Finding sanskaar.... a swasan story epilogue up pg17 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Harshita dear...
Again part 2"was great...sooo actual story start now...finding sanskaar.. hope they found him...

Waiting for next

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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Heart touching one.
Swara's love for Sanskar was beautifully portrayed
What happened to Sanskar.hope he will come soon.
Thanks for the pm
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Part-3


Hi all thanks for the great response..so here is the new part. Well personally I never wanted to add a sahil angle in the story but some villians are necessary in a story.. so thanks for reading in advance.. hope you like the update n pls do leave ur comments below.. I am egar to know ur views..


Their car had just left the MM.. swara rested her head on ragini's shoulder.. laksh was driving the car when another car faster than theirs cut them n forced laksh to stop the car.. he was about to shout on the driver when shekhar and sharmishta came out of the car..
Sharmishta ran n opened the back door of the car n pulled swara out..
Shekhar - laksh bte tum ghar challo
L-ji Papa..
Sharmishta held swara's wrist tight n made her sit in their car forcefully.. swara tried to release herself from her mother's grip but failed...
They reached MM back sharmishta pulled Swara out n asked her to follow her in .. swara was continuously pleadings to her to leave her.. let her go but all in vain..
Sw-Maa pls aap kyun mujhe yanhan laying ho.. let me go
Sh- chup bilkul chup.. ek baat nahi Sunni h Teri chal mere saath..

On seeing swara back MF felt relieved as well as confused.. sharmishta made swara sit on the the sofa..
Swara almost numb sat there..
Sh-shona pagal ho gayi h tu.. kya karne ja rahi thi haan..
Sw-sanskaar ko ghar lane..
Sh- swara ..
Su- sharmishta ji aapko kese pata chala..
Sh-woh shayad ragini ka galti SE phone lag gaya tha ..
Su-hmm.. ab aap hi samjhao ya chori ko ki kam SE kam apna aur hone wale bache ka khayal rakhe...
Sharmishta again looked at her numb daughter n then she took both her hands in hers.. the next was a slap on swara's face.. this left the MF Stunned..
Sh- swara roo shona.. roo

She again slapped her

Sh-roo .. jabse Sanskaar gaya h tu royi nahi h ek bhi baar .. Rio shona .. ek bar role .. get ur heart out..

Swara was still numb with no response.. sharmishta could not slap her more.. she wanted swara to live for her child n forget about sanskaar..

Sh- dekho Na shekhar.. yeh kuch bolti nahi h..shona don't be a statue..
Sharmishta shaked her shoulders.. urged her to cry but swara didn't respond.. in the end swara simply got up n started moving out..

Shekhar- swara kanhan ja rahi ho beta..
Sw-sanskaar ko ghar lane
She again gave the same reply..
Sharmishta now broke down..
Sw-Maa wrote toh uske liye h Jo mara ho par mera Sanskaar woh zinda h,aur.mein usko ghar lake rahoongi...

Sh-swara! Bas kar bas.. bahut ho gaya h beta...
Sw- haan ma wahi toh kar rahi hoon.. ab bahut ho gaya h... ab mein sanskaar k saath hi wapas aaungi.. n that's my promise...

She again turned to go when her head spun... but somehow she managed to stand...n continued to move..

Raglak rushed to support her.. they made her sit in the car..

R-Maa aap tension mat lo swara aur uske bache ko kuch nahi hoga

L-haan maa Issi pehle ki woh kuch galat kar bethe humein use woh karne Dena chahiye Jo woh chahti h .. woh Sanskaar ko dhoondhna chahti h toh theek h let her try once... may be she will accept the truth soon n move on..

Sh- par woh kahin kudko aur Sanskaar aur apne bache ko..
R-Maa kuch nahi hoga .. kisi ko bhi.. mein aur laksh h uske saath..

Laksh again sat on the driver seat n started their journey all over again..

The MF n gf were all broken n tended due to swara's state .. but they decided to trust God n let him do what he wants...


There at sengupta mansion sahil was drinking alcohol n smiling idiotically and evilly while reading the local daily which stated that sanskaar Maheshwari is no more...

