SwaSan OS - A New Paradise

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hello all im back with another OS & this is my third OS on SwaSan previous two were

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A New Paradise


This story is based of one of the most popular fairy tale "snow white" where we ll hv our Swara as the Snow White but no sever dwarf but we ll hv our hero sanskar there as her savior t is a poor wood cutter who get his meal by cutting wood in a jungle & made a small hut in there too , his parents died whn he was 8 years old after tht he used to stay with his paternal uncle but his aunt was very cruel , she used to beat him, don't give food & make her do all the world so one day he decided to run away & live by his own .. Now he is 27years old living alone & is happy with whatever he has.

Swara gadodia is a sweet & simple girl , belongs from a very rich & reputable family, her mother died after her birth so her father got married to another lady thinking Tht lady ll give her mother's love but it wasn't the case, infront of her father her step mom used to pretend Tht she love & care her but in real she doesn't , after a year Tht lady give birth to a girl swara's younger sis ragini both ragini & Swara shared a great bond almost like twins but ragini's mom never liked it but her father was happy to see them like this.. Days passed & with time both turned to b beautiful girls. Though both wr equally good, Swara was always bcom the limelight & that what ragini's mom can't digest, soon she was going to turn 20 & good alliance from different places where coming ragini's mom want those alliance for ragini as well but their first priority was always Swara. Eveb their father also want swara's marriage to happen , but ragini's mom didn't like it! She always felt Tht shekhar always love Swara more than ragini & never think about ragini's future over Swara .. Soon she made a plan to kill Swara & also get a golden opportunity whn shekhar went for a business trip for 2 weeks & meanwhile one day the girls went to roam in the nearest jungle as every year they go for a picnic with some of their friends & guards for safety. Ragini's mom took advantage of this situation & hire some man & make plan to kill Swara & make it look like an accident !

The day was very shine ! Both the sisters were really happy playing in the jungle ! It seems it was their best day ! Suddenly one of their friend suggest to play hide n seek & it was ragini's turn , all went to hide , Swara too searched a place to hide but was unaware from the upcoming danger.

Suddenly she felt some shadow around her there were 4 men surrounding her with an evil smile ! Swara was scared she was going to scream for help whn one of the put hand on her mouth & took her away frm there , they took her far away frm her guards & friends , all keep searching for her but couldn't find, those men took her near a cliff & while trying to save herself she get hurt in several places but among those guy one man was kind & he felt pity on her so he pushed her frm the cliff b4 they could put the Knife of her stomach while pushing her he said "I'm doing this to save u my child if I don't push u then ur step mom ll kill u for sure, don't come back here from all r dead Now" Swara was shattered after revealing the truth , she always knew her step mom doesn't like her but so much hatred tht she ll kill her she didn't believe while falling she was remembering all her happy days with her dad & ragini & closed her eyes as she felt this is the end of her life ..

Other 3 men, wht u did ? Y u pushed her ? U know ma'am asked her to stab her till she didn't took her last breath ' then asked to push

Man1: it's an accident I was jst going to stab but she fall but there is no chance of her survival

By this time other too comes their & they run away ragini saw Swara falling she tried to jump to save her but other friends stopped her & she kept sobbing ..

From tht day all thought Swara was dead .

Luckily that day the water flaw was less so Swara reached to the bank of some isolated place , she was half conscious & try to wake up but was too weak to do so but she got a hope when she noticed a small hut few step away frm tht river ,with lots of difficulty she somehow manage to reach to tht hut but it was empty & open she wnt there & bcom lost her consciousness.

It was getting dark , only moonlight was spreading its light around , sanskar was coming back from his work , but today he got late frm his usual days, whn he came near to his hut he was surprised to see the door open he went closer to it & found some blood stain on the floor he went inside & found a body was laying on the floor lifeless, he hurried to that person & turn to see her face, he saw her face in moon light it was glowing like a star ! Her face full with innocence , just like an sleeping Angel .,he got mesmerized to see her beauty & couldn't believe his eyes, he was lost I. Her wan the wind blow $ make noise which bring him back to the world , he noticed here wounds& hurriedly took her in to his arms & put her on his wooden bed carefully then he went out frm

The hut & bring water frm the river &

Also

Some herbs which is helpful to cure the wound , he then boil the water & clean her wound carefully & also apply those medicines & the fall a sleep near her feet .. Looking at her face

As the sun rays fall on her face , she slowly open her eyes & shocked to see a ma sleeping in front of her in the corner of her bed , she was scared & shout, which broke his sleep he jst jumped off frm his place & both eyes meet ,

sw: who r u ? What are u doing here ?

