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Posted: 9 years ago
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Episode 1
In A village
A wooden door of a house opened by a man n he came inside ... 2 girls saw him n start hiding their books , pencils etc under sheets n settled their self ... man angrily looked at them n start scolding them
Man : wht r u doing girls ??? go to kitchen thats ur place
Then he screamed : sharmishtra ...
Shomi rushed towards him : ji sheakher
Sheakher : take them to kitchen ... Women r made for kitchen
An 8 years old girl was listening all that ... she was controlling her anger ... she tightly hold the sheet... she always became angry on this man... although he was her father but she hates him ...
Sheakher : where is my lion
Girl : he went to waste ur money
Shomi gave her an angry look
Sheakher : tell her to shut her mouth
Shomi : swara go to kitchen n check the tea ( the girl who was angry is non other than swara )
At that time a 13 years old boy entered n rushed towards sheakher
Boy : baba when u come
Sheakher became happy to saw him n caresses his hairs : my lion
He kisses her cheek... kavya n swara became sad to saw his partiality ... tears came i swaras eyes ... she angrily left
Swara n her sister kavya went towards the kitchen
In kitchen
Swara was angrily walking in kitchen n kavya was consoling her
Kavya : its ok swara its a custom of our village... dont hurt ur self
Swara : I hate all this wrong custom specially baba he always been partial towards rajat
Kavya : because he is a boy
Swara : so wht ????? U know wht di I hate this village its custom this atmosphere in which we cant even take breath without his permission... they dont even allow us to study ... because we r girl ... we r studying secretly
Kavya : swara tomorrow is ur test just concentrate on it
Swara : ohh han I forgot ... Im going to fields for study if any ask tell them that I went to meet preeti
She left
On Road
A 10 years old boy was coming back after spending jis holidays along with her father ... he was watching fields ... at that time he saw a girl who sitting in fields n studying ... he waved his hand ... n girl gave her a strange look ... he became sad ... girl felt pity she torn a paper n made a smiley face on paper n through that paper towards him ... he opened the paper n smiled to saw that ... he immediately turned back n looked at her ... his bus was going far ... they both gave smiled to each other n waved their hand
Swara : pagal
Boy : sweet n cute girl :-)
his bus was moving towards his destination... soon they reached there he was happy because after 10 days they were coming back ... he missed his mother n sister thats y they came back early without informing their family ... specially his mother he wanted to surprise her... after some time they reached at their house ... they entered inside ... its was deep silence there ... first he ran towards his sisters room ... there he saw her sister was sleeping came out because he dont want to spoil her sleep ... then he ran towards his mother room ... he entered in room n his excitement n smile vanished to see the scenario ... a women was making love with another man ... his father covered his eyes ... because she was his mother
Ram : sanskar go check uttara is she ok (yes the 10 years old boy was sanskar)
Sanskar slowly moved back ... he came out n hide behind the door
Ram went towards them n pulled sujata ... she got shock to saw him there
Sujata : wht r u doing here ... I mean u have to come after 2 days na
Ram : so thats y u did not joined us in trip
Sujata : so finally u got to know Im happy
Ram : y u cheated mme
Sujata : because Im tiered of u... I dont love u it was a force marriage ... I always love arjun
Sanskar who was listening there conversation widened his eyes... then ram slapped her
Sujata screamed in anger : how dare to slap me ... now will not leave here sign the divorce paper Im going with arjun
Ram fell down on her knees n she throw divorce papers on him she start packing her bags ... sanskar ran towards her
Sanskar : no plzzz mama dont leave us ... how will we survive without u
Sujata jerked her : I cant live with ur father ... u too can come with me ...
Sanskar moved back in shock ... he turned n saw lifeless ram on floor her rushed towards him
Sanskar : baba dont cry I will not live u baba look at me
Ram stared him... then he signed the papers n went out
In Hall
Sanskar n ram sat sitting on couch ... sujata came out along with her luggage n uttara ... before leaving she turned back
Sujata : sanskar r u sure u want to live with him????
Sanskar nodes in yes n tightly hold rams hand
After two days
Ram became weak after this incident n lost his hope to live... sanskar was taking care of him but he dont want to be normal
Ram lye on bed ... n sanskar was sitting beside him
Sanskar : baba r u ok???
Ram : yes beta still alive
Sanskar : dont say that I need u wht shall I do without u
Ram : beta beta listen to me carefully ... do not trust any women in ur life ... all womens r cheater dont trust them ... dont love them... they will leave u one day ... its was the last word he listen 4rom him... after that he died
13 years later
A 23rd years old boy was sitting in his room n was remembering his past ...when his father said that words to him ... at that time he did not know the meaning of that words but now he got know ... thats y he hate girls ... he hate her mother ... he has nothing in his life ... the only one thing he has his sister uttara she was his life ... he was living for her ... n one more thing gave her happiness ... he got up 4rom bed n went towards his cupboard ... he opened his cupboard... n took out a box ... he opened the box n a messy papers in it ... it was the same paper ... a smile came on his face when he saw that smiley on paper ... he remember the smile of that cute girl
At village
It was a wedding ceremony going on in a house ... a girl was walking restless in her room
Kavya : Im telling u na shona just go ... ur dreams r waiting for u
Swara : but di today is ur wedding how can I leave u in ur most special day
Kavya : swara wht about ur career n ur dreams dont became sad ... still half hour is remaining go give ur exam ... today is ur last exam ... go n give
Swara : n if any body got know about it then
Kavya : I will handle it
Swara : thank u di
She was about to go kavya stopped her
Kavya : swara ur abaya ... cover ur face
Swara : thank u
N she left for her exam... she was passing the fields by covering her face ... at that time she collied with some one ... n she start scolding him
Swara : ru blind ... cant u see
The boy Got mesmerize to saw her ... she wore blue shalwar suit n her straight hairs were flying in air ...
Boy : Im sorry
Swara : sorry ke bache go n check ur eyes
She again covered her self n ran towards her college
After two hours she came back n again collied with the same boy
Swara : r u blind...then she recognize him ... u wht r u doing here at my house
Boy : hi Im barun ...
Swara : so wht
At that time sheakher came there
Sheakher : where u gone
Swara : I went to take my shoes 4rom preetis house
Sheakher : stupid girl go inside
She went inside n joined the wedding...
kavya went to her in-laws after wedding n swara starting helping her mother
In City
While sanskar was working in his house he received a call
Sansakar : hello my sweetu
Uttara : hi bhai ... r u coming na do u remember we have to go for shopping ... because after 2 months u r going to a village ... n in these two months u have attend ur boring meeting ... by the way bhai u know in ur age boys went on dates n u r attending meetings
Sanskar : shut up uttara I hate girls
Uttara : bhai u hate me :-(
Sanskar : u r the only girl whom I love
Uttara : thank u n ur my ideal :-) ... now come Im waiting
after some time sanskar reached there to pick her ... he entered in mention ... while he entered sujata became happy to see her ... he rushed towards him
Sujata : beta finally u comes I missed u
Sanskar signaled her to stop there : I dont come for u ... I come here for my sis
At that time uttara comes there ...
Uttara : bhai u came lets go
Sanskar : come my boy
They left her crying
After 2 months
In village
It was swaras result day n she got first position in her exams ... sheakher was passing the street everyone start greeting him..., he became tens because he does not know y they r greeting him
A man : sheakher sir congratulation
Sheakher : y u r congratulating me?????
Man : because ur daughter got first position in exams ... sheakher fumes in anger n rushed towards his house ... he entered i house screamed : swara ... swara
Shomi : wht happened sheakher ????
Sheakher : let me ask u first he hold her hairs
Sheakher : how dare she can do that
Shomi cried in pain : who??????
Sheakher : she has completed her graduation n u dont tell me ????
Shomi : trust me even I did not know about that
While he was beating shomi swara came there
Swara : stop its
Sheakher looked at her n slapped her : with whom permission u start ur studies ????
Swara : its my life I dont need any bodies permission
Sheakher : u r arguing with me ... with ur father?????
Swara : yes ... Im arguing with u
Sheakher : I will kill u
He beat her ... then took a deep breath : shomi next week is her wedding with barun
Swara : I will not marry any one
Sheakher : but I will make u marry
Swara : if u r challenging me then remember that Im ur daughter
Sheakher : its my bad luck
Swara : I will run 4rom here
Sheakher : then I will kill u with my own hands
He left 4rom there n swara was crying in pain... shomi consoled her
Swara : I will not marry any one
Shomi : swara u cant fight with the society all r same here
Swara : I will fight till my last breath ... Im a rebel ... I will not stop my protest ... god made me free ... n I will live an independent life will change this custom
Shomi hugged her n cried

