Obsessive-a 16+ ragya [UPDATES after March 3 2017] A/N Page one. - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
when will you update this?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy

when will you update this?

Actually just now I am stuck with fangirl.. I am trying to give longest updates so as to end it asap... I am done with 3rd part n it isn't more than 10..

Another reason for the delay is my quarterly exams ... I honestly say ki I am not a bright student.. infact from the pcm pov i think I am below average so just trying to work for the exams..
I will post the updates on the story after 26 July .. for sure... or may be after 18th July because at that time I won't be posting fangirl...

Sorry for the delay...

Harshita
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aah! Its ok. I understand. All the best for your exams and i hope you complete fangirl soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShirishaTeddy

Aah! Its ok. I understand. All the best for your exams and i hope you complete fangirl soon.

Thanks n Sure
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Laksh is...no words to describe him!

But I will kill him if he hurts ragini!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update 👏
Hating lakshya 😡
Poor ragini 😭
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update.. 👏
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update harshu..

Ewww.. yuck..Laksh is so disgusting!!
But Ragini n Laksh r to end up together.. but sachchi bataaun, I'm a die hard RagLak fan, yet doesn't want this marriage to happen..
Ragini n her life would be ruined..
Until n unless, he doesn't understand her worth, in terms of love n not lust, I would not accept him..

Waiting for the next update!!

All the best for ur exams..n believe yourself u ll definitely kill it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really nice concept
please continue it soon
and dont forget to pm me
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Obsessive part2
Hi all so this is the next part of my story. Hope you all like it pls leave ur comments below waiting for them.
In ragini's room same n8-
She stood up..
Ragini(monologue)- no no no ... I can't cry I have to be strong of he enjoys just the body then I will do the same.. i won't love him.. I will too enjoy I will be like him... I won't love... I will be like him.. lustful...
Saying this only felt like scratching her soul.. she got up n drank alcohol..
in the meantime laksh's room -
Laksh (monologue)- laksh let's go n once meet ur to be bride n finance..
N with a evil smirk he moved down.. n then left for GM..
Ragini was all tears in her room she continuously drank.. n tried killing her inner voice which said she can't do that .. she can't be like laksh... but then her mind said she have to be.. she was sitting on a side of the bed ... n drinking alcohol n working..
Just then she heard a voice from the window which startled her.. it was laksh..
L- hi ragini..howz u ..
R- laksh..
L- yes me any problem..
R- nope.. n she drank more..
L- moved in n lashed the door of her room.. he moved n close to her n then observed her she was gulping drinks after drinks n working with her laptop.. laksh felt as if his female version is in front of his eyes.. he took out 2cigarette from his pocket.. ragini looked at him her eyes were red n swollen..
R- what is this..
L- wese u r drinking alone won't u offer me..
Ragini made a drink in her glass n forwarded it without looking at him..
Laksh took the drink n gulped it..
L- forwarded a cigarette to her..
R- do u have a lighter...
Laksh help her ignite the cigarette n ignited his own too..
They both smoked it was the first time for ragini n she coughed badly in her 1st try.. laksh got up from his place n rubbed her back...he took both the cigarettes away n anguishwd them...
L- r u ok..
R- yeah.. absolutely fine..
Laksh sat on his original position..
Ragini saw him n then gulped the alcohol directly from the bottle..the moment of her neck while drinking made laksh go mad..
L- ragini.. what r u doing I am ur to be husband n u r continuously drinking n smoking in front of my eyes...
R- I thought it habitual for all this ..
L- yes I am.. but I thought u r not of this type..
Ragini looked up from her laptop.. hibernated it .. n then looked deep into his eyes...
R- yes laksh I am not if this type..(her eyes turned red n moisture started to form..). . I am not of ur type... n I know I won't be ... (was about to say more but stopped).. ccchhee.. let it be.. my worth isn't more than an object.. wese y r u here at this hour...
L- nothing thought to meet my fiance n to be wife..
R- oh that's nice..
She sremoved her top... her inner clothes just covering her bosoms . She slowly Pecked his chest in started opening his shirt... laksh was shocked at this act from her.. he had enquiried about the girl. N what all he knew this wasn't Ragini Gadodia.. he had thought he will enjoy her body n she will plead him. .but no she wasn't doing any of it.. infact she was willing to sleep with him in her own house in her own bed even before marriage...
Laksh shifted back..
L- ragini what r u doing...
R- u don't know.. r u so innocent..
L- (smirking)- yes I know baby but ..
R- ssshhh...
Laksh grabbed her waist...he pulled her close.. n then made her lie on the bed... he removed his shirt n came to top of her... she too smiled lustfully.. yes she was learning his art..
L- ragini I never knew we will be so close so soon...
R- (sarcastically smiled)- kya parak padta h laksh a week after n a week before...
Laksh saw her once.. she had moisture as well as she was smiling and looking at him lustfully...
L- (monologue)- what this girl wants.. she is so confusing...eeeghh... Lego laksh today will call Leena again it's just 10 now. .. leave her...
L- ragini I don't think u r in ur senses..
R- hardly matters laksh ..I don't want to be... come y r u stopping...
L- ragini... what is this ..
R- I am giving myself to my to be husband...
Laksh got up from her .. he made her stand.. made her wear her top again .. covered her in sheets n left...
Ragini was too drunk n she immediately slept..
Laksh in the car..
Laksh POV-
What was that ..shit man laksh how.can u miss the opportunity to sleep with Ragini..she.was herself ready man ..no no no no no.. it's better u Left I have to make her feel special so that she feels like laksh Maheshwari's wife n not ur another sleeping partner.. but what to do man her tears whenever I see them I feel like eating the girl up...
Eeehhh... I hate it... I want her n want her now...
Ragini u have awaken the beast inside me..I am coming back baby..
Laksh POV- ends