Sa: this is the exact ques I should ask to u? As its my place

Swara look around her & realize where she was & then recall the previous day she fall on the ground thinking about the incident & said I'm sorry

Seeing her In this condition sanskar run to her & with some hesitation hold her by shoulder & make her sit on bed

Sa: don't cry, it's ok .. & im sorry If I sound rude to U

Sw: no I'm sorry & I should thank u for allowing me to stay here &

Then she noticed her wound & looked at him confusingly

Sa: yeah I did this actually it was important to apply medi on thm

Swara smiled fadely

Sw: thanks but y did u do all this , I wish I could day

Sanskar get worried & said

Sa: but y? What happen with u ? And it's my duty to save after all insan hi to insan k kam ata hai

Sw: I wish all should think like u , u know what ? Y step mom tried to kill me & send goons after me, I got saved but now can't go back there or else she ll again try to kill & broke down crying

Sanskar couldn't saw her Like this he patted her shoulder & said

Sa: I knw its very sad but plz don't cry I'm sure as God saved u , there must n some reason behind it ! Stop crying

Sw: I don't knw what to do or where to go

Sa: it's ok u can stay here till u feel like

Sw(questioning):

Sa: look I also Hv no one in my life & I stay out whole day so u can feel free to stay here till u want

Sw: but y u want to help me? U don't knw me or I also don't knw u, how can u trust me?

Sa:w oh Let me introduce myself I'm sanskar a wood cutter who collect wood frm jungle & went to near villages or city to sell them .i Hv nothing to lose & I trust u bcos ur eyes make me feel tht u r really helpless but I don't knw about u that if u can trust me or not ..

Swara think for sometime & also think about last time if he had some wrong intention , he might try to harm her but instead of tht he took good care of her so she decided to trust him

Sw: she smiled & said ., I trust u bcos u Hv given me a new life

Hearing this both smiled & Shake their hands .

Sa: I know This Place isn't suitable for u to live but still feel at home

Sw: plz don't say like this , jaisa Bhi hai at least it's giving me shelter

Sanskar smiled & said

Sa: oh u must b hungry , let me bring u something to eat , he went near a stove kept at the corner of his hut & prepared few roti & daal for her she was looking at him in amusement wondering how cn someone survive all alone in the jungle .. She came out frm her thoughts whn he come with 2 plates with a smile

Sa: sorry could manage to give this only madam

Sw: oh Plz don't say like this it's more than what I could expect & it's Swara call me Swara not madam

Sa: ok :)

While hving their breakfast he noticed tht swara's dress wr got dirty & also torn many sides & hving blood strained, he thought to buy some cloths for her while coming back frm his work ! Soon he take good by frm her & asked her to take care .

As he left for work Swara start to roaming the small place , she saw the place was surrounding with many tress giving shadow to the house & near by there was the river through which she reached to this place she went close to the river & remember tht dreadful incident & tears roll down frm her eyes .. She sit near the river & washes face, feet & hands & get back to the hut.. She notice sanskar's small place there was the wooden bed & under the bed she saw a box at first she hesitate & then slowly open it & found his childhood pic with his parents & few books , she caress the pic & felt sad thinking about him being orphan , then she look at the books & realizes tht he is not completely illiterate & is interested in studies . Then she kept those things at its previous place & went to the small place where the small stove was kept she could sensed it he used it as the kitchen area.. There were some containers whc Hv wheat , rice & pulse , few vegs hanging in a bag .. she thought to return back his favor she should cook for something for him . So she decided to cook for him .

On the other hand after returning frm his work he stopped Infrnt of a cloth shop & buy few kurti, skirt & 1 salwar suit as he got confused what to buy & right now he doesn't Hv enough money to buy so he bought 3 pairs of cloths only ..

After reaching home he hand over the packet to her & she was really happy & touched to see his sweet gesture

Sa: I don't knw if u ll like it or nt but could manage to get ths only

Sw: what r u saying ? Is Ki koi zaroorat nehi thi , u hv already done a lot for me

Sa: I did nothing & as u r staying here u can't stay in ths dirty cloth Na ?

Sw: thank u , btw I Hv something for u

Sa(confused ): what ?

Sw: come in side will serve u dinner :))

Sa: wow so sweet of u thanks for preparing

Sw: this is nothing comparing to what u Hv done for me .

Sa: I did nothing , it was my duty

Swara smile & they Hv dinner .. Sanskar really enjoyed his dinner

Sa: after long time I had eat something so good .. Was tired of hving food prepared by myself

Swara smile . After finishing dinner it was time for sleep sanskar took his blanket & was going out frm the hut whn she stopped him , by holding his hand

Sw: whr r u going ?

