Baba he is so angry.
Sa- I am here Na then why are u even bothered. I will do everything to make him talk to u.
Sw- are u sure
Sa- yes baby 100%
I smiled he made me sit and we chatted for long.

6 Months Later-
Laksh POV-
6 months have gone. Sanskaar and Swara as they have promised were trying to avoid boozing. I was happy for them. Swara is the one who had put the most sincere effort on this. Chachi had been a support. Today she went to her place and this idiot. Huh.. he is here dancing and passing time. Or rather enjoying.
Wese he deserves it he had struggled a lot to make baba forgive swara. He slapped him. Threw him out and what nots but still Bhaisab have worked for bhabhi sa well. He slept full night on his door with Swara so as to make baba talk to to swara.
Swara she was happiest. He left her there with her family and must say my brother is in love. He was getting bored without his wife and so he is here dancing like an idiot. All Talli, among this ear bleeding loud music. I am here iski peheredari kar Raha hoon. Safety reasons u see.
Par h yeh ladka kutte ki dum. He won't change.

[Darwaaze ko kundi maaro
Koi na bach ke jaane paaye
DJ ko samjha do,
music ghalti se bhi ruk na jaaye
Thaka thaka jo feel kare wo jaake dou RedBull gatak le
Aur jisko dance nahi karna
Woh jaake apni bhains charaye]

Sanskaar gulped drinks after drinks. He grew out of control. This music is making my years bleed. Sanskaar Continued to drink. He danced.

[Bas aaj ki raat hai
Kal se wohi siyaape hain
Jee bhar ke naach lo
Na ghar waale na maape hain
Sab pe apna raaz hai
Darne ki kya baat hai
Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai
(Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai)
Arey abhi toh party shuru hui hai..
Arey abhi toh party shuru hui hai..
Yeh toh bas shuruaat hai]

A girl with a s**ttish dress moved close to him. She caressed his chest. He danced with her. Senseless and lost.

He danced with the girl and then shifted to the other girl behind him. Sometimes I am jealous of this guy. Come-on he had so many girlfriends. Today also see the girls are dancing with him. They r dying for him.

Sanskaar was dancing with girls. But he halted as he saw Swara standing there he fell silent. She gave him a mederous glare.
"Swara" he wisphered and ran behind her.

I too stood numb as I saw Ragini's red rageful eyes.

Shit man phir ~naya Twist~.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I luv the naya twist🤣. I must say after ages u update. So bad😡
Edited by Verda_768 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Harshi, 😊
I loved Sanskar's and Sujju's support for Swara. 😃 Oh what a twist! 😆 Ab toh SanLak specially Sanskar gaye paani mein! 😉 😛 Poor him. 😆 Update soon. 😳
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Harshu,

OK... Let me confess. I'm in love with this story especially the reckless, drunkard couple! I really hated you when you weren't updating the story for a long time. That time I was a silent member, so you were saved from my wrath. Don't dare to forget to update it ok?

Love,
Dyuti

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