Laksh turned his car n again entered her room.. he this removed her blanket n kissed her lips widely hungrily n passionately... Ragini woke up due to this n responded to his kiss.. she too git wild.. he removed her top n then moved close to her neck n kissed passionately... he liked the strap if her inner wear n it thew it on the floor exposing her bosoms.. he leaned on her Brest n pressed n sucked her bosoms hard.. Ragini moaned in pain.. he enjoyed it more...n then he removed his shirt...
L-(in a low seductive voice)-ragini u see i have to do everything now. So next time pls don't drink..
Ragini got up from the bed n pressed her nude upper body in his..
R- sure laksh...
N she kissed him .. they kissed passionately..
Ragini hugged laksh... but then she got hold of an injection n injected drugs in his body...
L- what did you just do...
R- shhh.. baby sleep for now.. n u can kiss me... but sleep for now.
He soon fell on her .. his all the weight was on her.. she shifted him n then slept.. by his side...
R- (monologue)- 1st time k liye bura nahi tha yrr..well done ragini.. chalo next time I will be more stronger. .. I too what to enjoy my official 1st n8

Saying this she too dossed off resting her head on his video n held him close to her .
Next mrng-
Laksh got up... he was angry.. n then he saw ragini.. her upper body was naked n everyinch of it touched his Body...
Laksh turned her softly n came over her... he then kissed her lips.. she too woke up n responded...
L- what did you do last n8
R- made u sleep ..
L- really..
R- I don't think anything is required to be proven..
L- now u have to pay for it..
R- I am ready for ur punishment ...
Laksh.. removed her clothes n then his.. he then came on top of her.. he pinned her hands over her head n then kissed her lips .. neck.. bosoms..n then entered her body... she moaned in pain... he went deeper .. but then saw her face turning pale due to pain...
Laksh kissed her lips n tried to comfort her..
N then he rocked over her... she had no emotions .. it seemed that she enjoyed pain.. laksh like beast in anger chewed her body...
R- laksh not too much marks pls..
L- y...
R- I have to meet ur family today.
L- oh then we will shift the plan n I promise that...
He satisfied his lust.. he slept with her. ..
After an hour -
Shekhar called from down..
Shekhar - ragini bte I am leaving for the business trip will return after 2 days tc n bye..
Ragini was in her room with laksh .
She shouted..
R- yes dad.
Shekhar left.
L- great timing I have no ragini..
R- yes ..
N she rolled over him..
She teased him ... n then kissed his lips.. the kiss ended when she bit his lips..
After a few hours -
L- baby I love ur boldness...
R- hmm I too loved my boldness...
L- what u mean..
R- nothing wese good bye for today..
L- y r u tiered.
R- yes . I am...
L- ahan.. how about meeting tonight here itself..
R- if u want u can go with some other girl too I won't mind...
Laksh caressing her cheeks..
L- really...
R- yes. . Do what u want...
L- stood up n wore his clothes..
L- u know what a cool n bold wife like u is a must in once life .. i Don't think we will fight...
R- nope y would we ..

Laksh kissed her once again..
L- I will miss u rags .
R- I will miss ur body laksh ...
This irked him n he left..
In her room ragini was wrapped in bed sheets n she drank full bottle of alcohol...
R- I did it .. I am now his perfect wife... no no no.. I became a prostitute... he will now use me. (N she laughed like a maniac)... I just made my life hell n I am sooo happy for it... I slept with a Stranger... lovely mee.. I just like that .. I enjoyed his body... n she gulped more alcohol...

Ragini.. shifted to the mirror n saw the blue n red marks on her skin.. she entered her bathroom n sat for hours in the bath tub...for hours...

Laksh POV-
What a great n8 was that. The satisfaction which I got today.. was beyond words nmcan describe.. ragini she is perfect.. I wanted a this type of girl only. She won't ever stop..me.. n I won't ever be rude to her.
Love u baby rags.
POV- ends...

Laksh drove back home. And ragini fell on the bed n slept for long under the effect of alcohol

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