Swasan ff Ishq Ibadat Episode 14 updated on page # 39

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Scene 1
A girl is running in a jungle in jungle ... she fell down n got hurt but she did not stop there she got up n start running again she have to save her life ... she was thinking 4rom whom she is saving her life ... her father ... her brother ... the one who was saviour of her life n her dignity ... y they want to kill her ... she stopped because she saw a man there she hide behind a tree... but when she turned she saw her brother before her... he hold her hairs pushed her down ... she screamed in pain
Scene 2
A man was coming with her 10 years old boy ... he entered in his house ... he then reached in his room ... he slightly open the door n was shock... a women was making love with a man... he stepped back ... that 10 years old boy gave support to him... he angrily rushed towards them n slapped the women
Man : how dare u
Women was shock ... she does not know how to react ... she immediately got up n screamed
Women : how dare u to slap me
Man : u cheated me
Women : because I dont want to live with u
Man fell down ... n that boy who were listening their conversation was totally heart broken
Scene 3
A boy entered in house he carried some books ... a girl was sitting on a couch n watching tv ... while he entered she off the tv n stood up
Boy : hello how was ur day????
Girl : boring
Boy : see I bring these books for u
Girl : y????
Boy : actually u r 4rom a village n no one attend school there so I thought to teach u
He sat beside her n open a book n start reading
Boy : see its A ...n A for girl interrupted
Girl : apple
Boy was shock
Girl : n thats B ... n B for ball
Boy : so u read this book already????
Girl : Im graduated ... I complete my graduation last month
Boy widened her eyes ... n gave a smile to her ... then he immediately stood up n rushed towards the room
Scene 4
A girl was shivering because she was scared ... n she has to be wht all happened with her in these 3 hours ... she look around all men was standing their ... they all were discussing about her life ... but no one allowed her to participate ... she was standing mum like a lifeless body
Man : we will not allow her to live here in our village
Boy : so wht I will take her with me away 4rom all of u
Man : with which relation han??????
Boy came near her n pulled her towards him ... he filled her mang ... she felt like someone gave her a new life ... she was just looking in his eyes
Boy : as her husband
Then he tied a mangalsutar around her neck
Boy : now she is all mine
Tears were falling down 4rom her eyes ... he wiped her tears n covered her with his blazer... then her put her duppata on her head ... hold her hand n moved towards his car
Scene 5
A boy entered in a mention ... a women waswaiting for him on door ... while entered she became happy
Women : my baby my child I was missing u finally u come
Boy jerked her : stay away I came here for my sister not for u
At that time a 15 years old girl ran towards him n hugged him
Girl : bhai u finally u come I was missing u
Boy : r u ready for the fun
Girl : always ready
Boy : then lets go :-)
n they left her crying ...
Scene 6
A man was beating a women ... 2 girls were trying to stop him but he did not stop... then a girl hold a stick n hit on mans head... het put his hand on his head n turned back
Man : u stupid girl I shall not leave u
Girl : dont dare to touch me Im not ur wife who will tolerate all this silently
Man rushed towards her n slapped her
Girl angrily looked at him : do u think I will stop my protest after this slap ... no Im a rebel ... n I will fight till my last breath
Hello guys its me hadi ali with a new ff...its a love story of two similar persons
Character
Swara : a sweet n simple girl of village who hates men
Sanskar : a youngest business tycoon who hates women
Sheakher : swaras father
Rajat : swaras brother
Kavya : swaras sister
Ram parsad : sanskars father
Sujata : sanskars mother
Uttarah : sanskars sister
Kavita : sanskars best friend n a senior employ in his office
N other character I will introduce in further parts
Plzz leave ur comments ... I will wait :-)
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Superb prologue 👏 and confusing too 😆
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Superb prologue 👏 and confusing too 😆


Thanx
N I will finish ur confusion 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice. But a bit confusing, sorry if i hurt u. And thank u for pm
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Originally posted by: sharif_lafungi

he'll mysterious...
I loved it...


Thanx 😊
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Originally posted by: Verda_768

Nice. But a bit confusing, sorry if i hurt u. And thank u for pm


No Im not hurt
N its just prologue u will definately enjoy the story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue nd cs.. 👍🏼
Update soon
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Interesting prologue nd cs.. 👍🏼
Update soon
Thanks for pm 😊


Thanx 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Hadiali,😊
Nice prologue and cs.👏 And confusing too.😆
Plzz update the 1st part and clear the confusions soon.😉
And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

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