Sa: to sleep in outside

Same: r u mad? It's not safe to sleep out side & don't make me feel more guilty that Mai Tumhe tumhare ghar se hi nikal rahi hu .. Make a sad face

Sanskar was touched by her care & he said ok he won't sleep out side so they decided to sleep turn by turn on day Swara ll sleep in bed & sanskar on floor & the nxt day vice Versa .

Days r passing like this both SwaSan bcom good friends , Swara used to help sanskar collecting wood & then he went to village to sell & in the evening whn he come back home they used to talk , sitting outside on the grass under the sky twinkling with stars & moon , they shared their likes dislikes, their childhood memories , sanskar told her about his life how he lost his parents & their get tortured by his chachi & run away $ living her alone Swara was feeling sad she hold his hand & squeezed it & he was broken without realizing put his head on her shoulder & cried out Swara too didn't stop him & console him , whn he get realized he apologized & Swara said dosti Mai no sorry no thank u & they smile ..

Sanskar who fall for her at the very first sight whn he saw her in unconscious knows that , he never deserve a girl like Swara who is rich , beautiful & well educated , he tried his level best to hide his feelings & happy with the friendship of her :) & want her to get all happiness in life

On the other hand Swara found her new world in sanskar ! She was liking his company & bcom habituated of him but not aware if it's love or not .. It was a Stormy night.. Raining heavily & the weather getting cold Swara was shivering & was trying to sleep but not able to do so sanskar noticed it & sit beside her rubbing her hands & back giving her some warmth but still it wasn't tht helpful then sanskar got something into his mind & asked Swara if she trust him

& she nodes in yes he took his blanket & wrapped both on it ! Taking Swara in his tight embrace ! Ar first Swara was shocked but then she understand why he did this sanskar was not meeting his eyes with her but she keep staring at him may b feeling the love & warmth they Hv for each other , she unintentionally buried her face into his chest getting peace & warmth soon they both dozed off in sitting position .

It's a new morning the storm get stopped and sun is shinning & was pepping throw the window is the small hut . It's Ray fall on Swara she slowly opened her eyes & realize she was still in sanskar's embrace , her heart beat raise fast as realization struck ! She wasn't feeling awkward In fact feeling so safe & protective & never want him to let her go & so she cuddle him more with a smile but tht wake sanskar's up & he was jumped off Swara blushed but sanskar was embarrassed, she couldn't meet his eyes so he was he said sorry & she jst said its ok ! & he left to get freshen up as he left ! Swara was jumping as she realized her love for him .. She was start to sing & dancing while doing so she dashed with sanskar but b4 she could fall he hold her tight , their eyes met & they had an eye lock whc got broke by some sound of wind they come back in their sense & he make her stand straight & he asked why she was so happy she jst said jst like tht . Tht day

Swara was singing while putting the cloths to dry & sanskar was also there cutting woods of near by trees , while she was singing someone wr watching her who was happy , shocked & it was her sister ragini she thought Swara was dead & stop coming out frm her house it was more than a month whn her friends convinced her to come out & she reached the place & heard a familiar voice a song whc her sister used to sing whn she used to b happy & she then followed tht voice & reach to tht place & surprised to see Swara alive her happiness had no bound she want to run & hug Swara tight but stopped her way whn her eyes fall on a guy who was there with her, she thought to inform her father about it .. Soon the news reached to shekhar & he was happy at the same time furious as he thought tht guy kidnapped her . He went there with all his guards

Sanskar was going out whn they all reached there Swara was surprised & hugged ragini tight but ther happiness got vanished whn she saw her father ordering his men to best sanskar , she was horrified , shekhar didn't let sanskar or Swara to explain but Swara couldn't take it anymore she went it Btwn their fight & Hugged sanskar , making everyone shocked she hugged him tight & cried making sanskar surprised as well .,

Sw: dad plz don't beat him I love him., I'm living with him with my own will , I don't want to get back I left the house for him we loved each other & living happily here

Sanskar was completely shocked he was speechless with her confession he wasn't getting is she speaking truth or jst trying to save him frm his father's men

Shekhar was more angry now he left him

& said

Shekhar : Aj tak tum mere dil me zinda thi but after this tum

Mere liye Sach me mar gai ho .. Now I Hv only one daughter Hv no relation with u , saying this he left taking ragini along with him, Swara was broke down & crying sanskar came forward to her to console by giving her a side hug

Sa: y u lied to him? Kyun nehi bataya apni sauteli ma k bare me ? U Hv to chance to go back to ur world why u didn't u go ?

