Beautiful Scars SwaSan SS chapter 6 updated page 1 (16/10/05) - Page 11

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Hey Sakura,another beautiful update. You need not ask for hit ' like buttons ',you deserve it 😳I loved it as always. Waiting for the next update ----- Aparna 😊

Originally posted by: Anusha62

Hi sakura girl u nailed it,simply amazing swara's monologue though her mind accused him as murder,but her heart her eyes her soul feels he is familiar there lovely memories are not associated to her,but his care his gaze effect her..who think swara is rude to sanskar definitely they shuld read this chap..i loved it yaar update next part soon!!!!

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Saku😛🤗🤗

This is so much fun lady ..swara back in detective mode .I wonder what her plan was? sorry I am too excited with recollection of memories. I am not in mood to decode even if its mentioned ..In a kind of haze 😳 that lehenga scene .".choice achi hain tumhari" 😳 ,"achi nahi bahut achi hain tabhi tho tumhe pasand kiya "

phir swara getting hurt and sunny taking her in bridal style.😳I didnt ask you line was 😆😆 and swara called sahil Outsider ..he he🤣 ..uski jagah wahi par hain😆

sanskaar and ragini ka double agent game and swara walking right into it ..😆

The first eye lock ..so so loving it ..loved the first piece of cake😉 waiting for more. Hope you dont starve us for long😉

Love

Lucky

Originally posted by: BookWormV

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Hey Sakura,

Hi V😊

I have been grinning at the screen of my laptop from the moment Ragini said 'Prove it!'. Aww.. hell, this gonna be one fabulous SS.!

I was grinning away while typing it, it is so much fun to write about. 😃 I think both Ragini and Sanskar would work out this soon enough, detectivegiri is Swara's weakness, they just jabbed there.

Thank you for the amazing justification for Swara's actions towards Sanskaar. Any sane person who believes another to be a murderer - of one's own person, would definitely have hateful thoughts against the 'assumed murderer'. It is a natural reaction and you have explained that through Swara's thought proccess so well. (Although running away screaming murderer murderer is sooo not Swara Bose/Maheshwari's nature, and nor is hiding behind someone). I really love the little quips that you have put in. Swara's thought process is so adorably comic, like a child devising plans to steal a chocolate. Its is cute and utterly hilarious.😆 You are doing a fabulous job in the first person writing thingy.

I often see her in a innocent childish light. So I created the thought process that way. Glad you loved it. Uh, well, she needs to be clarified. I know she has a point in her behavior but that does not make it less irksome. So I had to give this much space for that aspect. You think I'm good at first person narrative? Thank you so much, I'm really very much alien to the context.

So Sanskaar and Ragini's plan is in motion, though Ragini hasn't been able to get herself included into this 'ingenious plan' of Swara's. Mr. Rockstar makes an appearance - are you planning to turn him into one of your absolutely amazing villains? or is he going to be a passing reference?

I don't think Ragini would be that successful. But she did score some small victories and she is in Swara's absolute confidence...which is what Sanskar wanted. As for Sahil, I am so fed up of him onscreen that I don't think I can think about him long enough top turn him in to a thrilling, chilling villain. He will be a passing by reference, with some impact full deeds under his name.

Well, isn't Ragini just the perfect in-between? She made Swara wear Sanskaar's gift. Sanskaar's choice is just fabulous. So I am a little confused - is Ragini really pregnant or is she faking it? Don't care about the show, in your story what's the scenario?

Ragini isn't really pregnant, but she is very much in love with Lakshya and vise versa. She is using this pregnancy card to get Swara inside MM, that's all as for now.

Btw,I really like this constant feeling of righteousness with respect to Sanskaar that you are showing in Swara's feelings, it brings out - the mind may forget but the heart never does.

I so wanted to turn it into a battle of head and heart for Swara. That way, it makes us remember constantly how she was in love with him once...and all those good times.

'I have a problem with the house architecture. There is no way you could go downstairs without flaunting yourself before the entire clan assembled at the foot of the stairs' - These two lines had me in splits🤣 All I can say is - so freaking true! hahaha...😆

I know. I really wonder who designed the Maheshwari house, surely not someone I want anywhere near when my own house is being designed😆

Swara trying her best to be inconspicuous regarding her grand plan, but Sanskaar is a master here. No way is he going to fall for whatever she has planned. At least I am hoping. (Fingers crossed).

He will fall and that will be the greatest backfire the plan can ever have. You'll see why in the next chapter.

What an eye lock! Sakura, a huge hug from me for this amazing eye lock. And then the amazing slip, fall and catch... my heart is thudding, dancing with all the joy in the world. It was perfection But ofcourse both are hurt in the process. *sigh* And that perfect bridal style lift and 'I didn't ask you'. I am in SwaSan land at the moment. 😆

Was it good? Thank you so much. Well for the first eye lock the scene had to be epic😳

Sakura, any inhibitions you have regarding your ability to write first person can be put to rest. I assure you. Also, thank you for the end author note cause that was the first thought in my head as soon as I completed reading, what was the plan? 😛

Thank you, thank, you thank you so much V! You really sent me to the heavens above ninth cloud with this comment, all my worries forgotten. Can't thank you enough.

All in all, a romantic, sweet, playful chapter. loved it to the core. Brilliant writing!

Love,

V❤️

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...

Sakura... wow! The first chapter is truly amazing. 🤗

Swara knows him and yet she doesn't. He is and he is not. Both at the same time. How painfully beautiful.

I love how you captured her dilemma so well.❤️

And Ragini, well she just knows exactly what would push her sister in the right direction. Give Swara something to prove and prove it she will. 😆

For me, one who has stopped watching the show because it simply kills me to see Sanskar in pain, this story is such a relief.

Him being happy just by her existence. How beautiful is it to love so deep. Pure unconditional love.

*sigh* this man has put my standards for men impossibly high.😆

And you've done him so much justice in this fic. Love is patient and kind and so he waits for her. I hair wish she remembers him soon. :)

I loved the update. You're amazing at writing I must say. Kudos

Thank you so mcuh for the pm. Update soon Haan, can't wait!!

All my love

Nandini

Originally posted by: BookWormV

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