SWASAN SS - LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL[LAST PART PG 39 ON 25/08 ] - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Hey...harshada...🤗

I'm back..
Res.. for now. Will unres later..



Hi Kaveetha dear,
So good to see you back
Take your time dear.
Will be waiting for your feedback
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sur1911

awesome update dear
totally loved it
you described all emotions very well
his pain is really very deep
hope swara heal his pain by her selfless love
his mom is soo bad.no she is so cruel
update soon
thanks for pm


Thank you so much dear.
Glad you liked it.
Glad you think emotions were well written
Will update soon
You are always welcome for pms
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bilvyina

Hai i am krishna... Loved your story chapter 6 was a emotional part...you wrote emotions of sanskar beautifuly..waiting for next part



Hi dear Krishna,
Thanks for letting me know your thoughts,
Glad you liked the story so far.
Thanks a lot dear😳
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Harshada...dear..

Nice update...

i knew that not girl prob only...he would have family issue too...n it turnout to be true...Sansku life was indeed hard for him..all pain he felt..longing for family or loved one was evident in update...felt bad for him..but now swara is with him...to love him..care for him...if he gave her chance...that one chance...waiting for next..

Talia



THANK YOU SO MUCH DEAR TALIA.
GLAD YOU LIKED IT.

I KNOW AND YOU WERE RIGHT DEAR. HIS PAST HAS TO BE THAT STRONG WHICH WOULD JUSTIFY HIS PAIN.
HE NEVER GOT LOVE HE DESERVED.
LET'S SEE HOW SWARA IS GOING TO BRING HIM BACK AND MAKE BELIEVE IN LOVE AGAIN.

LOVE
-HARSHADA
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res:)

I know I am very late Harshu and I need to comment on 5 and 6 so am marking my spot and will unres as soon as I get a moment to type a proper comment:). Please bear with me X

Unres:

I am sorry I am late Harshu dear but things are really crazy for me at the moment 😕. I read and enjoyed both 5 and 6. 5 of course marks the start of the real step change for SwaSan's relationship with Swara having encroached so firmly into his home just as she has unbeknown to them both in his heart too 😉. I liked how Sanskaar is so solicitous about her comfort and he even went as far as to give her clothes he had bought for Kavita 😲 as those must have had painful associations but he saw beyond that and later when he saw her he was mesmerised by her and it was not tainted due to past association 😳. 6 of course was a truly powerful chapter- full of pain that you portrayed so beautifully. You said you were worried about it but you needn't have fretted. Sanskaar's past highlights so well why he is/ was the way we saw in the beginning 😭. How much can one man suffer, especially beginning since childhood with such callous parents and then that stupid bimbo he thought he loved 😡😡. But in some way of course this had to happen- that wound had to be bled to let out the festering poison and now the real healing can take place and Swara can truly make her place in his heart 😳. Just the fact that Sanskaar told her so much and opened up is proof enough of where things lie. So looking forward to see them progress in the next chapter and I have yet to read 7 so will come back on that in a separate post 😃

Love,

Shru xoxo

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sahakinju

Really a painful past.
Ab dekhna he kese swara Sanskaar ko batati true love hota kya he.
Waiting for next update




Yes dear it indeed is.
Will update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lol_leku_RoFl

Sorry for late...and add my likes..like click strucks..

Read part 5&6...

Wow..finally he understood swara views...i loved swara character being such a supportive friends..wonderful ...

Past revelation is painful...hope swara erase his painfull moments..

Well written...

Love

Lekah



Not a problem about being late dear.
Sure...don't worry about that too.

Glad you are liking Swara's character here.
Her character would show different shades.

His past is terribly painful
Let's see how she is gonna make him believe in love again.
Thank you so much dear.

Love
- Harshada



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res.😳
Unresed.😃
Hey Harshu!!!🤗

Hey dear Aheli🤗

Take a bow dearie!! Hats off to u girl!!!!👍🏼

Thank you so very much for this amazingly lovely feedback dear. You are being so generous to me😳

Such a beautiful portrayal of Sanskar's painful past!!😃 Such an awesome penning!!!👏

I was so nervous before posting this part. Glad you think it was well peened😊

OMG!!! U made me cry dear!!!😭 Such and heartbreaking update.😭

So sorry for making you cry dear😭😭

Really, children r so innocent souls and r God's gift and they should be showered with ample of love from his/her parents.😃 They neither understand nor need the materialistic thing called "Money" in their life. All they want is the love from his parents, near and dear ones.😳 But Sanskar's parents!!! I really don't have any words to say about them!!!🤬 I really don't have!!!😡 How can someone be so inhuman towards an innocent soul??😕🤢😭

Kids indeed are god's most beautiful gifts to parents.
They should get love, care and pampering because they deserve them.
How could one even think that their kid will be happy with money in place of their love and care?
Sanskar's luck is very bad in relations and his family. He is just unfortunate one.


Now I got it that why Sanskar became sad after eating the bhindi that day. Sanskar's sister Uttara used to make bhindi for him and he used to love it.😃 Uttara was hated by Sujata (I hope Sanskar's mom's name is Sujata here) coz Uttara was not her own child.😡 Sanskar and Uttara used to care for each other and used to love each other.😃 But unfortunately Uttara was murdered by Sujata!!!😡😭

Uttara's incident is also heartbreaking. Assume if you want to. But its not needed.
Uttara was sanskar's dad's illegal child and so obviously was hated by sanskar's mom.
Uttara was the only one, Sanskar could call family in true sense as but destiny again came here, to snatch his only happiness.


Now coming to Kavita.🤢 I had already guessed that Sanskar had been betrayed by some girl.😡😭 So I don't want to say anything regarding that part.😭 And about those dresses, that also I guessed that he had bought it for that girl. But I really can't believe that his parents were also like this!!!!😡 Poor boy!! He only got betrayed by everybody!!😭 So Its really difficult for him to have trust on someone again.😕😭 Now waiting to see that how Swara takes out Sanskar from his painful past with her unconditional love towards him and how he starts to trust someone and believe in love again.😳😉 Update soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃


Kavita has to be there to give that one last hammer which faded sanskar's belief in everything.
All what he got so far in his life, was betrayals.
Its terribly tough when you have seen so much in life, gone through so much in life to trust someone again.
Will update soon dear
You are always welcome for pms dear



With love,
Aheli.

Love
-Harshada



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Posted: 9 years ago

Ouii Harshu, no sorry between sisos understand??!!😉 And ur portrayal of Sanskar's past was so realistic and painful that it was bound to make anyone emotional...😆😳
Happy SwaSan's 1st Fake Marriage Anniversary!!!😳🤗
Today is the day we got our magical couple.😃

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