SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 12

Originally posted by: lol_leku_RoFl

Sorry for late sissy...I am so sorry for the late reply as well Lekah dear😭😭😭

Part 1 story

Its really intriguing story sissy. ..from starting to end...story has its mystery holding strongly..well written Thanks dear..Really happy you find it interesting..

Asha being little girl..her side play is superb..turning point..so sanskar got his swara..I liked her memory loss ..wow..its good..just days create bonding with fida and asha...and special feelings for swasan..though swara accept it but sanskar avoiding it..so sad..Wow most of them said they like her memory loss here😃...I was bit hesistant to write another one with ML but i am happy it is well liked..Give Sanskar some time, it just chapter two😆

But passwords for doors and cameras are creating mystery too strong..thinking wha might be reason for sanskar to stay in isolated palce..but its now good for swara..awesome your words are perfect..Well you were spot on with the observation👏..Wont say more..Sanskar reason will be revealed as we progress😉..

Hope sanskar cold be may change. ..It will change from chapter 3 dont worry..😉

Part2

Many confusion are cleared in this part...ragini( angry)..Well everyone is hating Ragini as well ..😆..I am happy you confusion are cleared in this part..

Superb...dida and pari bonding..so Sujata is sanky ka MIL...im curious to know sanskar's wife name... 😃 Finally swara findout some names related to her past..which has part of arjun/sanskar both are unaware of it..but how sanskar cant trust my swara 😭 ..Yeah Suju is Sanskar MIL..Hmm wait for it ,i will reveal her name soon ... Sorry for making Sanskar not trust Swara intially ,he did trust her once he calmed down,

it was a momentary reaction

he realised his words are wrong but..why he taking her there..finally sanskar/arjun ka little bit of mystery is solved...ragini ka drama 🤢 😡 ...He took her there because he wanted her to find her family... He has no clue about her and his family does..So he had to take her there😉

i don't Ragini may be behind swara but still confusing..i can confirm reading out laksh behaviour seeing swara...i loved father and son cold behaviour towards eachother..you written that part so well...Arjun cant let her leave alone in name of hell 😆 ...Lucky will make an appearance in the next chapter ,let see if you are confusion are cleared 😉... So you are the only who think Ragini is not behind it..Hmmm let see wont say anything and spoil the suspence😆...

Both part are nice...keep going..i don't Ragini may be behind swara but still confusing..i can confirm reading out laksh behaviour seeing swara...i loved father and son cold behaviour towards eachother..you written that part so well...Arjun cant let her leave alone in name of hell 😆 ...Lucky will make a breif appearance next chapter... Yep Arjun cant leave her in his house not when he is not around her..😳..Thanks once again for the lovely comment Lekah dear..Really happy to know you liked both parts..😃

Love

Lekah

Love

Nita

Originally posted by: blindassassin

Nita

Let me first thank for the PM and as I said you need not take the extra pain in sending them, I will otherwise also read your FF. I was only lagging behind in my comments .The whole plot was mysterious and the latest chapter gave many replies. Don't worry you are excelling in this genre also.

Just wondering What if they had married in the first place but destiny had other plans. Will we get some romance in between their truth hunt . Ragini and laksh..the less said about them ,the better. One ready to jump into the mandap as replacement and the other ready to marry anybody who jumps into the mandap.

Please update soon

Love, veena.

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nita sweety..

Unres @ 13...love u

Talia

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res

Unres

Nita baby...😊...Talia dearest🤗

Chapter 2 was spectacular..i just loved it...👏...Me so happy to know you liked it

Story would take this turn i cant believe it...😕 soo everything is not quite normal betweenswasan...asha happens to find a pic n showed swara..n she recognise the people in it...but sansku misunderstood it.😭..after war of words..ask her to leave..thank God dida put some sense in him n he listen her side of story...never thought story will move to maheswari mansion..😉...Sanskar realized Swara wont do it even before dida clearing it out..Dida acted as the final push which made him go to her room to say sorry.. 😉..He acted on impulse when Swara recognized the pics, he over protectiveness took over given he trusted her with the safety of Asha as well by allowing her to live with them..

Ap n Dp typical dramatic parents welcome swara with a slap...without listening her...sansku was their to stop it...n get himself shocked after knowing her identity...😲more disturb knowing that she was lakshya fiance..😉..Yep AP and DP will be typical dramatic parents but i wont make them dramatic as our SR cvs😆... Yep i think Sanskar needs to know her identity now..Story is moving fast right ..Still lots to come though😉..

Ragini..i dont know..may be like everyone assuming her culprit.im giving her benefit of doubt...she is not real culprit someone else..i have mix feeling regarding her..after all swara was only person she had in her life after her family...guess we have to wait for next update...sansku past??? Lakshya pov??...Hmmm the second person to doubt Ragini might not be the culprit 😉..Cant say or wont say and spoil the suspence..So my lips are sealed 😳.. Lucky makes a very brief appearance next chapter..Not enough to get his full pov though, Sanskar past will be revealed soon but not so soon 😆

Soo love update soon...muahhh...You got to answer the above post for me to decide if i should update or not 😆

Talia

With lots of love

Nita

Originally posted by: lol_leku_RoFl

No cliff hanger -_->_<..

Take your time:)