RagLak TS- Main Tera Ho Jaun Jo Tu Kar De Ishaara (Last Part on pg9) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I hope Kartika gets punished
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice story line.. 👍🏼

Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Claptrap-

Pheu 🤗

Aww!! Why these kinda things never happen in this show? 😭
You don't know Pheu.. I'm feeling like crying right now.. Thinking about our state... What an unlucky fandom we are!!! Nowadays I've left all the hopes with this show.. Just madly reading all the stories on Ragya 😭


Awesome start Pheu!!! Karthik pushed her off from the cliff.. I thought he'll physically hurt her step by step and will make Laksh go mad 😆


Aww!! My poor Laksh.. He's so broken .. How things have changed .. Once this Laksh tried to kill Ragini and today if someone try to hurt her.. He'll not spare .. 😳


I loved how he confronted his family for Ragini's missing.. 😳


I've no idea what will happen next 😆 Please next part soon!!! 😳


Hey Poorvi 🤗
I know now these stories are only our jeene ka sahara.
Thanks for liking it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy

Hey, you wrote and didn't inform me? I am angry. Now will forgive in only 1 condition, PM me the next updates *lol*

btw, amazing start!

Sorry Shiri, gussa na hona.
I am gonna send you the PM for sure.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansinarang95

omg phenuli.the part is just amazing..aww laksh heartbroken😭

loved the part soo kartik back 😈
continue soon..😳😳

missed u soo much

I missed you too Mansi...and m glad you liked it...Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

I hope Kartika gets punished

Hmm! Lets see what happens!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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TWO


The next day early in the morning a mini bus carrying some 15 persons on its way from Kolkata to Howrah were facing difficulty travelling as the roads were disturbed by the previous night's heavy rain. The driver stopped the bus on seeing a tree which was lying on the road, he got out of the bus just to take an idea if the bus could pass by. Just when he was returning back to the bus he noticed something that shocked him a big time. He ran towards the bus to call the other members. All of them reached the spot and saw a girl in a near to death state. They all at once could not decide on what to do, where to ask help from? But then they decided to help her out. That was a deserted area and their journey to the hospital would be a long one but seeing the will of the girl to live despite such a condition made those people more determined to save her. She was breathing though it was evident how difficult it was for her to, she wanted to live. They tried their best to save her until they find some medical help. On reaching their place they got her admitted to the hospital which was run with the help of the funds raised by their Church. The previous night they were in Kolkata for a function inorder to raise more funds, these people who belonged to the Christian community were noble souls who along with the Church had built up a hospital to help the poor and needy, to provide them better medical facilities.

Yes the girl they were trying to save was Ragini but little did they know about her identity. All they were concerned was to save the girl.

On the other hand Lakshya was searching for his wife, went door to door in search of the love of his life. He did not allow anybody to interact with him. The Maheshwaris seemed a liitle bit confused, they were not being restless as Lakshya and were confused to see Lakshya.

DP: Lakshya, no need to be so restless, she'll be back.

AP: Of course she will be, she has done these kinds of dramas before as well

Sujata: Yes you are right Jiji. I can't trust this girl anymore.

Dadima: Just shut up all of you, my laado has changed for good. Oh Khatushyamji please bring my laado back, I won't let her take such steps, I won't scold her.

Sharmishtha: All this has happened to my Ragu only because of me.

Swara and Sanskar who had gone to file a police complaint were back.

RP: You have got the missing complaint filed?

Sanskar: No, not yet, they'll but after 24 hours.

Swara: Where are Lakshya and Baba?

Adarsh: They are searching for Ragini but no news yet.

Shekhar was back all shattered.

A fuming Lakshya was back too, he was drenched. He had been looking for Ragini for more than 12 hours now.

Sanskar: Lakshya I had been calling you but your phone was switched off.

Lakshya: I don't care.

Sanskar: Look Lakshya, I understand but don't be stubborn. What if Ragini was calling you.

Lakshya: RAGINIII...Oh My God! Ragini...

He went inside and searched his phone, it was lying on the floor beneath the bed.

He set up his phone and after 5 minutes his phone beeped.

He received a message from an unknown number, the message was:

Your life has come to a standstill Mr. Lakshya Maheshwari, the one who was your saviour is no more, your Ragini is dead

Lakshya came running outside, drove his car and reached the police station. Meanwhile Sanskar assured the family members that he'll take care of Lakshya and followed him to the police station.

Lakshya showed the text to the inspector and asked him to file a case and solve it and get his Ragini back. He was being mad as if he'll destroy the whole world if he doesn't get back his Ragini.

The police investigation started and took them to different places- Shimla, Chandigarh, Ahmedabad but got no clue of Ragini.

Days passed, months passed and one day the police caught Kartik. Kartik was brought to Lakshya. The police interrogated Kartik but were unable to prove him the culprit, there were evidences but not concrete enough to frame Kartik. Lakshya was standing outside the police station, when Kartik came out. Kartik went up to Lakshya and whispered, See I have taken my revenge.'

Upon hearing this Lakshya lost his control and punched Kartik.

Lakshya: You Swine, tell me where is my Ragini! I am not going to leave you.

The police came running to control Lakshya and Kartik made a puppy face as if he was the only innocent man left on Earth.

4 years passed. The Maheshwari family was as it used to be. The Gadodias had welcomed a boy, SwaRagini's younger brother Shubh. Everything was back to normal but there was one person who was living with a heavy heart and he was Mr. Lakshya Maheshwari. He had cut all ties with the Maheshwari family but was still with them because it was Annapurna who could not accept her son going away from her and so Lakshya to an extent was emotionally blackmailed to live with them.

There was one more reason and that was Shubh. Sharmishtha had convinced Lakshya not to leave his family, not to leave them atleast to be with them for Shubh for whom Ragini did everything.



TO BE CONTINUED...
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I hope this part is liked the same way...Thank for all the appreciation guys!
Edited by Pheunli - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pheunli... yu rocksss...
Superb.. poor laksh.. make them together soon.. pls..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update pheunli
I became emotional reading it 😭
Plz unite laksh with his bacha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
it was really mind blowing
continue soon :)
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