SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17])

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StarySKY

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Posted: 8 years ago

#611

Res ..

Un-Res ..

Nita .. 🤗

Sorry for been late ..

You know , a lot of thing is happening in my life right now ..

Please stop saying this " boring " word 😡.. it can never be boring .. and I really don't mind long chapters or even a short one .. though I rather prefer a long one .. ( please if you ever got to know how to shorten the stories. . Please tell , I am having this problem too )

Chapter 11 ..

I really love this chapter .. it have a lot of things .. SwaSan 😳and most importantly we got a hint about Ms.X ..😉

Part A

Sanskar and Swara

It obvious how much they miss each other .. and the phone calls , their conversation ..

And that all just to protect her from Ms.X .. *sigh*

Part B

I am happy that you give us something about the realtion between Laksh and Ragini ..

Ragini is indeed very jealous ( maybe she is in love with Laksh ) .. the thing about her been away and Laksh is able to move on really disturbed her ..

Her break down in front of Swara ..

Part C

Swara got to know about Sanskar accident .. and decided to go to him no matter what ..

Part D

Poor Laksh ..

He was heart broken .. so he tried to fill the void inside him with liquor ( wrong step from you actually ) ..

Due to this step Sanskar met with accident ..

And Laksh felt really guilty about it .. ( I know how you feel Laksh )

Part E

Swara and Ragini reached the hospital .. and thank God Sanskar was out of danger ..

And SwaSan conversation ..

Then the confession ( yay .. finally )

Part F

Sanskar and Laksh conversation ..

Sanskar did ease his brother guilt and thing about that he don't want another person to get hurt because of him .. that did move my heart ..

Now the suspects .. Ms.X 😃

1. Tanu

Laksh PA ..

Was Sanskar PA once ..

Met Sanskar weeks ago ..

She knew Swara from before ..

She was present at the wedding ..

2. Aalyia

Seems like a family friend ..

Not quit a plesent girl ..

3. Payal

Seems like a family friend , or Uttara's friend ..

4. Mansi

Sanskar friend from college ..

Met Sanskar weeks ago ..

Know Swara ..

Was at the wedding ..

Know about Sanskar dream being a writer ..

My thoughts ..

I am listing them from more suspicious to less .. ( I am not sure what in your mind , but you can be tricking us , you know what I mean😆😉 )

Mansi , Tanu , Aalyia , Payal ..

Let see what will happen ..

Waiting for the next ..

Love

Khushi

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#612

Res baby

Unres

My doll...😃

Im feeling horrible for replying soo late...was busy...unreserved few posts but left your n viji n nynas too..as i needed time to reply to you...n i know you will understand the delay...well im busy..my bros getting married..so shopping..n household work plus job...hardly get time...just quickly reserve posts...😭😭 so could read n reply later..

Anyways...

Soo update was as ususal superb...enjoyed it...👏

Swasan temporary seperation of one month.😕.but swara got little holiday of sort..😊going to newyork ..then thailand..with out sanky it would not be fun im sure..as she missed him badly..n sanky too vice versa...technology kept them connected via phone call..but destiny had other plans n sanky accident turned blessing in disguise..n this temporary seperation period ends with swara returning...special thanks to lucky n his devdas mood...😆that lead to sanky accident...well i must say enjoyed raglak track as well...😳waiting for their story as much as swasans...😉

...well baby you just given us list of suspects👏..how i wished you had introduced these womens in starting chapters..then it would be super difficult for us to pinpoint at one character..who is obsessive for sanky..but still ...adding suspect here is also good...now we have completely zeroed maheswaris..n few other from our suspicion...n got new lot to keep our fingers at ..im excited..well i have my suspicion for tanu...😉hoping im right...😊

Do you watch kumkum bhagya too?? 😆You added aliya n tanu..soo asking...😃 hehe😆

Now swasan together..im soo hoping for swasan romance ..best if wedding or engagement..soo killer can strike...plzz nitu...you added kiss...explore your romance genre...😳😉 curious for next babes...

Love u loads...

Talia😃

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 8 years ago

#613

Update everything in one post and you will understand how short update is! So no way you are reducing length I won't mind if u increase it a bit!

No male visitor for Sanskar?!

