Tera Rastaa Chhodoon Na: RagLak Post/Musical OS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys Guess what?
My holidays started..vaise toh kl school h but m thinking to take a leave..
Sachchi bataaun? This is our plan..we all r gonna be absent tomorrow..Arey yaar! Last day kaun jaata hai? Yeh main nhi mere friends kehte hain😆

Okay back to the post!!!

Haan, ek aur baat bataani hai 😛 I'll try to continue my FF/SS/TS/OS this break..

Okay is baar pakka back to the topic 😆

Laksh is such a gentleman!!! Till now, I was like..."GO TO HELL LAKSH!! WHY ARE U BEHIND YOUR BHABHIJAAN ALWAYS? "
Then, "LAKSH! U NONSENSE!!! WHO ARE YOU TO DITCH RAGINI??? SUCH A DOG LIKE YOU DON'T DESERVE HER ... GO TO HELL WITH YOUR BABY!!"
But now I'm "I HOPE I GET SOMEONE AS CARING AS LAKSH!! HE IS SO NICE...RAGINI IS LUCKY TO HAVE HIM"


N literally, they messed it up or we would hv got such a wonderful track..
As we were planning of RagLak-Tik track ..I would have loved if Laksh revealed kartik and his behena..n saved Ragini...but no one would listen to him..and on the marriage day of Rag-Tik, kartik also would ditch her and for her sake Laksh would have asked her to marry him..but she stayed quiet..n then said NO ..but dadimaa forced her and said say yes and Laksh like"no dadimaa, her life her decision" ..
Then the ppl esp women would taunt her.."she deserves this..n surely there is sm defect in her that's why everyone refuses her..first she ate up her mother and now her family's reputation. N now look at her..earlier she would hv played with Laksh n who knows that with kartik also she did.ehem ehem."
N this becomes irresistible for Laksh n he tightens his fist...n then punches the wall...
N then forcefully gets Ragini married to himself..

After their wedding, Ragini fulfilled every responsibility of hers but jz stopped speaking.. remained expressionless..stopped smiling..

N one day Ragini comes out of the bathroom with wet hair... Laksh sees her lying on his bed..she goes to the dressing table n wears sindur..

Then this song in bg..from laksh's side

(Meherbaani nahi tumhara pyar maanga hai
Tumhe manzoor hai tabhi to yaar manga hai
Ghairon ke dar se, tere sheher se
Hai kasam rishta todoon na)

He goes to her n himself fills her maang..

(Tera rastaa main chhodoon na.. -x4)

Ragini smiles n hugs him..n sings

(Agar ye hai nahi, to phir jaane pyar kya hai
Mere jeet hai tu, kise parvaah haar kya hai
Tera rasta chhodoon na..
Chhodoon naa main tera rasta chhodoon naa)

But he comes to his senses with a jerk..he is sitting on the bed itself. .he was dreaming man!!

Ragini starts going n Laksh is sitting on the bed..as she proceeds to go her foot slips on the mat..n Laksh runs n saves her by holding her with the waist and the wrist. N gets lost in her deep eyes..she recomposes herself and makes him unhold on her wrist n lifelessly says "thank you" and goes adding "coffee table par hai"..
He picks up the coffee mug and goes to the balcony window..
N sings

"Zindaa hoon lekin, wo baat nahi hai
Haathon mein teraa, jo haath nahi hai"

Then he wipes his tears n consoles himself determiningly singing

"Ishq ka hai naam bada
Maine hai kiya kaam bada
Kar ke magar aadha chhodoon na
Tere rukh se ye chehra modoon na

Tera rastaa main chhodoon na... -x4"

Then after getting ready he goes downstairs at the dining place as usual folding his sleeves..SwaRagiNita were serving the breakfast. .He sits on his chair n looks at Ragini but Ragini doesn't give him a single look.she serves him the breakfast and he sadly and silently eats it..
N then all the men start going for office. At the doorstep laksh's leg slips n he falls down hitting his head on the door..he got a minute injury on head..Ragini comes running to himhim..n looks at the injury.."aap theek toh hai na"..first time after their punar Vivaah she changed her expression..he smiles on that..she gets back her senses. N again starts going n he, in front of all, starts singing..

"Chaahat hai meri, kusoor nahi hai
Dil jazbati hai, majboor nahi hai
Sar ye bhale phoot gaya
Jism mera toot gaya
Khud se kiya waada todoon naa"

He comes in front of her n sings shaking his head
"Baandhun sehra, kafan odhoon naa

Tera rastaa main chhodun na... -x3"

(Tera rasta chhodoon na..
Chhodoon naa main tera rasta chhodoon naa

Tera rasta chhodun na..
Haan Tera rasta chhodun na..
Ho.. Tera rasta chhodun na
Tera rasta chhodun na
Chhodoon naa main tera rasta chhodoon naa)

And from here an 'yet untold' story would hv started..

I know it's stupid 😆

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wohradhahai thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guys
Don't judge it's stupid .
Jz made it out of frustration... n love for RagLak]
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Neha it's sooo nice...lovely dear 😃
I had always wanted such a track where ragini makes laksh suffer for sometime but alas cvs showed ragya Union in such a rush 😭
But would love to get a scene of raglak with laksh singing for his ragini😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: temishfan

Neha it's sooo nice...lovely dear😃

I had always wanted such a track where ragini makes laksh suffer for sometime but alas cvs showed ragya Union in such a rush😭
But would love to get a scene of raglak with laksh singing for his ragini😳


Thanx Ayu. .
Yes same here...
Me too was desperate for such a track..mtlb remember how numuch we all dreamt and discussed about smthng good for RagLak.. but don't know what is the problem with RagLak to themthem..😡
They forgot how much the trp rose at that time..


Anyway hoping for less and the best..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is Awsome 👏👏
What a scene ☺️
I wish the CVs show us this 😳😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Neha!!! It was awesome... I hope ki hume kuch aisa mila hota... But they rushed it... 😆 But anyways we have our very own over fertiled brain and our bery own couple RagLak... So why waiting . 😆
I loved your concept of expressing feelings through somgs 😃



I think you have on SS... It's not completed I think.. Where Ragini falls from the cliff and some banjaaran saves her.. They reach MM... She sings a song.. I think she gets an injury too.. Laksh dresses her injury... I don't remember the name of this SS.. I hope this work is yours ... 😆
Will you update this one in the future... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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naughty naughty, missing school i see 😆😉 just joking, this year i missed many lectures because i could not be bothered going hahaa

but love the post, and damnnn love the scene, would love to see it happen onscreen
us viewers would have loved it

xx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

This is Awsome👏👏

What a scene☺️
I wish the CVs show us this😳😳



Thnx anjale 😳
wohradhahai thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My pleasure Neha 😳

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