In City
Sanskar was packing her bags ...n his bua ji (a servant who took care of him after his father he always respect her as his mother )
Sanskar : bua ji I will come back after 2 weeks
Bua ji : I missed u beta
Sanskar : me too ... ok packing is done tomorrow I will leave for village ... oh wait I forgot one thing
He took out that box n put it in his bag
Bua ji smiled to saw him : may u get that girl in ur life
Sanskar : ohh I hate girls
Bua ji : then y still kept that paper with u
Sanskar : u know wht bua ji she was so cute n her big shiny eyes were so deep ... n its give me peace n happiness thats y I still kept it with me
Bua ji : now go n sleep
Sanskar : haahha ok fine gud night
Bua ji left his room n he slept
Precap : swasan first meet n fight ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start...wow so much pain for sanky in the first part...
Cannot wait for first meet of swansan...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
waiting for swasan meeting & they fight😭
in log keya bena fight ke nehi mil sakhte😡😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Thanks for the pm. Nice update wow we will new shade of sanskaar that he hate woman. Eagerly waiting for swasan meeting . lets see how they fall for each other.i like rebel swara. Waiting for next update post it soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Thanks for the PM
Both the prologue n 1st part were awesome 😊
I must say u made a different sujata here 😆
But still I hate her..😡
N shekhar he is such a jerk here 😡
Well I think the story is going to be interesting as usual...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear..
Waiting for their meeting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
Sujata and shekhar are disgusting
Poor swasan
I hope sab ache se hojaye 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: raaz19

Awesome start...wow so much pain for sanky in the first part...

Cannot wait for first meet of swansan...


Thanx dear Im happy that u like it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: showrav24

nice update

waiting for swasan meeting & they fight😭
in log keya bena fight ke nehi mil sakhte😡😉


Thanx for liking 😊
N pehle fight hoti hai phir love shiru hota hai 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Verda_768

Thanks for the pm. Nice update wow we will new shade of sanskaar that he hate woman. Eagerly waiting for swasan meeting . lets see how they fall for each other.i like rebel swara. Waiting for next update post it soon.


Thanx alot verda 😊
N I think now ur confusion is clear right?????

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