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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
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Off to read now😊

Dear Harshada,

As usual, a very lovely story. It had a such a soft and wonderful feel to it - Swara despite not remembering yet knowing of her deep love for Sanskaar and her complete trust in him and his love for her. You brought out her confusion and her frustration - she knows that they love each other and is sad that she cannot remember the beauty of such a love.

Sanskaar - well, just what does one say. His love and patience are beyond words. He knows her so well that he just know what exactly he has to say or do to calm her. As long as she believed him and his love, he can fight any battle.

The ending or rather as you said, the beginning was amazing - it is indeed the start of another new friendship, another new relationship which would result in even more remarkable memories.

Their love is indeed eternal.

love,
Nyna

Dear Nyna🤗

Thank you so much for being first one to comment and that too without pm😳

Really do mean a lot to me.

Glad you liked this shot dear.

I seriously didnt like the way ML track shaped up in serial [ especially saahil😕 and those constant utters "tum khooni ho" ]

So this is just a different take on track to have some SWASAN feel

Yes thats what I wanted to portray. Swara's heart knows that she loves Sanskar but at the same time is in vulnerable state after forgetting their love.

Sanskar is Sanskar. He is the best. Who else better than him can calm his swara down. The moment till she is with him, he can do anything.

Yes it is not ending but a start...of a beautiful relationship. Glad you liked it.

They would surely start their life again and would make new and amazing life cherishing memories together.

Thanks again for this lovely feedback dear

Love

-Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Very nicely written, Harshu dear 🤗🤗

Liked the play on the ML track. The way you had portrayed Swara's distress and anguish at being unable to remember any of those precious memories, was very well done. The best part was the wonderful trust and faith between SwaSan. Though Swara can't really recall the love she felt for him, she feels so comforted, so reassured by his presence, his faith in her.

And Sanskaar is absolutely, irrevocably in love with his wife. 😊 Liked the bit where he says they can build new memories together. That's what is so meaningful in their relationship after all...that they have come through thick and thin, surmounted so many obstacles, and all the time, building so many beautiful moments together.

Nice done, sweetheart. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

Dearest Viji🤗

Feels so good to have your feedback over this and that too without pm😳

Thank you so very much.

Glad you liked the os.

They just ruined ML track in serial, didnt they?

Firstly they brought Saahil😕 and then their nonstop tum khooni ho jaap

I just wanted to write something light, and sweet over this with over beloved SWASAN.

Swara's distress and frustration was justified because she had forgotten the most important part of her life. She could see one person, Sanskar who was there to do anything for her...his love was clearly visible to her and there she was...unable to even remember him. Glad you liked that part.

Trust and faith have always been the strongest point in swasan's relation.

Despite of forgetting everything, and not remembering sanskar and his love, Swara felt safe, comfortable and protected in Sanskar's presence and I believe thats true love is all about.

Yes even thats my favourite part. Because Sanskar can only try, but he cannot assure her that he would bring her memory back. But he can definitely assure her that they would start their life again and would form new and more beautiful memories together.

Thank you so much dearest😳

Your and so many of other's comments always brings a grin over my face [ you know when I am in clg, my all friends always stare suspiciously at me and keep on asking me, "you dont even have any bf then what exactly is in your phone which makes you smile so wide😆" ]

Love

-Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sahakinju
Lovely os dear

Thank you so much dear.
Glad you liked it.

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tithi1812

@tithi1812

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Another nice os from u... emotional..loved their convo..recreating their moments..wow..kash show me bhi aisa hota... Waiting for more..keep writing..😳

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Hansika.....

@Hansika.....

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Beautiful and Emotional OS.
Thanks for the PM

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hey harshadha... Phew I typed correctly now... Such lovely os dear... I was thinking y I didn't get any os from you... Now it's fulfilled...

Swara turmoil and Sanskaar purely visible... I loved that Swara ready to take a chance not like the serial... Mmmuah for that... Sanskaar words are reflecting his love for her...

With love...

Kam...

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manasvi..

@manasvi..

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Hay harshada

Awesome os as always

I just loved it again as always

So swara lost het memory n sanky is trying to make her comfortable

She want him to leave her bcoz she think she is not worthy of him n his deep n pure love

But he never giveup on them

All their moment n his talk very nice

She try to remember everything but she failed to do so.

Sujata not intended to scold her but she did in sense of concern but it hurt swara that she did a mistake which canbe dangerous for her luv.

Yes she forget him n everything but her heart know him.

Finally she give up in his luv n they start a freash.

Thanks for pm

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Anu18
Dear
Beautiful Os 😊
Love to read your stories. Do keep posting more.
Love, Anu.

Thank you so much dear anu.
Glad you enjoy reading my stories
Hopefully will write more.

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Unres first post above😊</font>

Replied dearest nyna 😳
Thanks again.

Love
- Harshada

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IAdoreYou

@IAdoreYou

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Another beautiful piece Harshada :)
A beautiful take on ML which is written beautifully!

Dearest Nupur🤗
Thank you so very much for your lovely words dear.

Swara's confusions, anguish, pains, frustrations at forgetting a huge chunk of her life which was so important & now not able to remember those precious moments! Nicely done!

Glad you think Swara's turmoil and pain was well written.

Sanskaar - Well what can I say about this guy? Or more accurately his love, adoration, care, trust, devotion for Swara? No words are enough to describe these! You have to just feel & you did an amazing job by making us able to feel Sanskaar's almost exact emotions!

Sanskar Maheshwari is sanskar maheshwari.
Extraordinarily amazing character.
I take it as a big complement if you could feel Sanskar's emotions.
Do mean a lot to me.

The last part was so so so beautiful & so poignant!
Sanskaar's trust on Swara & Swara's love knowing even that she don't remember anything Bt still she can't tolerate any harm upon Sanskaar!
Swara's trust on Sanskaar's trust along with Sanskaar & Sanskaar's love which she can clearly see & feel!

Glad you liked the last part dear.
I took quite time while writing it.

And then the most beautiful part when Sanskaar promised a new beginning, making new memories more beautiful than previous ones!
Their new beginning of a new life!
Together! Hand in hand!
With each other! For each other! Bcoz of each other!

Sanskar promised a new start of their life. He wasnt sure if he could bring her memory back but he would make sure to craft new more beautiful memories with swara.
Truly! Because they are made for each other.

And that's SWASAN!
Swara & Sanskaar melting beautifully together!

And indeed it was not the ENDING, it was the BEGINNING!

Glad you liked that. It was rather a beautiful start than an end.

Awesome work Harshada :)
Keep writing more & keep sharing with us!

Thanks a lot Nupur😳
You truly made my day.
Have been not much well by health but reading this, made me feel so better.

Lots of love & hugs for you :)

Love

-Harshada

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