Sahil- swara ab tumhe mera hone SE koi nahi toh sakta.. dekho ab humare taste ka akhri kanta Sanskaar bhi nahi h..

He Then called his men who kept an eye on swara.. n came to know the whole story.. he this time lost his temper hearing she still believed he was alive.. n she was pregnant with his child... sahil in frustration broke the glass n drank from the bottle directly...

Sahil-nahi swara.. u r mine now.. aur yeh sanskaar.. hate jate sala apni Nissani chod gaya... but don't worry baby Na woh Na uski koi yaad mein tumhari life mein rehe donga.

Saying this alcohol over powered his senses n he fell down...



Laksh in b/w stopped at a clean caf he ordered milk for swara..
R-lo swara Dheere Dheere SE drink this milk..
Sw-ragini I am not hungry..
L-Bhai k liye peelo Na pls..

This was it swara agreed to it ...

SW - only for sanskaar..
Raglak - hmm.. good girl..

The 3 if them ... slowly left for.f further journey
.

Milne hai mujhse aayi
Phir jaane kyun tanhaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui
O.. khud se hai ya Khuda se
Iss pal meri ladaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui
O o...

Swara was at a position where nobody believed her n yet she had to continue..

Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot.te bante vishwaas ki
O.. Milne hai mujhse aayi
Phir jaane kyun tanhaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui

They had already reached the Billy area n were now moving closer to the manali .. only her believe in her love was responsible for her being here..

Jaane kyun main sochta hoon
Khaali sa main, ik raasta hoon
Tune mujhe kahin kho diya hai
Yaa main kahin khud laapata hoon
Aa dhoond le tu phir mujhe
Kasamein bhi doon toh kya tujhe...

While they were going through the mountainous region.. in b/w somewhere before manali swara got restless..


There In a hospital -
Intern- doc see patient is responding...

A patient is breathing fast...
Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot.te bante vishwaas ki
O.. Milne hai mujhse aayi..
Phir jaane kyun tanhaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui

Swara asked laksh to stop...when he did she immediately got out of the car n shouted his name..
Sa- sanskaar...
L- swara pls calm down...
But she felt he was here around.. ragini then said it was dark n they shouldn't stop like this...
Hence making her sit again back in the car n continued the journey...


Toota hua saaz hoon main
Khud se hi naaraz hoon main
Seene mein jo kahin pe dabi hai
Aisi koi aawaaz hoon main
Sun le mujhe tu bin kahe..
Kab tak khaamoshi dil sahe..

The heartbeats of the patient suddenly rises.. he was breathing u even n deep.. the doctor immediately switched on their requirements n tried to get him out but in vain...


Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot.te bante vishwaas ki (x2)
O milne hai mujhse aayi
Phir jaane kyun tanhaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui

As soon as raglak and swara crossed the place .. he again became a statue.. he stopped his sudden response...

Swra too felt normal after that.. her normal headache n bodyache due to journey which she was experiencing were back...

O Khud se hai ya Khuda se
Iss pal meri ladaai
Kis mod pe hai laayi aashiqui
O o ho...

The patient in the hospital was left with only few tear drops at the side of his cheeks...


Aashiqui baazi hai taash ki
Toot.te bante vishwaas ki

Will they meet... is it sanskaar... what will sahil do to them... or will they lose all they have....




Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
So emotional. Tumne toh rula dia😭 ab jaldi se sanky ko swara se milado. And haa thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Harshita amzing...
Twist is fab...im getting all curious what will happen next...update soon

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Aww yaar..awsum..loved it..n liked Swara's determination..its awsum..n m sure dat Patient is Sanskaar...plzz make their Confrontation asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
All three updates are amazing getting really curious with what will.happen next...
Update soon...

Raz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Swara searching for sanskar...
It was a emotional update.
But sahil's entry...i guess he tried kill sanskar.
The patient is sanskar.
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice Update.. 👍🏼

Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Verda_768

So emotional. Tumne toh rula dia😭 ab jaldi se sanky ko swara se milado. And haa thanks for pm

Aww so sorry for making u cry

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