SWASAN SS - LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL[LAST PART PG 39 ON 25/08 ] - Page 10

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Harshu dearest 🤗

Dearest Shruti🤗🤗

Thank you so much for this amazing feedback.

You just made my day😳

Whoa! What an emotionally charged chapter this was and it surely heralds a true turning point in this story too? You built the thing up very well.

Thanks a lot dear. This part was meant to be emotionally charged and the revelations and the last part will be even more. Turning point, not exactly because the story will progress as I have shown it right from the first update. Next updates will clear everything. If you are saying I built things well, then I am seriously flying in air now😆

Swara is so acutely attuned to feelings and especially Sanskaar's- they both are of course but here, as Sanskaar is hurting and lashing out, it takes a patient and loving person to pierce that armour and boy did Swara manage to do that. She recognised the bhindi brought on some memories which after his outburst last night was too much for Sanskaar to take of course.

Indeed true. To handle someone like Sanskar, it takes lot of patience, love and care. Because only love and care are two things which can break the walls he has created around him and to end the his sufferings.

Swara pretty well did that.

You got it all right. Bhindi definitely reminded Sanskar of someone, of something.

Then the whole scene on that terrace- first that involuntary hug- that spoke volumes, Sansskaar has already let Swara past his guard and he so craves the comfort only she can give him. Of course he then reacted the way he did- I expected that as being consistent with the way you have built this Sanskaar. But as soon as Swara was hurt, he was unable to keep up his pretence. Of course the most masterful thing was the way Swara finally broke through to him and made him see how he is self destructing for no reason. And the breakthrough is made 👏👏. Will wait to see how they progress, although I believe I have some inkling 😉

Glad you liked the terrace scene.

No matter how rude he be with her, no matter how harsh words he uses for her, but even he cant deny the fact that she is someone magical, atleast for him.

The kind of comfort he gets around her, in her embrace was something he needs the most.

Amazing. You knew how he was gonna react...yes surely the way I have build up his character, he has to react that way. But he could not see hurt swara. His care, what he was hiding or to be specific running from would vanished the soon he saw a hurt swara. Swara finally managed to break his walls a little.

Thank you loads dearest😳

Will update soon. You are brilliant and I am sure you know where this gonna lead😉😳

Great work Harshada xoxo

Thanks again for this ever so amazing feedback. Belated happy friendship day dear😳

Love

-Harshada