Raglak Dark FF 'The Vampire's Mate' part 4 page 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
This is really interesting can't wait to read more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

This is getting so intriguing Shirisha !!

Reminds me a bit of Twilight !!

Tho why can't Sanskaar read her mind, I'm really curious to know !! Please do update soon !!



😃 lets find out why cant sanskaar read her mind!!

inspired from twilight only!!😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Amazing part...hot sizzling. .
Okay, don't laugh at me but I never watched twilight...(so what? Don't give me "WHAT?? ' expression) ..so I can't compare it with it..I do know a li'l about it...lol..
I think Ragini also has some hidden powers n may be she too doesn't know about that...
Curiosity is troubling me...
Continue soon



Thanx!!! Lets see if your guess is right or not!!

Stay tuned@!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: dewcute

Ooh!

What just happened?

I am solo curious to read the next part...

Continue soon



What do you think has happened?

Will continue ASAP😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: mansinarang95

omg shirisha 👏😳just read the prologue n first part..amzing epi..i really loved these kind of stories..vampire n human being remind me of twilight n pyaar ki yeh ek kahani..loved the concept..😳😳u r writing beautifully👏

continue soon..😉



Thank you Mannu!! Inspired from them only... 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: reshma4875

nice update...why sanskar cant read raginis mind...i think ragini has some hidden power ...ragu s also a vampire!!



Haha😆

Lets see if she is.. 😉

Thank you😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome concept. loved this bold ragini. i always want ragini in bold avatar. both laksha and sanskar are vampire waw so hot. loved the way both laksha and sanskar can read every mind with each other except ragini. i know its raglak story. but i want sanskar solumet i.e swara in story may be soon. wonderful interesting story. do continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: princess2791

awesome concept. loved this bold ragini. i always want ragini in bold avatar. both laksha and sanskar are vampire waw so hot. loved the way both laksha and sanskar can read every mind with each other except ragini. i know its raglak story. but i want sanskar solumet i.e swara in story may be soon. wonderful interesting story. do continue soon.



Thank you..

i will try.. lets see if Swara can be a part of this...

thanx... will update ASAP..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

PART 2

Ragini parked her car and marched directly to the cafeteria. She found Lakshya with Sanskaar as usual. She stood in front of them. Both of them looked at her confused. This time she didn't speak, just held Lakshya's wrist and dragged him with her. He was so much shocked that was unable to say anything. She went upstairs and pushed him inside an empty classroom.

"What the hell, Ragini?" Lakshya yelled after she locked the door.

"Exactly!" She yelled back. "What the hell, Lakshya? What are you up to? Why are you doing all this? In one hand, you care for me, and on the other run away from me? Why?"

"Listen, I don't care about you, understand? To hell with you! Just stay away from me, OK?"

He moved to leave when she tugged his wrist and dragged him.

"Get back here!" She had a stern voice. "You don't care, is it? Then why did you come to my room last day?"

Lakshya looked down to his feet as if suddenly finding something interesting with his shoes.

"Will you dare to speak?" Ragini asked crossing her arms near her chest.

"Listen.. I..." Lakshya stammered.

"Stop stammering, Lakshya!" Ragini said pissed off. "Why don't you just accept you like me?"

"It's nothing like that!" Lakshya said without thinking for a moment.

"It's nothing like that?" Ragini asked moving closer to him.

"No!" He whispered.

"Are you sure?" She asked caressing her fingers on his cheek.

"Stop it, Ragini." Lakshya said clenching his fist; controlling himself.

"I don't affect you?" She asked coming closer to his face.

She brought her lips closer to his but didn't kiss him. She wanted him to accept his feelings for her. Her hot breath filled his face. He closed his eyes to feel her. She moved her finger across his face, seducing him.

It was now out of tolerance. Lakshya couldn't control himself. He tugged her wrist and pinned her tiny figure against the wall. Ragini was taken aback by his sudden move. His finger trailed from her bare hand across her neck. His nose nuzzles at the crook of her neck. He pulled her thigh up to his hips and his hand moved thoroughly there. His nose moved from her neck to earlobes, nuzzling. Her fingers raked through his hair, pulling him closer. She threw her head back in a bliss enjoying his sweet torture.

Just then the bell rang and reality hit Lakshya. He pushed her and pulled back. Ragini looked at him confused.

"What happened?" She asked.

"I told you to stay away from me!" He burst out. "Why can't you just get such a little thing in your thick skull?"

"But I..."

"I am warning you, Ragini. Stop doing this type of childish things of seducing me!"

He went to unlock the door.

"What the hell do you think of yourself?"

Ragini's voice made him turn. She marched towards him and pulled his collar.

"I bet you, Mr. Lakshya Maheswari. You ARE falling for me." She pushed him and he crashed the wall. "And I am not going to leave you so easily!"

She combed her messed hair with her fingers and resized her dress before leaving the room.

...

The batch drove on for a study tour meanwhile. Lakshya, Ragini along with Sanskaar joined in. They all took on their notepad and pencil with them. They reached a castle which seemed to be 100 years old. Everyone was excited. No one cared what others are doing. They went in their own world. Except Lakshya, who was observing only Ragini. Her each word, echoed in his ears as a playing drum. All of a sudden, he lost her glimpse. She was nowhere to be seen.

Ragini lost her way. She reached to a cave like place in the castle. Fear started taking over her. Tears searched way from her eyes to come out. Suddenly she felt someone behind and turned.

To be continued...

So,

#HOW WAS THE CHAPPY?

#DO YOU THINK RAGINI WILL SUCCEED IN MAKING LAKSHYA ACCEPT HIS FEELINGS?

#WHAT WILL RAGINI DO NOW?

#WHAT WILL LAKSHYA DO?

#WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT?

KEEP GUESSING!

love,

Shirisha😊

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Wow hot update I cannot to read the next update hope you post it soon

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