SR FF :EP 7:'Prachi meets SanLak'. On Pg10. - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
😆 Sud.. This is awesome.. The way you write.. 👏 I enjoy reading your writing so much 😳


I'm now my guess is like DP, RP already have another brother and Prachi is that brother's daughter 😎 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Claptrap-

😆 Sud.. This is awesome.. The way you write.. 👏 I enjoy reading your writing so much 😳


I'm now my guess is like DP, RP already have another brother and Prachi is that brother's daughter 😎 🤣


That's really sweet of you Poorvi 🤗

I am so happy you are liking it 😃

And your guess 👏 Well.. You are really close..😉
You will get it know it in today's update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

SwaSan/RagLak FF..!!

Recap :

AP and Sujata find a piece a paper in an old Phonebook and get shocked. They tear the paper and throw in dustbin. Pari sees this and collects those torn pieces and starts fixing them.She finds the name BABU JI. Meanwhile, Swara and Ragini, on their trip to shopping in a car, almost hit a girl on the road. The girl says she is on her way to MM which surprises Swaragini.

Episode 5 : MahaEpisode..!!

Ragini and Swara gets surprised to hear that the girl wants to go to MM.

"Maheswari Mansion ??" Swara asks.

"Yes. That is my Bua's house." She informs.

[ Bua - Father's sister ]

"Okay. We will drop you there." Swara says.

"But that's our place too." Ragini whispers Swara.

"Yeah.. But what if there is another family with the same name in Kolkata ?" Swara asks.😕

"Don't be stupid Swara.. It cant be" ragini says.

"We will see ragini.. I don't remember AP and Sujata Mom having any brothers..." Swara says.

Ragini nods.

"I am glad our car didn't hit you." Swara says the girl.

"Get in please.." Ragini says.

"I hope I am not troubling you guys" the girl says.

"not at all.. Get in" Ragini opens the car door.

Ragini and the girl sit at the back seat , Swara starts the car.

MM :


Pari knees down and starts searching for the missing piece.

She finds the paper.

She reads out "Rachi"

She remembers to join P . PRACHI.


"The name is Prachi" Pari concludes and smiles wickedly.😈

*Yellow flashlight effect on her face*😆

"Who is this Prachi ? Babu ji ? " Pari wonders and starts walking towards her room.🤔

"Why AP and Sujata ma were so shocked to read these names ?? Who are they and how are they related to our house ?" Pari questions herself.

In Car..


"I didn't ask your name itself.." Ragini hits her head and gives an idiotic giggle.😆

"I am Prachi" The girl says.

"Nice name." Swara comments from front.

Prachi smiles.😊

"And you both ?" Prachi asks.

"I am Ragini and she is Swara" Ragini introduces.

The car stops.

Prachi sees out through the window.

"Yes. This is the house." Prachi exclaims and excitedly goes out.

Swara and Ragini gets shocked.😲

"The house hasn't changed a bit, even after four years." Prachi says looking at the house.

Swara and Ragini get down of the car.

The security opens the gate.

"Get the car inside madam" He says to Swara.

Prachi looks confused and turns to Swara.

"We too belong to this house." Swara informs Prachi.😉

"Really ?" Prachi asks smiling.

"Yes. She is Swara Sanskaar Maheswari." Ragini briefs.

Prachi gets shocked😲

*B&W effect*

"And I am Ragini Laksh Maheswari" Ragini says.

Prachi further gets shocked.😲😲

*B&W effect*

Swara notices Prachi standing like a statue.

"What happened ?" She asks.

Inside MM :

"Babu ji.." AP utters the name. She closes her eyes. Tears come out.

AP and Sujata are sitting in a room on the bed. AP goes nostalgic.

"Bhaiyaa... I still remember the way you broke all the relationship with us and went off.." AP wails.

*FlashBack Scene*


"Sanskaar Bhaag gaya ??" Babu ji shouts.😡

Prachi is standing behind Babu ji crying.

"He ran away to marry Kavita ?" Babuji fumes in anger.😡 "What about my girl then Anu ?".

AP is shown broken. DP's face is filled with anger and shame.

"I will not let the marriage happen.." DP promises.🤓

"Years and Years.. We have been planning to make Sanskaar and Prachi marry each other. Have you forgot the plans ?" Babu ji shouts at AP.

Sujata feels bad and looks down.

"hamara chora pata nahi kahan hain.." She cries.😭

*Flashback ends*

"He wanted Prachi to marry Sanskaar. And it was like planned when she was merely 10 years old." AP says to Sujata.😕

"I know jiji.. I remember everything.." Sujata sees the ceiling and acts like remembering the past.

"But when Sanskaar was assumed to be dead, everybody was heart broken... I remember what happened after that.."

*FlashBack*


Babuji is broken down thinking about Prachi and her future.

( Why worried for her future ? As if there is no other man in this world other than Sanskaar 😆)

Then AP and DP take a drastic decision by promising that Prachi will their Bahu by marrying Laksh.👏🤢

Babuji hesitates and then agrees. Prachi finds it hard to forget Sanskaar as she has been drooling over him since childhood.

But she realizes he is no more and decides to go with elders and accepts to marry Laksh.

Babuji decides to send her daughter to US to complete her studies.👍🏼

AP and DP vow that Laksh will be there to marry her when she returns to India after four years.

