Swasan FF - Agonized Love ( part 3 update)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guy's I'm going to write a new story on our beloved Swasan, but I have read many stories here in which my favourites are Angel, Dark knight, Gravity of love, and all others also.
I'm a very big Sanskar and V.K fan . I am also a fan of helly shah but just now I'm hating swara's character. I'm warning u all before hand that if u can't see swara wrong when she is wrong then don't read my story.

This story will start from the point when swara is accusing sanskar in MM on stairs. My story will be total different from the show from this point. Here sanskar will be total different from the show. There will be a lot of mysteries in this story.


Prologue

Sanskar is descending the stairs when he see that swara while descending down the stairs is about to slip. So, he rushes and catches her hand and pulls her towards himself. So, she doesn't fall. But swara pulls her hand from him and turns around him and slaps him hard. All MM wasis seeing this rushes forward and ragini moves towards swara and is about to say something when sanskar indicate her not to say anything.

Swara - " tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe chune ki " shouting on sanskar. " Mujhe ghin aati tumhare chune se, mainE kaha na main iss shaadi ko nahi maanti hoon. Aur tum jaise girre hue insaan ko to kabhi apna pati nahi manoongi. Tumhe sharam nahi aati pehle mujhe itni baar maarne ki koshish karne k baad bhi sab log k saamne Itna maasoom banne ki koshish kar rahe ho. Lekin main tumhara asli chehra jaanti hoon aur tumhara parda faash karke rahoongi. " Swara say this with hatred in her eyes and all others are shocked listening this.

Then swara moves towards ragini and say

Swara - " ragini tum sab meri baat par vishwas kyun nahi kar rahi ho. Ye tum sab logon ko bewkoof bana raha hai. Main to keh rahi hoon, ye ek bahaut girra hua insaan hai aur ek khooni hai. Tum meri baat par vishwas kyun nahi kar rahi ho. Ye sirf mere jism ko pana chahta hai isliye mujhse pyaar karne ka natak kar raha hai " Everyone is shocked listening all this. Sanskar is just standing their with a blank expression and hollow eyes. The little bit hope which used to shine and love for swara is vanish.

Ragini - Swarraa"shouting, and is about to say something when sanskar say

Sanskar - " laksh maine jo tumse file laane ko kaha tha, wo kaha hai "

Everyone is shocked including swara there is no emotion in his voice, and his eyes are dead. Like there is no life in them.Laksh who was also shocked till now come in his senses.

Laksh - " bhai wo study room mein hain "

Sanskar - " leke aao " Listening this laksh goes from there. After sometime he comes back with the file and hand it to sanskar.

Sanskar opens that file and after signing the file, gives it to swara.

Sanskar - " sign kar do " Swara glares at him. But she was also curious like others that what is there in the file. All other MM wasis was thinking ki what sanskar is doing that here swara is accusing him there he is asking about some file.

Swara open the file and is shocked, numb reading the file and all others are not able to get that why she is shocked.

Swara - " ye kya hai" glaring and little confused at him.

Sanskar - " DIVORCE PAPERS, maine sign kar diya hai, tum bhi kar do. Phir tum is anchhahe rishte se azaad hO. Aur apni life jaise chhaho waise jee sakti ho " All MM wasis are shocked listening this.

Swara signs the paper, afterall her wish is finally coming true . But she is confuse and she is feeling ache in her chest while signing those papers and seeing him like this. But she ignores it and after signing hand the file back to him.

Sanskar - " cograts, aaj se tum swara gadodia dubara ban gayi ho. "

Sanskar moves towards the family members and say

Sanskar - " Mom, main ye keh ne neeche aaraha tha ki meri flight hai 2 ghante mein. Main ek bahaut important deal k liye U.S.A jaa raha hoon."

Sujata - " theek hai, dhyaan se Jaana aur apna khyaal rakhna " saying this she moves towards her room. All are shocked listening this especially swara that Sujata doesn't speak a word. Ragini goes after her. Here sanskar goes up to take his bags.

Ragini sees Sujata sitting on the bed and a photo of sanskar in her which she is caressing. There is tears in her eyes and a sad smile on her face. Ragini goes near her and sat on the right side. She says

Ragini - " chachi ji, aap itni Jaldi himmat kaise haar sakti hai. " Tears were also falling from her eyes. "iss waqt aap k illawa koi nahi rok sakta sanskar ko. Please unhe rokiye.

Sujata - " kyun "

Ragini - " kyun ki sirf wo hi hain jo swara ki memories waapas la sakte hai. Aap chinta mat kijiye sab theek ho jaayega. "

Sujata - " ab bahaut der ho chuki hai. Ab Swara ki memories waapas aaye ya na aae mera puraana sanskar kabhi nahi aa payega " saying this she laughs there was no emotion in her laugh. Ragini was shocked listening this.

Here sanskar comes down and taking everyone blessings and hugging laksh, aadarsh and uttara moves outside without a single glance at swara.

Everyone wants to stop him but it's like they know that this is not their old sanskar and it's better not to mess with this sanskar. Swara is seeing him going and is little sad that he doesn't even glance at her and is feeling a dull ache in her heart but she ignores that.


So, end of this part. There will be a 1 year leap in the 1 Chapter. If you like the story then pls comments and like pls.



Index

prologue - page 1
Part 1 - page 3
part 2 - page 4
Part 3 - page 5
Edited by SanKadEviArNaV - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different storyline..
What Swara accused Sanskar of was really disgusting..
Sanskar would never have been able to take this..u showed his reaction after that accusion really well..let's see what's happens now..
Can't wait to read more..
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Poor sanskar...he is shattered and suffered a lot.
They signed the divorce papers
Sanskar kaise har mann sakta hai..
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing plotline, quite different from the show. I loved it, do update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome plot. I'll love to read more.
Honestly I really didn't like swara in this ML track. I so want sanskar to react like this in show. This swara is really irreteting.
Eager to read next chapter.
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept..
Different nd seems interesting..
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Wow great start and a nice concept...update soon and please pm me...
Raz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow superb start 👏
Please continue soon
Do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is great, i am literally tensed and worried as to what will happen next.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start dear...pls pm me the next chapter...

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