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Gayathri

@Gayathri93

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Posted: 8 years ago

#614

Hi nita it was an amazing update and I must say u r very talented.👏👏

Part a : the phone conversation between swasan is always wonderful. The way they miss each other and sanskar's confession. Its too good dear. Swara can be childish at sometime and that quality of her make her our shona.

Part b: to be frank I like the way you are shaping ragini's character, a dutiful sister who is ready to do anything to protect her sister.in our show we can never expect ragini to behave like this way and coming to this part, yes it is true that jealousy can stir one's true feelings and the same happens to ragini also.

Part c: I am really happy to see the bond between adarsh and swara. i really liked adarsh here. He is a good brother who is concerned about his sister. I can understand swara's restlessnesss here. Because she loved sanskar more than any one. Swasan are always like this way when something happened to the other they will be heartbroken.

Part d: laksh's condition is understandable,he truly loves his brother. I think laksh really loved ragini because her rejection had made him like this way. I like the sanlak bond here .

Part e: swara's broken state 😭 in seeing her love in this state and sanskar's happiness in seeing her is amazing 😛. I think sanskar had been expecting swara to be here to be with him.they are after all soulmates. His confession to swara is very beautiful .swara overwhelmed with confession kissed sanskar. This is my swasan they don't need any grand proposal to be with each other.

Part f: hmmm among the suspects I have my doubt on two persons , I can be wrong

1 aaliya: the way she created the scene to see sanskar

2 mansi :she remembered sanskar having broken hand in college. She knows ,sanskar is curious. I had remembered , in one of ur previous updated that miss x feels that she have no one in family to take care and they are not her family and all,here she tells her father treats her like an employee .she knew about the dream of sanskar and all.

Eagerly waiting for ur next update dear😃

Gayathri

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#615

Thanks for the all the Res so far guys..You all sure make me one happy person..

@ Gayathri dear- I am simply super touched by your comment.. I still got lovely comments from friends for chapter 9 and 10 yet to be replied back so will reply to your as soon as i replied them back..

Love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness
Update everything in one post and you will understand how short update is! So no way you are reducing length I won't mind if u increase it a bit!

No male visitor for Sanskar?!

So you think this is short..Good then, i just dont wont it be long and boring😆... Also i used to post all the part in one update but got a feedback that it feel so long to read at one go so decided to opt this method.. Okay i wont reduce the length

And Male visitor..Well he got Adaarsh,Laksh ,RP and DP to visit didnt he..Dont worry he will get one male visitor in the next update..I honestly dont wanna confuse the readers by adding an male visitor and confusing them more.. 😆..People already suspected Adaarsh and RP .So why make them more confused😳

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showrav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#617

Res Nita dear😊

unres

Another beautiful update Nita dear🤗

loved swasan moments so one month passed & now swara shift Thailand for security reason. love that swara get new family.

ohh sanskar mat with accident is it intentionally or it is like u show that by saving his brother but one thing is good happen that swara back to her love how both longing for each other.

so four suspect that sanskar notice & who is the killer i also confused like sanskar so pls update soon. my doubt on mansi by her interaction.

update soon.

Bye dear

Love u🤗

Edited by showrav24 - 8 years ago

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#618

@Nyna,viji and shru - I am so sorry guys.. For such a long delay in reply back.. Really feel bad but what to do.. I am not getting any time even if I did I spend it in Twitter discussing the episode given the track.. Also I got the res in your works pending.. Plus I have lucky and Saku too.. I would have loved to address all of them this weekend.. But what to do when even my weekend is gonna be a busy one.. Just felt like saying sorry.. Will try to reply back and unres ASAP..

With love

Nita

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Juanita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#619

Originally posted by: anu012
SUPERB UPDATE

Thanks Anu dearest..Really happy to know you liked the update😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#620

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum
Res 😊😉

Nita my dear...first to res, but not to un res 😭 😭

Need some more time, dear. Am swamped with work till Monday, lots of last minute tasks to tie up. I hope should be able to un res Monday or latest Tuesday. Would Chapter 12 be up by then? 😉

BTW...Novak looked very shaky in that match with Zverev. 😕 😒 Seems to me, that he might make the final and then lose to----ugh! ugh! triple ugh!----Murray!

Love,

----Viji

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