Laksh in a confused state, agrees to what the elders plan.😆

*FlashBack Ends*

"Jiji.. I am very scared... Both Sanskaar and Laksh are married now. What if they return ? What will we answer them ?" Sujata panics.😲

"I don't know Sujata.." AP says wiping her tears. " I haven't met Bhaiyaa for four years. Probably Prachi would have returned to India by now. No idea on their whereabouts now."

AP holds Sujata's hand.

"And I am scared to contact him too. What face will I show him ? I feel we have cheated him twice ." AP shares her opinion.

"We shouldn't have promised at all Jiji.." Sujata exclaims.🥱

Sujata gets up.

"Mein paani leke aata hoon jiji.." She says and comes out of the room.

Outside MM :


"Kya hua ?" Swara asks Prachi.

"Sanskaar... He is alive ?" She asks shocked.😲

Swara looks at Ragini confused.

"Oh.. You didnt knew that he is alive ? .."

Swara then understands that Prachi is visiting MM after years, so of course she must have not known about his come back.

"Yes Prachi. He is alive. He isn't dead." Swara informs her.

"Oh.." Prachi gasps.

She feels like her head starts to spin.

She holds Swara. "My head.."

"Prachi.. Tum teek ho ?" Ragini shrieks.

"Ragini, Get the water bottle from the car .. Quick !!" Swara orders and supports Prachi.

Ragini gives Prachi water.

"Sorry about that... Just felt little dizzy" Prachi says and drinks water.

"I am good now" She smiles and returns the bottle. Ragini keeps the bottle back in car.

"Sanskaar is alive ? And got married too !! And Laksh also got married to Ragini.." She thinks and stares at Ragini.

Prachi finds it hard to accept this truth.

Ragini notices Prachi staring her.

"Are you alright ?" Ragini asks.

Prachi feels disappointed. She remembers the promise AP and DP made about her marriage with Laksh.

"Everything changed in these 4 years !!" She utters.😒

"What ?" Swara asks.

Prachi regains her sense.

"Lets go in" She says and smiles.

Ragini says the security to get Prachi's bag inside.

Sujata comes out from the kitchen with the glass of water.

She notices Swara coming inside. Before she could say something, Swara speaks.

"Ma !! Look who has come to our house." Swara shows her hand towards the door.

Prachi enters the house along with Ragini.

Sujata gets shocked.😲😲


*B&W effect*

She drops the glass.

AP hears the glass sound and rushes out.

She gets more shocked to see Prachi.😲😲😲

*B&W effect*

Camera goes in circles around AP, Sujata and Prachi.

Swara feels odd to see AP and Sujata's reaction.

End.

Precap :

"How are you Bua ?" Prachi asks.

AP notices the anger, the hurt of getting betrayed in Prachi's eyes.

She starts to shiver. "T.. Tee.. Teek hun Prachi.." She gives out a fake smile.😔

"How are you choti bua ?" Prachi goes to Sujata.

Sujata just smiles and nods.

"I heard Laksh and Sanskaar got married.." Prachi says.😡

AP and Sujata just freeze.🥱


Swara and Ragini get suspicious seeing each one's face.😕


Note :

New Characters, Babu ji (Prachi's father) and Prachi :



Yes... 🤣 These are the new faces 😆😆


Edited by -Sud- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Thanks for the pm. The whole chapter was really awesome. Now I think prachi will become negative and join hands with pari. This is my imagination.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Baba re kya new entry di hai... hahaa... mast hai do update soon... 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
O my my.. Sud This is really awesome 🤣

Prachi was drooling over Sanskaar since childhood.. This line cracked me up 😆


4 years back.. Omg! I can imagine the young confused soul Laksh 😆 He had done many experiments in this relationship thing . Nothing worked . And finally he decided to cling over Ragini .. But destiny 😆


Prachi must still have love for Sanskaar in her heart 😳


It'll be fun when Babuji too enters MM.. And both gets a hold on MM brothers.. Prachi behind Sanskaar because she loves him.. And Babuji behind Laksh as Babuji didn't like the fact that Sanskaar ran away .. And these people have promised to him for Laksh being Prachi's husband 😆



I'm loving this FF Sud 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Epi... 4..
. Sud... Dear... Such a romantic update for me... Aww swasan... I loved how laksh disturbed them then said he won't disturb them... That thank you from Sanskaar... Lol

Ahhh I'm confused with the shock of ap..and suju...

Raglak... We're awesome that cute warning from rags not to skip bf his nod like a little boy... I think you're absorbing the characters soo much...

With love...

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Epi.. 4..
Prachi.?????? Waiting... Sud.. Going to read epi.. 5

With love...

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Epi.. 5
. Sud... Dear... The flash lights yellow one on their face... Face freezing black and white effects were awesome to imagine... The pic were adding additional information about expression... I'm liking it...

Prachi... Who is she very rages to know...

Pair typical villain... Babu ji...????

With love...

Kam...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Epi... 6
Sud.. Awesome... I loved the twist... You weaved in the story... Itachi was engaged to sans... But he eloped with Jacinta and assumed dead... Then laksh engaged to her... Now both the brothers are married... I hope she'll crest a rift between couple... I loved the facts... That she drooled Sanskaar from childhood... And he is not only the man in this world... He only meant for swara... Lol...

Love you dear...

With love..

Kam...

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