Sw: bcos I don't want to go sanskar , they r happy in their own world , ragini Hv her family her ma , baba , how cn I ruin their happiness? I can't b tht selfish

Sanskar was sad as for a sec he thought that she might love him but now he felt she lied for her sister's betterment, he gave a light smile & was about to leave whn she hold her hand & said

Sw: and more over I found my new world in u , I didn't lie sanskar I love u .. I really do ! Can't think about living life without u .. I don't knw about u but I really love u

Sa: (tears whr forming their way frm his eyes) who said I don't love u ? I fall in love with u at the moment I saw u , I love u Swara but don't Hv the courage as I knw I don't deserve u , (not meeting eyes) Swara cupped his face make him look into his eyes while wiping his tears

Sw: who said tht u don't deserve me ? Tum

Kaun hote ho ye decide karne wale .. Sanskar I love u .. The way u r I don't need anything else whn I Hv y beside me so don't u dare say next time like this ok ?

Sanskar give his best smile to her & they hugged each other .after a long & tight hug he break it & said

Sa: I don't knw how our future will be but I promise I will never let smile to go away from ur faca & will make sure tht tears always stay away frm ur big $ beautiful eyes so ms Swara gadodia will u marry me ? And be mine forever ?

Swara was speechless with moist eyes she jst node yes & he lift her in his arms & took her inside the hut , he make her sit on the bed & was pacing here & there

Sw: sanskar kiya kar rahe ho ? U got hurt Na come sit I ll put medi on them ..

Sa: how cn I sit Swara ? U knw we r getting married Shadi Ki kitni taiyari karni hai

Sw: uffo right now sit here , (holding his elbow make him sit) and let me gone u first aid after tht jo kar Na hai karna .. Swara saw applying medi while he was staring at her lovingly

Sw: aise Kya dekh rahe ho

Sa: dekh raha hoo yeh sapna hai yeh Sach

Sw pinch him

Sa: awooo Swara what r u doing it hurts

Sw: yakeen hogaya k ap neend mei nehi yeh haqqiqqat hai , he hold swara's hand & placed a kiss , sending shiver to her spine

Sa: thank u so much Swara for coming into my life .. I can't tell u how much happiness u gave me .. I was so alone in ths whole world but ur arrival make me life more beautiful & give meaning to my existence thank u so much ! I love you

Swara was all teary she said

Sw: and y give me a new life sanskar I love u too & they hug .

Tht night both where laying into the grass under open sky holding each other's end looking into the sky as if thanking God for bring them into each other's life .. Soon they fall a sleep like this only .. It was morning sanskar woke up & staring at her the sun was disturbing her sleep so he keep his palm to give her shadow ! And smile watching her face in relaxation .. He was like this don't knw for how long whn Swara woke up she took his hand & hugged it .

Sa: don't want to get up ?

Sw: (lazily) sAid no ..

Sa: but sweetheart u Hv to after all I need to go for our wedding preparations..

Hearing about their wedding she jumped off & sit straight

Sw: wedding? Today ?

Sa: yeah today only .. I can't wait to make u mine forever here this she blushed

While he kept admiring her .. Then after sometime they got freshen up .. Had breakfast ! He placed a soft kiss on her forehead & left for their marriage Prep.. At first he reached to the village temple & talked with the pandit & fixed time for marriage then frm market he bought a red churidhar with simply gold work, a beautiful dupatta , jhumka , some red & golden bangles , sindor & mangalsutra

When he reached their hut she was preparing food , he hugged her frm back & handed those thing infront of her , she bcom very emotional

Sa: u want this day to b the best & most memorable but Thts what I cn afford right now but I promise in future I ll fulfill all ur dreams

, she was in tears she turn to face him & hugged him

Tight

Sw: this is the best for me sanskar whn I m with U I need nothing else , saying this she tighten her grip on him he too hugged her tight & caress her hair while burring his face on her shoulder !

Sw; but why didn't u get anything for ur self ? Raising eye brow she ques

Sa: i don't need to think what should I wear or how should I look but I want u to feel special on this day now we Hv less time left u go & get ready

She nodes & with in 15 min she God ready & she was looking simply yet gorgeous ! Sanskar couldn't take off his eyes whc make her blush his mouth was slightly open she comes closer to him shut it, bringing him to the present world & said

Sw: chale ab late nehi ho rahe ?

He felt shy & brush his hair & they went ..

Finally they reach to the temple ! And Swara was surprised to saw ragini there actually sanskar somehow convince her to come they hugged each other & then ragini do the kanyadaan & their marriage took place the took pheras Hand in hand while looking into each other's eyes .. The sanskar put sindor & tied mangalsutra & they got married finally ..

