SWASAN SS - LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL[LAST PART PG 39 ON 25/08 ]

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Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: tithi1812
Hey Harshada.. It was an emotional update.. U made me cry.. Sanskar had faced a lot.. A lot.. Parents r most important prsn in child's life..and Sanskar lost his childhood..and after that, kavita's betrayal was d final nail in d coffin..his trust on love..on relations was completely shattered.. But I liked that he finally cried his heart out..and sumwhre he chose swara to tell everything.. And I love it.. Wish swara make him trust again on love..and heal his all pain.. I wish..any children don't have to face such bitter life..family is d most imprtnt part in everyone's life..

A big thanks to u Harshada.. U have penned it down so beautifully.. Actually I love your thought.. Your approach towards life.. I too believe in dat way..so I can connect wid it well..
God has gifted u wid this talent.. Don't stop writing Dear..😳 and keep entertaining us 😉 😆 Stay blessed

Dear tithi,

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback dear.

Sorry for making you cry😭😭😭

Indeed Sanskar had faced a lot in his life...or I would say a lot more than a lot. Parents play the most important role in a kid's life. They are supposed to make their child walk on the right path, they are supposed to love him, support him and care for him. But unfortunately Sanskar couldnt get any of these from his parents.

Kavita's betrayal just took off whatsover trust and faith remained in him. The kind of past he had, the amount of betrayals he had faced in his life so far, had broken him totally.

He is yet to realize swara's importance in his life but his heart knows that he trusts her.

And that was the reason he opened up to her about the most sensitive part in his life.

lets see how Swara is going to make him believe in love and relations again.

Well, I am glad you liked what I have penned down.

I dont think this was something unique. This is very common perspective which I think almost every second one have towards the life. You left me speechless. Hopefully will keep writing.

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-Harshada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Nupur_5

Hey Harshada :)
Amazing update dear & you written Sanskaar's pain very beautifully and Swara's reaction & how she wanted to soothe him was beautiful!
From the beginning I suspected that only betrayal of one girl is not the reason behind Sanskaar's hatred & rudeness! There is something more!
And it is his parents, or should I say so called parents!
Felt really bad for Sanskaar & Uttara as well! She was the only person Sanskaar loved immensely!
Bt his so called mother killed her!
As if these was not enough, Cavity happened!
After all the pains, Sanskaar started to believe in love & relationship but Kavita broke him into pieces!
Bt now Swara is with Sanskaar! Yeah it will take time for Sanskaar to acknowledge his feelings for Swara and Swara will have to make Sanskaar believe in love & relationship with patience!
Bt I think Sanskaar already trust Swara & maybe like her as well otherwise he wouldn't have open up to her!
The update was amazing and now I'm eager to read further!
Please update the next chapter soon!
Loads of love & hugs <3

Dear Nupur,
Thank you so very much 😳
Glad you liked the update and found it up to the mark. As I said earlier also I was very nervous about this one whether I would be able to pull it off or not. But reading every comment, was such a relief.

Yes I know and you was right absolutely. The kind of reactions and kind of hatred I have shown from Sanskar, definitely demands a very strong, valid reason, incidents behind it. So everything must be in order to justice the extensity of his pain.

Uttara, the only one Sanskar could call his family as was killed by his mother. Uttara had to bear the punishment of her father's deeds or I should say sins.

Kavita's chapter was that one hammer which broke the one who had slowly gathered his pieces. That one betrayal made him lose his trust over everything in this world.
Of course Swara is with Sanskar. I guess you are right here as well. Let's see in the upcoming updates how she is gonna make him believe in love and relations again.

Thanks a lot dear.
Will update soon.

Love
-Harshada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...
Hey harshadha..
It was soo painful update.. I know it's not only about a girl... But it also include a girl..

Yep these kinda people are there... They only mean for money.. not people..

Love..

Kam..

Thank you so much Kamila dear 😊
Sanskar's part was about to be painful and emotional.
His faded belief in everything could not be just because of a girl. Someone else had to play an important role there.

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-Harshada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: svg98
Emotional update..
Very clear why Sanskar is the way he is..a child needs his parents the most not the money and they were never there for him..and then he received betrayal from every side..nobody will be able to believe anyone after this..

Now only Swara can heal him..would love to see if he would allow her now to enter in hai world or move ever far away from her..
Can't wait to read more..
Update soon..
Love,
Piya

Hello there, I guess this is for the first time we are interacting.
Thanks for letting me know your thoughts.

Parents play the most important role in their child's life. Its very needed for the parents, to be there for their children, to love them, to care for them, to make them understand about all the rights and wrongs. This imprints on a kid in his/her childhood. Sanskar was unfortunate in case of his parents. They never treated him the way they should have, They never had time for him. The amount of betrayals he had received in his life, had left her with nothing but hatred towards life.

Let's see if he allows her in his world or not.
Will update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Nivijo
Harshada it's so awesome dear. I cant even imagine sanskar's pain. It must have been un tolerable for him. He is broken beyond repair. I loved the agony of sanskar. Totally it is superb.
Be healthy and be happy and of course keep updating.
Love u loads
Nivi

Thank you so much dear
Glad you liked it.
It indeed is very painful.
Thanks dear . you too take care and stay blessed.
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- Harshada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Anu18
Hi Harshada!
I have been guessing about betrayal of a girl and his own parents regarding Sanskar's behaviour. But this is really shocking to know how they have snatched his everything for mere sake of money. His pain is terrible. No doubt why he hate relations and most specifically love. Today's part was really very emotional.
Waiting for the next update. Let's see how Swara acts as his saviour.
Thanks for the PM 😊

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Anu

Hey Anu dear,

I know. I remember you guessing about his family issues.

Update was meant to be shocking dear.

Not exactly...they didnt snatch things from him for sake of money but they gave him money and everything else except themselves.

His pain is beyond imagination.

I know this part was painful and emotional as well.W

Will update soon.

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-Harshada

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Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: spatika
awesome update.
continue soon

Thanks dear.

Will continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: kritz4ever
Emotional update

Thanks a lot dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Its just awesome how to expressed his deep down emotions so easily...i want to knw wat will swara do now after knowing all this...plz update soon n pm me