It start raining as him God also giving them his blessing to lead a happy & prosperous life

They reached their Swara was shy & nervous at the same time as now she is no more Swara gadodia but she is sanskar 's wife .. Sanskar could sense her nervousness & smiled naughtily ..

Sanskar hugged her frm back & she was feeling shy .. Sanskar make her face him & cup her face their eyes meet

Sa: Swara don't feel nervous nothing has changed Btwn us , our relation jst got a pious name that's it .. Saying this he placed a soft kiss on her forehead while she closes her eyes to feel his love , he was about to Leave whn she hold his hand & hugged him tight

Sw: I love u sanskar ! I love u so much thanks for making me feel so special , she was crying while saying .. He kissed on the tears frm her both cheeks & soon his eyes all on her lips and in sec their lips meet at first it was soft & sweet kiss Swara too responded to him & he deepened kiss while pulling her by her waist ! It was a long and passionate kiss .. Swara was blushing hard & moves toward the window to avoid eye contact with him.. Her back was facing him , he slowly went there putting her hair a side he nuzzled her neck & shoulder slowly his lips move toward the dori of her dress & he open it using his teeth while doing so his hot breath we giving shiver to her body, her knees were feeling low.. She can't take it any more & hugged him tight & he took her into his arms & lay her on bed .. Tht night they consummated their marriage two souls bcom one in all manner .

In the morning Swara was laying on his chest the best pillow she could ever hv while he was caressing her hair

He talked about his future plan with her he told tht he want them to move to the city in search of better future

Sw: but sanskar this place is the best for me I don't want to go

Sa: now u r liking it but for how long ? It's not providing much facilities I want to give her all the happiness in life which isn't possible by staying her

Sw: but sanskar I m happy (cupping his face ) as long as u r with me

Sa: but shona think about our future till now I didn't bother as I was all alone but now I Hv u .. U r my family & in future we ll Hv kids ( making Swara blush) i give all the happiness to them .. Whatever I missed in my childhood I want thm to get Thts y only I Hv decided to move to the city

Finally she agreed .. With heavy heart they leave tht place for their better future .. In the city they already talked with those people who used to but woods from him for place & work .. They got a room

In a chawl sanskar worked hard day & night & soon swara also joined him .. They were living happily with each other support & love , hardwork they start a business with their saving & with in few years sanskar was capable to give everything tht he wishes to give Swara they bought their own house .. Swara's happiness had no bounds .. One day they had got a news tht swara's father got an heart attack later she found out tht her step mother's truth was revealed as on wedding day of ragini she elope with her lover who was frm other caste her mom broke down & confess her crime to their father throw her out but he couldn't take this anymore swara's innocent face come infront of his eyes he felt guilty & got heart attack ! Swara was crying while sanskar was consoling her they went to meet him , he asked forgiveness & also accept them they were really happy & shekhar also asked him if sanskar need any financial help which he said he jst need his blessing nothing else :) shekhar felt proud of him & realized how wrong he was about sanskar ! Everything was going fine whn one day .

Sa( working on laptop ): Saying something to her but she wasn't feeling well & was lost sanskar went to her & asked she said nothing & was leaving but got faint sanskar got panicked & took her into his arm & called doc .. The doc came & examine Swara & give them the biggest news of their life , she was expecting ! Both Hv happy tears in their eyes ! They don't knw how to react Sanskar was extremely happy & he placed a kiss on her forehead.

Days are passing soon their family got complete as Swara give birth to a cute baby girl .. They named her SaRa & sanskar thanks Swara for giving him

A family of his own ! They hug each other while holding their bundle of joy close to their heart .



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ishanita thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey Liana its very nice and unique
must say swasanians are never short of ideas
loved it
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Short and sweet Lia!!
Loved it<3
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Liana dear..
I just simply loved ur version of snow white...swasan were best..u conceptulised the story remarkably...it was full entertaining...do write more..

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sweet os love the swara Sanskaar in this os
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Wow liana.. Wonderful os.. 👏
Loved it.
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This is just a perfect fairy tale liana darling... i loved it a lot... swasan ohh how perfectly matched ... show white and huntsman... mmmuah dear...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishanita

hey Liana its very nice and unique
must say swasanians are never short of ideas
loved it


thank u so so much ishanita for ur lovely comment 😳 really means a lot :))
-Liana- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks dr 😊
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Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Short and sweet Lia!!
Loved it<3


hey sakshi <3 thank u so much dr glad to knw u loved it means a lot 😳

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